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AngelTeen IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 01 November 2013 at 12:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Farwa_Ibrahim-

comment on chapter 21

Aweee Such a sweet chapter it is.!
She slapped him in a fit of anger
because she was too furious on him
tht he again decided it all n wht people
usually do in red hot anger knock their
senses out... but when the reflexive
action was done senses came back
she was surprised n hurtfor slapping
her Arnav ji for hurting him... Aweee
finally she wept the tears tht were in
check for long enough n after this rain
a day will come with happiness n love
for these two loved da update
'

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Posted: 01 November 2013 at 9:30am | IP Logged
Happy Diwali, ladoos and jalebis can be fattening,  can we get a teaser to satisfy us instead please ? ;-))

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Posted: 01 November 2013 at 11:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aquagal

Chapter 22
The transformation came like a slow motion. Arnav was angry, natural like it has always been with Arnav. But for the first time he took a step back and noticed his mistakes, actually blunders. He knows that this single mistake of Khushi is nothing in comparison to all the wounds he has inflicted on her time and again. Also the fact that Khushi is ashamed of her one action when he never was only added to his guilt.
This moment of Arnav Singh Raizada down on his knees was a defining moment in their story. It marks the beginning of the appearance of a new man, Arnav, behind the mask of Arnav Singh Raizada. Loved it.

@Bold - Yes, it does...Arnav is a man being revealed all his follies and that should humble him...glad you like the process... :)

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Posted: 01 November 2013 at 11:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vrinda16

That was such a beautiful chapter Rae...there was everything in it...a glimpse of the ASR whom we n Khushi know of - by tht fury & anger he displayed in his eyes the moment he realised he had been slapped by someone & then the Arnav emerged from it who unlike the ASR had been, steered his mind to think abt the various wounds he had inflicted upon Khushi either physically or emotionally & made himself question if this slap was anything in comparison to those he inflicted upon her...and then we saw the changed Arnav as Khushi realised who accepted the slap & hung his head in shame for all he had done to her sitting b4 Khushi unable to meet her eyes
Tht was just bang on Rae...loved this chapter a lot

Thank You so much! :)

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Posted: 01 November 2013 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by A_BA

Chapter 22:

Arnav bowed down in front of Khushi, accepting that he belongs to her, accepting that he has wronged her and realizing that a simple sorry will not suffice in atoning for his sins is something that that I have always wanted to see and really wished the show would have made a redemption track as sincere his thoughts in this chapter.

So happy that he is thinking with his heart now and has allowed his heart to rule over his head! Only this way will he be able stay true to his feelings for Khushi!

The most important thing that came about from Arnav's unexpected reaction was that the decision over their relationship now rests with Khushi; she finally will have the say about what she wants in terms of a relationship. Really looking forward to what she will decide!

Thank You so much! Glad that the chapter resonated with you on what you wanted from the show and humbled that you like my effort :)

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Posted: 01 November 2013 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anonyasr

Very nicely done chapter. Liked this enlightening moment for Arnav. Beautifully written.

Thank You! :)

Glad you liked it :)
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Posted: 01 November 2013 at 11:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by srat

Happy Diwali, ladoos and jalebis can be fattening,  can we get a teaser to satisfy us instead please ? ;-))

Haha! Have you taken it upon yourself to use smart one liners to get me to give teasers?! ;) :p

Well...to be honest, I have been debating with myself whether this particular teaser is something I want to give at this time of festivity... 
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Posted: 01 November 2013 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
Hey If they work ;-)),  and I really do speak for the majority, I hope !!  Happy and Sad times precede each other in asli life ...

Edited by srat - 01 November 2013 at 12:32pm

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