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Roses & Thorns | Ch25 Pg1 (10/03) (Page 84)

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Posted: 31 October 2013 at 7:08am | IP Logged
nice update...Smile

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Posted: 31 October 2013 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by srat

The evolution of ASR, his one moment of pain from his wife, finally allowed him to understand the pain he inflicted upon her for so long. Khushi was ready to embrace his wrath again. They can spend the next few updates in this room as long as they emerge together to face their future. Loved it !

Haha! Thank You! I will make sure to tell them that but I doubt the rest of the readers would be so patient! :)

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Posted: 31 October 2013 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SS88

I'm so glad that he realized how much and how deeply he had hurt her. And then decided to accept it graciously. Khushi isn't the only one surprised. 

Thank You so much! The intention was to surprise people other than Khushi, so I am glad that I got the reaction from you. :)
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Posted: 31 October 2013 at 11:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Raila1014

Hey, that was really good.  I love how you described his instant reaction and his ensuing thoughts, connecting them to his own past actions when he had hurt her and she has done nothing.  His realization that his heart has finally own over his head was beautiful, because the head would be mad and retaliate but the heart taught him how cruel he had been and what he needed to do to win her back.  Even though there were no words spoken between the 2 in this chapter, there was lots of communication and understanding.  She realized that this man who did not strike back whether with angry words or physically holding her, is changed and changed for the better where she is concerned,  so the ball is back in her court now as to where they go.  She decides and that my dear is simply beautiful . . .

Thank You so much! Glad you liked the evolution in Arnav and the realization of this evolution in Khushi :)
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Posted: 31 October 2013 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Japonica

A beautiful, and moving update, AT. There's no doubt which slap hurt more- Khushi's slap or the one that his memory gave him!
Your description of his initial blind mad rage which changes to shame and acceptance was very powerful.

So now that the evidence of his acknowledgement of his guilt and his remorse is there for her to see, Khushi's love and generosity will be strong enough to see them through this. Hopefully, they will npw get to sorting the biggest bane in their lives- Shyam!

@Bold - Exactly what I wanted to portray. For Arnav, the recollection was supposed to divert his attention from the slap and his initial reaction to it and force him to reflect.

And yes, they do have Shyam to worry about but honestly I think Arnav and Khushi first need to sort their own problems before sorting anyone else's or at least acknowledge whatever it is between them in its problematic manifestations.

Thank You for your comment! :)
 


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Posted: 31 October 2013 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by janu6669

The tussle between heart and mind,where always for Asr  its mind,for a change it's heart this time.
He noticed that the discomfort and how hurt khushi was by her I deliberate act  even when she is justified, for all she has to undergo because of him.




Very well put. Thank You for your comment! :)
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Posted: 31 October 2013 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PixieFlame

Loved this chapter! 
The emotions Arnav goes through is described so perfectly!  :)
Eagerly waiting for the next one!

Thank You! :)
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Posted: 01 November 2013 at 12:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shr1234

Such a soulful chapter. 
Sometimes silent reaction of our loved ones to our folly hits us more than their angry tirade. A meek, disapproving look  telling us we are letting them down by our foolishness.  A meek, pitiable gesture is often powerful enough to douse a raging storm.
I am glad Arnav could feel it and could change himself. The tougher times had made him make himself the man he was but Khushi's love could change him. Or rather let his good side won. He is not a bad man at heart To change oneself, to make oneself see the sense is the toughest task, I'm happy Arnav achieved it. I think now he will be at piece whatever choice Khushi makes. Fantastic chapter as usual :)
PS: I liked the quotes, they are so apt.

@Bold - Glad you think so. Such words make me feel that the aim of the chapter has been fulfilled.

Thank You for your comment and wise insights! :)
 



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