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Roses & Thorns | Ch25 Pg1 (10/03) (Page 82)

SS88 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 October 2013 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
I'm so glad that he realized how much and how deeply he had hurt her. And then decided to accept it graciously. Khushi isn't the only one surprised. 

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Raila1014 Goldie

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Posted: 27 October 2013 at 4:29pm | IP Logged
Hey, that was really good.  I love how you described his instant reaction and his ensuing thoughts, connecting them to his own past actions when he had hurt her and she has done nothing.  His realization that his heart has finally own over his head was beautiful, because the head would be mad and retaliate but the heart taught him how cruel he had been and what he needed to do to win her back.  Even though there were no words spoken between the 2 in this chapter, there was lots of communication and understanding.  She realized that this man who did not strike back whether with angry words or physically holding her, is changed and changed for the better where she is concerned,  so the ball is back in her court now as to where they go.  She decides and that my dear is simply beautiful . . .

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Japonica IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 October 2013 at 5:28pm | IP Logged
A beautiful, and moving update, AT. There's no doubt which slap hurt more- Khushi's slap or the one that his memory gave him!
Your description of his initial blind mad rage which changes to shame and acceptance was very powerful.

So now that the evidence of his acknowledgement of his guilt and his remorse is there for her to see, Khushi's love and generosity will be strong enough to see them through this. Hopefully, they will npw get to sorting the biggest bane in their lives- Shyam!

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Janu75 Goldie

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Posted: 27 October 2013 at 5:51pm | IP Logged
The tussle between heart and mind,where always for Asr  its mind,for a change it's heart this time.
He noticed that the discomfort and how hurt khushi was by her I deliberate act  even when she is justified, for all she has to undergo because of him.

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PixieFlame Goldie

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Posted: 27 October 2013 at 8:37pm | IP Logged
Loved this chapter! 
The emotions Arnav goes through is described so perfectly!  :)
Eagerly waiting for the next one!

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shr1234 Senior Member

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Posted: 28 October 2013 at 12:35am | IP Logged
Such a soulful chapter. 
Sometimes silent reaction of our loved ones to our folly hits us more than their angry tirade. A meek, disapproving look  telling us we are letting them down by our foolishness.  A meek, pitiable gesture is often powerful enough to douse a raging storm.
I am glad Arnav could feel it and could change himself. The tougher times had made him make himself the man he was but Khushi's love could change him. Or rather let his good side won. He is not a bad man at heart To change oneself, to make oneself see the sense is the toughest task, I'm happy Arnav achieved it. I think now he will be at piece whatever choice Khushi makes. Fantastic chapter as usual :)
PS: I liked the quotes, they are so apt.

Edited by shr1234 - 28 October 2013 at 12:38am

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-Farwa_Ibrahim- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 October 2013 at 3:20am | IP Logged
comment on chapter 21

Aweee Such a sweet chapter it is.!
She slapped him in a fit of anger
because she was too furious on him
tht he again decided it all n wht people
usually do in red hot anger knock their
senses out... but when the reflexive
action was done senses came back
she was surprised n hurtfor slapping
her Arnav ji for hurting him... Aweee
finally she wept the tears tht were in
check for long enough n after this rain
a day will come with happiness n love
for these two loved da update

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aquagal IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 October 2013 at 10:00am | IP Logged
Chapter 22
The transformation came like a slow motion. Arnav was angry, natural like it has always been with Arnav. But for the first time he took a step back and noticed his mistakes, actually blunders. He knows that this single mistake of Khushi is nothing in comparison to all the wounds he has inflicted on her time and again. Also the fact that Khushi is ashamed of her one action when he never was only added to his guilt.
This moment of Arnav Singh Raizada down on his knees was a defining moment in their story. It marks the beginning of the appearance of a new man, Arnav, behind the mask of Arnav Singh Raizada. Loved it.

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