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Roses & Thorns | Ch25 Pg1 (10/03) (Page 81)

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Posted: 26 October 2013 at 3:01pm | IP Logged
just read chapter 21 on blog.
commented there.
srry didnt know that the update was posted.
oh my teaser, happy that i wont have to wait much for the next chapter, selfish i know but cant help.

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Posted: 27 October 2013 at 11:45am | IP Logged
Update!


Chapter 22 has been posted on Page 1 and on the blog (for address, see my profile - status bar).


Thank You so much for paying heed to the last note and giving me your feedback! It made me post this chapter with much more excitement and will help me write more, I am sure! So please do drop in your feedback, and I am not against constructive criticism either (I promise!), as it will surely help me write more and better! :)

Also, a special note to all those who commented on the teaser - I LOVE YOU ALL SO MUCH! Its so heartening to see how you all rally behind Khushi and more importantly against Arnav (or 'Mr. Raizada' as some of you like to refer to him as when he pisses you off! LOL!) in times like these! <3

For PMs - Follow the blog.*

*New readers - Hey guys! I guess you all get a little confused regarding the PM system for this story, well I dont PM for this story so if you want news related to the update, please follow the blog. :)

NEW INDEX

So I have made a new index which enlists all my work currently on IF.



PS - Please dont Res. I dont know why but unedited Res' make me really annoyed, so please dont Res and if you absolutely need to, then please edit it ASAP :p



Edited by AngelTeen - 27 October 2013 at 11:56am

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Posted: 27 October 2013 at 11:55am | IP Logged
I will come back with comments on 21 n 22 soon

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Posted: 27 October 2013 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
A heartbreaking chapter, if one looks at Arnav's retrospection. What I admire about this story the most is this gradual, slow paced change/ growth of a man's emotional mind frame. And everything that surges through his mind after the primal rage, couldn't have been written more perfectly. His gasp, I could hear it. I could see Arnav stagger back, thinking of what he had subjected Khushi too. Amazing work, as usual <3

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Posted: 27 October 2013 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
His anger and her reaction to it has been well written.

Loved his moment of realization. How he compared himself with her.

It's difficult to stand in someone else's footsteps and think but he did just that.

His actions and reactions are proof enough that he's a changed man now.

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Posted: 27 October 2013 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
Thank god Arnav didn't embarrass himself by retaliating and for the very first time actually took account of his own previous actions which totally destroyed Khushi's life and dreams, the shame she had to go through just bcz of his reckless behaviour and arrogance, and now that he understands the gravity of his actions may be he will start to try to earn Khushi's forgiveness and try to redeem himself by making Khushi his number one priority in life.

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Posted: 27 October 2013 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
wow beautiful.
they way you have written Arnav's feeling and thoughts just awesome.
I thought that I will laugh first for hi anger but then everything was just ok.
Now its all up to Khushi.


Edited by opsyellow - 27 October 2013 at 1:36pm

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Posted: 27 October 2013 at 1:39pm | IP Logged
The evolution of ASR, his one moment of pain from his wife, finally allowed him to understand the pain he inflicted upon her for so long. Khushi was ready to embrace his wrath again. They can spend the next few updates in this room as long as they emerge together to face their future. Loved it !

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