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Roses & Thorns | Ch25 Pg1 (10/03) (Page 73)

roshaan IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 20 October 2013 at 7:19am | IP Logged
update plzzz

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Posted: 20 October 2013 at 7:40am | IP Logged
I have started commenting on the blog itself from chapter 20!! :) 

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Posted: 20 October 2013 at 7:52am | IP Logged
Great chapter! 
Again. 

I really don't get how people can NOT comment on this story! 
Because it is one of the few well written stories on this forum! 

I am sorry, I can't give constructive comments, as I just read your story because I really like it.

I was never good at analysing anything :/

But I do try to comment as soon as I read a chapter! 

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Posted: 20 October 2013 at 7:52am | IP Logged
Thank you for updating. 

So many emotions were addressed in this chapter for Khushi and you wrote them so well that one felt they were the character Khushi. Her pain is raw and she is angry at life, the self pitying words spoken by Arnav and Arnav himself, who has this inane belief that he is judge, jury and excutor

She loves him deeply and his actions, words simply don't acknowledge that love. Whereas her love for him allows her to address her remorse instantly of her actions.
 It's not Khushi's anger that will punish Arnav, but he will punish himself by his own anger. 

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Posted: 20 October 2013 at 7:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PixieFlame

Great chapter! 
Again. 

I really don't get how people can NOT comment on this story! 
Because it is one of the few well written stories on this forum! 

I am sorry, I can't give constructive comments, as I just read your story because I really like it.

I was never good at analysing anything :/

But I do try to comment as soon as I read a chapter! 

Thank You so much for your comment and your kind words about the story! :)

And now that that is out of the way, dont be silly! You are a sincere reader and that is what counts! No one here, at least not me, is looking for every comment to be an analytical one! I have always said that each and every type of comment is more than welcome and its the sincerity of the readers that counts in my book and you score high there! So THANK YOU for that! :)

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Posted: 20 October 2013 at 8:00am | IP Logged
Awesome update!!!!

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Posted: 20 October 2013 at 8:01am | IP Logged
Short but very impactful chapter, AT, as it lays bare the root of all the problems, Arnav's need to control every aspect of his life and yet again making decisions about her. Unfortunately this time he was doing it for her, to atone for exactly that very crime- of never considering her point of view! What an irony!

 Yet it was done very symapthetically giving us both the shock, horror and sorrow she felt at her actions and the whole set of events and causes that had led up to the action.

I hope the slap that has shocked them both equally, now jolts them into talking to each other and allow each other to show the love that lies underneath his action and her reaction.


Edited by Japonica - 20 October 2013 at 11:47am

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Posted: 20 October 2013 at 8:08am | IP Logged

khushi hurting as she hurt her Arnavji ,but she had to stand up to him

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