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Posted: 19 October 2013 at 5:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aquagal

Finally Khushi is venting out her feelings, serves him good. He can't take all the decisions concerning them himself - this marriage - forced or not - affects them both, connects them both. So they have an equal say in it specially her because he has once before taken all the decision regarding them himself, all alone without asking her anything but just ordering her around. This time it will change and it has to. If he is willing to give up a fight for her betterment , I'm sure Khushi will give him an equal fight for keeping what she wants.
For the note - I can only say I mostly drop comment here, though I'm following your blog too. So may be that (people like me who are following both on IF & blog) can be the reason for the difference of followers and comments.Confused

Very well written. I am glad you understood what Khushi was trying to get across in her thoughts. Lets see now how well she is able to get them across to Arnav.

Thank You so much! :)

And I am comparing the disparity between the followers and the number of feedback taking care to include both the blog and IF. Adding comments on both places still doesnt explain me the huge disparity.

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Posted: 19 October 2013 at 5:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by luv_panipuri

found this story and now i am hooked just after reading the prologue, i really want to read all the parts posted till now, please add me to your buddy list and your blog.

Thank You so much! Hope you like the story. :)

About adding you to a PM List, I dont have one. Readers need to follow the blog to get news regarding new updates. :)
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Posted: 19 October 2013 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
Zor ka jhatka hayee zorron se laga

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Posted: 19 October 2013 at 11:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -MeraBarun-

Zor ka jhatka hayee zorron se laga


Hahahahahaha! ;) :D
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Posted: 20 October 2013 at 3:11am | IP Logged
Update!


Chapter 21 has been posted on Page 1 and on the blog (for address, see my profile - status bar).


Very disappointed with response to the previous chapters. I have said time and again that by feedback I dont just mean praises or adulation, constructive criticism has always been most welcome.

Please note that your feedback is what motivates me to write more and better and if there is none of that, I cant really help but feel that you are not interested in reading my work and hence I would want to save both you and myself time and not post this story (which I really dont want to do).

For PMs - Follow the blog.*

*New readers - Hey guys! I guess you all get a little confused regarding the PM system for this story, well I dont PM for this story so if you want news related to the update, please follow the blog. :)

NEW INDEX

So I have made a new index which enlists all my work currently on IF.




*Edited cos I like an idiot edited out this comment while trying to post a new one about Chapter 22. Tried to get the essence of the previous note back here again, but the language is not the same, I am afraid.





Edited by AngelTeen - 27 October 2013 at 11:51am

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Posted: 20 October 2013 at 3:28am | IP Logged
I so so hate this helplessness...why at the end only his decision, his opinion, his perspective is the one which makes or breaks the deal?? Why even after taking our decisions, we women found solace only in the fact that we are supported in our decision, by him??


I dont know about male side of the coin, but for us, love truly means a life-long weakness of seeking acceptance. and how we love it!!

It was a short one Rae, I like to read your work too much, ek hi to story hai..but aapne bola hai to thik hai, I will patiently sit with my hands in my laps and keep my foot tapping!! Big smile

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Posted: 20 October 2013 at 3:59am | IP Logged
First of all, Wohoo! You updated on a Sunday. Thank you, Rae! Thank you so so so much :D

Secondly, Wohoo! Arnav finally got a tight slap on his face. Hah! Did that knock some sense into your thick head, Raizada? Though I'm sad that Khushi felt so bad after slapping him, it's killing her. Isn't it? :( 

This update was wonderful. The best thing was, no it was not the slap, it was Khushi's knowledge about Arnav. She knows each and every thing about this man. She knows the reason behind his actions, she knows when and how he'll react to a situation, she knows why he tends to take decisions for others, she knows how he'd make things alright..she knows every damn thing. Kudos to you, Rae, for making me realize that Khushi understands Arnav much more than he understands himself.

I hated, hated it when Khushi felt bad after slapping Arnav. I thought she'd be relieved after venting out her anger but sadly that didn't happen. Though I'm totally satisfied with her reasons of feeling bad about it. But I'm still happy that, just once, she reacted impulsively rather than making a thoughtful move. 

I hope Arnav will atleast try and understand that Khushi has an identity of her own. And she loves you, you idiot. Talk to her, discuss things with her before coming to a conclusion. Samjhe Arnav?

P.S.- AR waala part kahaan hai? Cheating karti ho? Hmph! :/ :P

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Posted: 20 October 2013 at 4:57am | IP Logged
how does one talk about perfection. the way u express the protagonists feeling sis beyond words. i know u may be disappointed at the response  but trust me nothing we can say to improve what uve written brilliant all the way

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