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Roses & Thorns | Ch25 Pg1 (10/03) (Page 68)

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Posted: 16 October 2013 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
chapter 4,5
It was so touching and really  concerned for khushi.

"Wo sab kuch alg karte hai" true,one can is like arnav.

And waiting for arnav to come into this world back!

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Posted: 16 October 2013 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
chapter 7
"...knowing that if she sat down next to him she would have to get up soon when the family trickled in and then maybe she wouldn't get this cosy spot or be brave enough to ask for it, so she stood there next to him "...    I loved these lines
aww poor arnav want to just make sure he is not dreaming ...so true 

And a proud Arnav in love..

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Posted: 16 October 2013 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
Oop! Hmm, yeah it's called a TEASER! But I was dying to see his reaction ;)

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Posted: 16 October 2013 at 3:25pm | IP Logged
Just love the way you characterized Khushi's thought, and you summed it up great, Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada saw red!!

When will this foolish man, one that is apologizing for mistreating her and falling for the giant misunderstanding understand that he can't make all the decisions? He took away her consent by blackmailing to marry him once, and now he's made the decision to "set her free."

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Posted: 16 October 2013 at 4:58pm | IP Logged
Wow this is an amazing and mind blowing story, 

I have just read all the chapters and each update has been a wonderful read, 

I love any story that is based on the redemption track and yours fits perfectly, 

Honestly you are an amazing writer and this story has been written exceptionally well,

You wrote down khushi's emotions, feelings, pain and anguish whilst Arnav was in hospital perfectly and her character being so strong was portrayed beautifully. 

I'm so glad Arnav has started to feel guilty and regretting his hurtful and cruel behaviour towards Khushi in the past, it's going to take time but I hope he does win back her love and trust soon. 

The part where Khushi broke down and cried was so sad and emotional, so glad the moment also bought tears in Arnav's eyes.

I'm assuming pari is Anjali and Abhimanyu was the guy that loved her, I'm loving him he seems like a sweet man and such a gentlemen. 

So glad Shyam is getting the punishment he deserves, he needs to be tortured. 

I'm so excited to read this story further and can't wait to read how it unfolds, 

The teaser looks very interesting and intriguing Khushi slapping Arnav, can't wait to read the next update.

Please continue soon, eagerly waiting. 

Please can you PM me when you update next part xx 


Edited by P4rveen12 - 16 October 2013 at 4:57pm

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Posted: 16 October 2013 at 8:31pm | IP Logged
Aila ... thappad pada ASR ko !Shocked Good better late than never !LOL

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Posted: 16 October 2013 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
loved the teaser Thumbs Up
i like the character Abhimanyu
waiting for more :)

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Posted: 17 October 2013 at 4:56am | IP Logged
finally caught up with all updates.
Arnav 's thanks,for every thing is  well understood by khushi .

Nk has been a big support to khushi and his friendship is valved equally by Khushi.

I am hooked to Abhimanyu  and eagerly awaits for their story to unfold.

The night in their bedroom and the morning after are penned beautifully and these are heart touching moments when he kisses her, finding solace in each others arms .

Tucking the hair strand ,lingering to each others touch ,...

Arnav freeing khushi  even though it would break his heart...
and making the decision for both of them...


and Khushi getting furiousover arnav's thought  that she would live in Arnav free world happily...



and that teaser..

tada...khushi's tappad 




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