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Roses & Thorns | Ch25 Pg1 (10/03) (Page 65)

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Posted: 16 October 2013 at 12:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by A_BA

Chapter 20:

Just love the way you characterized Khushi's thought, and you summed it up great, Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada saw red!!

When will this foolish man, one that is apologizing for mistreating her and falling for the giant misunderstanding understand that he can't make all the decisions? He took away her consent by blackmailing to marry him once, and now he's made the decision to "set her free."

When Arnav says that he's letting her go and that saying sorry isn't enough, it's almost as if he has given up. He has lost the confidence to be able to admit that he's sorry but that he will go to any extent to apologize, to win her trust back, to make her love him. He's obviously not willing to go all out right now, he can't even say he loves her!!!

So I kept thinking that Abhimanyu's Pari is Anjali...but then why would his parent's dislike her if it really is Anjali...I mean she's the holier than thou, perfect daughter in-law material, no?? Whatever the case, hope that he gets some relief in his life...living such a hollow life does not sound pleasant.

Arnav is, as you say, a foolish man and as I have replied to the comment above yours, he is firm follower of the adage - Two wrongs make a right - but maybe this time there is someone to tell him exactly how flawed this is...lets see. :)

Thank You for your comment! :)

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Posted: 16 October 2013 at 12:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by slakhani

hey, nice update. I thought Arnav's the king of brooding emotions but here your Abhimanu is catching up very fast and very interestingly. I'm loving this character very much. Continue soon.
Thank you for a lovely chapter:)

Haha! Abhimanyu is fast gaining fans, eh? Nice! ;) :D

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Posted: 16 October 2013 at 12:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mistyrains

How nice must it be for Khushi to be woken up by a bedhead Arnav!? *sigh*
Anyhow, the opening lines were beautiful! They made me feel like I was having a nice cup of creamy coffee whilst watching one old romantic classic. Made me all happy and warm, till the man started speaking. Arnav crying, Arnav vulnerable or Arnav apologizing, especially when its Khushi in question, we call all trust you to do a perfect job, writing tear-jerking dialogues to brilliance. 

Then Abhimanyu, this character has a very intriguing, haunting charm to him [I have a feeling that was intended ]. Hours after I have red the chapter, I might still be thinking of him, his actions, that's what this man and his relationship with Pari does.


Secondly, to all the people not reading this wonderful story, I feel sorry for them. Even more sorry for that clique , who read but don't drop in a word or two of appreciation. 




Thank You so much, Sona! Getting praise of writing emotional tear-jerking stuff is truly humbling considering you write that so well yourself :)

And yes, Abhimanyu's character's brooding charm has always been my intention...I envisioned him as a man in the shadows you cant help but be drawn too...and I am so glad that that brief seem to be getting through to the readers :)

And about the last part...nothing to say, man.

Thank You for your comment and for your support! :)
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Posted: 16 October 2013 at 6:23am | IP Logged
A very well deserved slap, cant wait for the next chapter.

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Posted: 16 October 2013 at 6:29am | IP Logged
Thank you for posting!
 

Hope that slap makes Arnav realize its not about him all the time.  Marriage is between two people.

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Slap to a dazed asr...hah...

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Loved the teaser, can you please pm me when you update!!!!

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