Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

Roses & Thorns | Ch25 Pg1 (10/03) (Page 63)

IronButterfly IF-Dazzler
IronButterfly
IronButterfly

Joined: 13 September 2012
Posts: 4192

Posted: 10 October 2013 at 2:48pm | IP Logged


The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

AngelTeenGirlabouttown

snoopy84 IF-Sizzlerz
snoopy84
snoopy84

Joined: 29 February 2012
Posts: 10180

Posted: 10 October 2013 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
awesome update

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

AngelTeen

anonyasr Goldie
anonyasr
anonyasr

Joined: 25 September 2012
Posts: 1019

Posted: 10 October 2013 at 11:07pm | IP Logged
Just read chapter 20. Interesting chapter especially lanticipating Khushi's wrath against Arnav.

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

AngelTeen

aquagal IF-Rockerz
aquagal
aquagal

Joined: 03 July 2012
Posts: 8588

Posted: 11 October 2013 at 12:22am | IP Logged
Chapter-20
I won't deny that whatever Arnav said was true. He loved & cared for her but still gave her pain and humiliated her whenever he could. But would sending her away from himself would be enough for all that he did? He needs to spend his life making up to her because he knows that she loves him and has always wished for his love. And by sending her away he would shatter her another dream when he can fulfill it. Her other dreams have already shattered and he just can't take away another hope & dream from her just because he is guilty. There are many ways to make up for his mistakes. Two wrongs won't make it right.
Khushi's anger is justifiable. She never got a say in relations that altered her life drastically and in his guilt conscious state he is doing it all over again. She needs to give an earful, may be it'll help Arnav understand.
Abhimanyu's parents were always against his & Pari's match. It looks like he lost her forever and the call he connected was from his parents.
I'm wondering how and when Anjali would come across the truth.


The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

AngelTeen

A_BA IF-Rockerz
A_BA
A_BA

Joined: 06 January 2013
Posts: 5231

Posted: 11 October 2013 at 9:38pm | IP Logged
Chapter 20:

Just love the way you characterized Khushi's thought, and you summed it up great, Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada saw red!!

When will this foolish man, one that is apologizing for mistreating her and falling for the giant misunderstanding understand that he can't make all the decisions? He took away her consent by blackmailing to marry him once, and now he's made the decision to "set her free."

When Arnav says that he's letting her go and that saying sorry isn't enough, it's almost as if he has given up. He has lost the confidence to be able to admit that he's sorry but that he will go to any extent to apologize, to win her trust back, to make her love him. He's obviously not willing to go all out right now, he can't even say he loves her!!!

So I kept thinking that Abhimanyu's Pari is Anjali...but then why would his parent's dislike her if it really is Anjali...I mean she's the holier than thou, perfect daughter in-law material, no?? Whatever the case, hope that he gets some relief in his life...living such a hollow life does not sound pleasant.

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

AngelTeen

slakhani Groupbie
slakhani
slakhani

Joined: 08 September 2012
Posts: 82

Posted: 12 October 2013 at 6:02am | IP Logged
hey, nice update. I thought Arnav's the king of brooding emotions but here your Abhimanu is catching up very fast and very interestingly. I'm loving this character very much. Continue soon.
Thank you for a lovely chapter:)

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

AngelTeen

P4rveen12 IF-Dazzler
P4rveen12
P4rveen12

Joined: 01 June 2012
Posts: 4644

Posted: 14 October 2013 at 7:09am | IP Logged
Sorry I forgot I had res'ed, I have left a comment on page 68 xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 16 October 2013 at 4:59pm
mistyrains IF-Dazzler
mistyrains
mistyrains

Joined: 27 January 2012
Posts: 2822

Posted: 14 October 2013 at 9:33am | IP Logged
How nice must it be for Khushi to be woken up by a bedhead Arnav!? *sigh*
Anyhow, the opening lines were beautiful! They made me feel like I was having a nice cup of creamy coffee whilst watching one old romantic classic. Made me all happy and warm, till the man started speaking. Arnav crying, Arnav vulnerable or Arnav apologizing, especially when its Khushi in question, we call all trust you to do a perfect job, writing tear-jerking dialogues to brilliance. 

Then Abhimanyu, this character has a very intriguing, haunting charm to him [I have a feeling that was intended ]. Hours after I have red the chapter, I might still be thinking of him, his actions, that's what this man and his relationship with Pari does.


Secondly, to all the people not reading this wonderful story, I feel sorry for them. Even more sorry for that clique , who read but don't drop in a word or two of appreciation. 



The following 3 member(s) liked the above post:

napkLadyRAngelTeen

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
ARHI~Vines With Thorns Th#Last~ EPILOGUE pg92

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 131 132

Author: -Zara-   Replies: 1048   Views: 109261

-Zara- 1048 109261 06 July 2015 at 4:11pm by janeysweets
FF: Intezar ke Pal-Kuch Kathe Kuch Meethe Not - Pg 76 Jul 3rd

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 78 79

Author: ForLoveofBarun   Replies: 627   Views: 45606

ForLoveofBarun 627 45606 21 May 2015 at 2:09pm by Oliver.Queen
Taarey FF-Love After Thorns *Part-1 Updated*

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 16 17

Author: --BabyBean--   Replies: 128   Views: 11088

--BabyBean-- 128 11088 04 April 2014 at 12:13pm by Muskan_TR
Bed Of Thorns - Promo (Arshi FF)

2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9

Author: Kesh123   Replies: 70   Views: 9236

Kesh123 70 9236 28 March 2014 at 6:19am by Kesh123
Arshi FF~Vines With Thorns~ Thread 1

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 127 128

Author: -Zara-   Replies: 1016   Views: 171046

-Zara- 1016 171046 13 February 2014 at 12:37pm by DirtyDancing

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index