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Roses & Thorns | Ch25 Pg1 (10/03) (Page 61)

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Posted: 11 October 2013 at 9:38pm | IP Logged
Chapter 20:

Just love the way you characterized Khushi's thought, and you summed it up great, Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada saw red!!

When will this foolish man, one that is apologizing for mistreating her and falling for the giant misunderstanding understand that he can't make all the decisions? He took away her consent by blackmailing to marry him once, and now he's made the decision to "set her free."

When Arnav says that he's letting her go and that saying sorry isn't enough, it's almost as if he has given up. He has lost the confidence to be able to admit that he's sorry but that he will go to any extent to apologize, to win her trust back, to make her love him. He's obviously not willing to go all out right now, he can't even say he loves her!!!

So I kept thinking that Abhimanyu's Pari is Anjali...but then why would his parent's dislike her if it really is Anjali...I mean she's the holier than thou, perfect daughter in-law material, no?? Whatever the case, hope that he gets some relief in his life...living such a hollow life does not sound pleasant.

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Posted: 12 October 2013 at 6:02am | IP Logged
hey, nice update. I thought Arnav's the king of brooding emotions but here your Abhimanu is catching up very fast and very interestingly. I'm loving this character very much. Continue soon.
Thank you for a lovely chapter:)

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Posted: 14 October 2013 at 7:09am | IP Logged
Sorry I forgot I had res'ed, I have left a comment on page 68 xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 16 October 2013 at 4:59pm
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Posted: 14 October 2013 at 9:33am | IP Logged
How nice must it be for Khushi to be woken up by a bedhead Arnav!? *sigh*
Anyhow, the opening lines were beautiful! They made me feel like I was having a nice cup of creamy coffee whilst watching one old romantic classic. Made me all happy and warm, till the man started speaking. Arnav crying, Arnav vulnerable or Arnav apologizing, especially when its Khushi in question, we call all trust you to do a perfect job, writing tear-jerking dialogues to brilliance. 

Then Abhimanyu, this character has a very intriguing, haunting charm to him [I have a feeling that was intended ]. Hours after I have red the chapter, I might still be thinking of him, his actions, that's what this man and his relationship with Pari does.


Secondly, to all the people not reading this wonderful story, I feel sorry for them. Even more sorry for that clique , who read but don't drop in a word or two of appreciation. 



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Posted: 15 October 2013 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by farheen75

Khushi should teach a lesson to mr Raizada which he never ever forgets that he can't control Khushi's life anymore, who the hell is he to tell her that whether she should live with him or not, let her decide what she wants to do and just accept the decision she makes for herself.

I like that the readers are on the same page as Khushi...Thank You for your comment! :)
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Posted: 15 October 2013 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dilectus

Ah!! The differences between the love of a man and that of a woman!!

True. If only Arnav understood this...

Raizada, you have formally organised a jumping-on-axe party for yourself. May god help you this time!!

LOL! Aage aage dekho hota hai kya! ;) :D

Abhimany tugs some strings, rather hidden strings in my heart...haye raam!! Kuch pichle janam ka mamla lagta hai!!

Haha! Abhimanyu ke kaafi fans lagte hain! ;) :D

But jokes apart, I entirely agree to that line which said that once love in your heart dies, it dies for everyone, at once. Can safely say- been there, done that!!

Sigh...hope you feel better soon...

Angel there is a little problem with title. Its confusing us readers with teaser of ch 20 on page 1, whereas its actually an update too. Embarrassed

Corrected that. Thanks. :)


Thank You for your comment! :)

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Posted: 15 October 2013 at 11:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by inajnar

The last two updates were beautiful Rae !!
The quote at the beginning of Chapter 19 was so apt and it got me thinking of another song ...Waqt ne kiya from Kagaz ke phool . I thought it resonates the anguish in the chapter .

Anjali's thoughts seemed turbulent ...almost as if she is pretending to be this devout and calm lady when all she wants to do is scream and rant.  The rest of the chapter ..the A and K part of it...which flows into Chapter 20 ...oh what can I say...Why O why didnt the show go this way...
The way A spells out his mind leaves you misty eyed...And what can I say about K...Will she be so furious that she will shake some sense into him or will she just walk away fuming..I will keep guessing until the next one is out...

Thank you for the mention in Chapter 19 and your response...and apologies for the late comment ...The culprits were a gone kaput Internet and a shattered phone .

I love that song...its so poignant...

Waqt ne kiya kya haseen sitam
Tum rahe na tum, hum rahe na hum...

Thank You! Glad you are liking the characterizations and the story so far! :)
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Posted: 16 October 2013 at 12:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by srat

Arnav has awoken a sleeping tigress in Khushi, by telling her his thoughts, but not asking her what she wants...and better be prepared for her answer.. .

I would think Arnav has never heard of the saying -

"draco dormiens nunquam titillandus"

Keep reading to know what happens next! ;) :D

Your teaser honestly made me believe Arnav was speaking to himself.. relieved that he was not...
 
Why does this man have the inane ability to just tell her he loves her and wants to start a new journey of life with her...
 
If she leaves, which she could have done when he was kidnapped... will either of them go through a day without thinking of the other..
 
One should not brood over past mistakes and failures as you will only fill your mind with grief, regret and depression. One should try not repeat them in the future.

Very well put. But do Arnav and Khushi or for that matter Abhimanyu understand this?

Abhimanyu's past breaks my heart, another broken soul in love...parents don't necessarily always know what is right for you..

Sigh. 


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