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Roses & Thorns | Ch25 Pg1 (10/03) (Page 60)

inajnar Goldie
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Posted: 10 October 2013 at 7:31am | IP Logged
The last two updates were beautiful Rae !!
The quote at the beginning of Chapter 19 was so apt and it got me thinking of another song ...Waqt ne kiya from Kagaz ke phool . I thought it resonates the anguish in the chapter .

Anjali's thoughts seemed turbulent ...almost as if she is pretending to be this devout and calm lady when all she wants to do is scream and rant.  The rest of the chapter ..the A and K part of it...which flows into Chapter 20 ...oh what can I say...Why O why didnt the show go this way...
The way A spells out his mind leaves you misty eyed...And what can I say about K...Will she be so furious that she will shake some sense into him or will she just walk away fuming..I will keep guessing until the next one is out...

Thank you for the mention in Chapter 19 and your response...and apologies for the late comment ...The culprits were a gone kaput Internet and a shattered phone .

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LadyR Goldie
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Posted: 10 October 2013 at 8:00am | IP Logged

Arnav has awoken a sleeping tigress in Khushi, by telling her his thoughts, but not asking her what she wants...and better be prepared for her answer.. .

Your teaser honestly made me believe Arnav was speaking to himself.. relieved that he was not...
 
Why does this man have the inane ability to just tell her he loves her and wants to start a new journey of life with her...
 
If she leaves, which she could have done when he was kidnapped... will either of them go through a day without thinking of the other..
 
One should not brood over past mistakes and failures as you will only fill your mind with grief, regret and depression. One should try not repeat them in the future.

Abhimanyu's past breaks my heart, another broken soul in love...parents don't necessarily always know what is right for you..

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 10 October 2013 at 8:01am | IP Logged
[QUOTE=AngelTeen]
Update!


Chapter 20 has been posted on Page 1 and on the blog (for address, see my profile - status bar).

I am deeply disappointed with the response to the story till now in terms of readers' feedback because I know a LOT of you are following but only a handful give comments. Please note that for me, its a give and take. If I dont think that you guys are interested in the story, I will not take out time to write it and post it here. 

I have said again and again that I am open to constructive criticism so its not like I expect each and every one of you to praise the story or me, not that vain yet, but I do expect a basic respect for the author and the story where you can drop in two words of feedback.
 


For PMs - Follow the blog.

Those who don't post comments now will be the first to complain if the author, rightfully, no longer updates . ;-/



Edited by srat - 10 October 2013 at 8:02am

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Posted: 10 October 2013 at 8:09am | IP Logged
Another beautiful update! :D 

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shr1234 Senior Member
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Posted: 10 October 2013 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
Beautiful chapter once again. I loved the chapter, loved the dedication and love and respect the man you have dedicated this to :)
I'm all eager to read of Arnav's reaction to Khushi's anger when she lets it out and also Abhi and Pari ki Kahaani :)

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IronButterfly IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 10 October 2013 at 2:48pm | IP Logged


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anonyasr Goldie
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Posted: 10 October 2013 at 11:07pm | IP Logged
Just read chapter 20. Interesting chapter especially lanticipating Khushi's wrath against Arnav.

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Posted: 11 October 2013 at 12:22am | IP Logged
Chapter-20
I won't deny that whatever Arnav said was true. He loved & cared for her but still gave her pain and humiliated her whenever he could. But would sending her away from himself would be enough for all that he did? He needs to spend his life making up to her because he knows that she loves him and has always wished for his love. And by sending her away he would shatter her another dream when he can fulfill it. Her other dreams have already shattered and he just can't take away another hope & dream from her just because he is guilty. There are many ways to make up for his mistakes. Two wrongs won't make it right.
Khushi's anger is justifiable. She never got a say in relations that altered her life drastically and in his guilt conscious state he is doing it all over again. She needs to give an earful, may be it'll help Arnav understand.
Abhimanyu's parents were always against his & Pari's match. It looks like he lost her forever and the call he connected was from his parents.
I'm wondering how and when Anjali would come across the truth.


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