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Roses & Thorns | Ch25 Pg1 (10/03) (Page 57)

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Posted: 02 October 2013 at 7:44pm | IP Logged
Poor Anjali, being robbed of her young adult life to take responsibility of a teenager.  She was not forced by anyone but her conscious made her protect and shield her younger sibling.  In doing so, she was not allowed to grieve for her parents or her broken relationship.  No wonder she jumped at the opportunity to be protected by either Arnav or Shyam.  She is a strong woman though.  She rebuilt her life once for the sake of her brother.  She will do it this time for herself.  Coming to the lovebirds, it was nice to wake up like that as quiet, peaceful moments give one a clear mind to put things in perspective: she realized she does not like to see him worried and he decided he needs to earn her forgiveness.  I don't think he will completely let go of his life.

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Posted: 03 October 2013 at 1:32am | IP Logged
Loved this chapter! 
Both Arnav and Anjali's emotions are expressed beautifully! :) 

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Posted: 05 October 2013 at 7:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Farwa_Ibrahim-

WHAT THE F*&^ was my reaction to Anjali's damn it lol liked the change pr yeh to ulat ho gya she stopped swearing after troubles found their way to her in real life iska ulta hota hai...
Now y does his smile evaporated. ... tht would b my question..
@ur reply to my ramanchi wala comnt thts an intelligent move Rae n thts y I said when u have chapter 19 to y not giving the teaser... lol

I am guessing that you wrote this before you saw that Chapter 19 had been posted...well I hope you liked it and that it answered all your questions! :)

Thank You! :)
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Posted: 05 October 2013 at 7:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mistyrains

The making of the woman Anjali is today obviously would have been borne out of dire, unusual consequences. No one could have written this part more perfectly - using the simple example of a swear word, you've brought out the evolution of the person she is today. But what makes me wonder is, how long will she be able to hold on to this facade of calm strength, how long before she looses all her carefully maneuvered composure. The Anjali part was my second favorite in this chapter thought.
The first had to be Arnav's stream of thoughts, spilling and over-spilling with love for Khushi. Its adorable, where he finally feels like K's Rajkumar, so wonderfully written. In fact that whole part made me sigh repeatedly! Beautiful, Rae - as always! 


Continue soon ;) 

Thank You so much, Sona! :)

So glad you liked it...specially the Anjali part! I was nervous about that one!! :)


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Posted: 05 October 2013 at 9:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by srat

It takes a lot of courage for a man to accept his faults and see them through his own eye.

However one should never be afraid to abandon the faults, I feel this is what Arnav is realizing and I hope he remains firm in this resolution, that he should let Khushi go if she wants to.
 
I loved how he viewed himself as a 'heel" !!

Look forward to teaser time, hopefully soon !!


@Bold - Very well put. And Thank You for being one of the few who recognize the fact that Arnav now needs to do things without him or his feelings towards someone being the center of all things, that someone too should have a say.

Thank You! :)
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Posted: 05 October 2013 at 9:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Japonica

Super update, AT.
Anjali beginning to reawake to who she was was moving. Hope her gods are with her when the terrible lie that her marriage has been is revealed to her.
Similarly Arnav awakening to the love he feels for Khushi and hers for him was very touching.
It was just his resolution to let her go that was frightening.
 
But I imagine Khushi will not let him make any decisions for her. Havign snatched him back from death, why will she allow him to let her go?Smile

Thank You for your comment! :)

And yep, this chapter was all about awakenings...but then again that may just be the predominant theme of this entire story, no?

And lets see what happens in Chapter 20! ;) :D

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Posted: 05 October 2013 at 11:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aquagal

Chapter-19
You've explained Anjali's character very beautifully and perfectly. Both Anjali and Arnav had grown up in a night's time for each other - one as a mother and other as a protective brother, both firm on their decision to protect each other from the harsh world which showed its ugly side to them during that difficult phase.
Both opted for a different way  - one became more gentle, more womanly and the brother became rude, harsh so that nobody affects him, nobody dares to come near to him/them. And still both lost their hearts. One received hurt and the other gave it to the one he loved. One incident and it changed them forever as individuals.
Arnav understood it quite easily that Khushi loves him too and has forgiven him for all his mistakes but the most difficult thing is to forgive our own self when we know it was all our mistake and due to which not only us but our loved one suffered too. But now he has decided to give her what she deserves, to fight for her happiness. My question would he fight alone for her or would she fight too for his happiness, for her happiness, for their happiness?
Brilliant update Rae.


Thank You so much! You have summarized Arnav and Anjali's character as shown in R&T till now very well! :)

@Bold - Thats the question, isnt it?
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Posted: 05 October 2013 at 11:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Farwa_Ibrahim-

oh Anjali's
recall of past
was soopo sad.
So true tht she
was the only
person to look
upto for Arnav n
she had to set
an example for
him not tht she
succeeded but
she did her part.
You choose so
apt wording n all
Rae Awesome.
Now tht was the
reason his smile
flatten coz he
remembered her
dreams n him
shattering them.
Awww True True
love makes u
sacrifice wht ur
brain n heart
says n wants for
the wants of ur
loved ones.
Awesome update
m waiting Rae
for chapter 20
fight it is fight
against the
world n
themselves.

Thank You so much! :)

Glad you liked the chapter.

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