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Roses & Thorns | Ch25 Pg1 (10/03) (Page 56)

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Posted: 02 October 2013 at 8:53am | IP Logged

It takes a lot of courage for a man to accept his faults and see them through his own eye.

However one should never be afraid to abandon the faults, I feel this is what Arnav is realizing and I hope he remains firm in this resolution, that he should let Khushi go if she wants to.
 
I loved how he viewed himself as a 'heel" !!

Look forward to teaser time, hopefully soon !!

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 02 October 2013 at 8:57am | IP Logged
Super update, AT.
Anjali beginning to reawake to who she was was moving. Hope her gods are with her when the terrible lie that her marriage has been is revealed to her.
Similarly Arnav awakening to the love he feels for Khushi and hers for him was very touching.
It was just his resolution to let her go that was frightening.
 
But I imagine Khushi will not let him make any decisions for her. Havign snatched him back from death, why will she allow him to let her go?Smile

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Posted: 02 October 2013 at 8:59am | IP Logged
Chapter-19
You've explained Anjali's character very beautifully and perfectly. Both Anjali and Arnav had grown up in a night's time for each other - one as a mother and other as a protective brother, both firm on their decision to protect each other from the harsh world which showed its ugly side to them during that difficult phase.
Both opted for a different way  - one became more gentle, more womanly and the brother became rude, harsh so that nobody affects him, nobody dares to come near to him/them. And still both lost their hearts. One received hurt and the other gave it to the one he loved. One incident and it changed them forever as individuals.
Arnav understood it quite easily that Khushi loves him too and has forgiven him for all his mistakes but the most difficult thing is to forgive our own self when we know it was all our mistake and due to which not only us but our loved one suffered too. But now he has decided to give her what she deserves, to fight for her happiness. My question would he fight alone for her or would she fight too for his happiness, for her happiness, for their happiness?
Brilliant update Rae.

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JaponicaAngelTeen

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Posted: 02 October 2013 at 9:05am | IP Logged
oh Anjali's
recall of past
was soopo sad.
So true tht she
was the only
person to look
upto for Arnav n
she had to set
an example for
him not tht she
succeeded but
she did her part.
You choose so
apt wording n all
Rae Awesome.
Now tht was the
reason his smile
flatten coz he
remembered her
dreams n him
shattering them.
Awww True True
love makes u
sacrifice wht ur
brain n heart
says n wants for
the wants of ur
loved ones.
Awesome update
m waiting Rae
for chapter 20
fight it is fight
against the
world n
themselves.

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JaponicaAngelTeen

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Posted: 02 October 2013 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Beautiful chapter. I don't know what else to say. For the first time, I saw the other side of the coin, I'm talking about Anjali here. Honestly, I always found it irritating when Anjali prayed to god day and night, cried at the drop of a hat, talked ever so sweetly to everybody, blindly trusted her husband etc. etc. but today when I read this update, I actually smacked myself for not looking at it through her eyes. She did all this for her brother, so that she can bring him up like his mother. And the credit for all this goes to you, Rae. Brilliant work there. 
Arnav and Khushi scene was beautiful. I liked the way these two, in their own way, are understanding each other and mann hi mann mein deciding to sacrifice everything for each other. Now that Arnav has realized that she loves him, I'm sure he's going to do every possible thing to gain her forgiveness. Though I'm still scared about the-fight for her against his own self- part. I hope he'll think and act, rather than the other way round.

I'm glad the quotes are back, they're lovely. And they add an extra essence to the story :) 

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Posted: 02 October 2013 at 12:33pm | IP Logged

Very beautiful Rae... I loved how to explained Anjali's feelings... something that was missed in the show... they always showed why Arnav was more angry but never showed why Anjali was so calm except for some brother-sister interactions... I'm glad you wrote it...

Arnav realized khushi loves him and has forgiven him... but its hard to forgive ones self even though you are forgiven... khushi being khushi had forgiven him already... you write so beautifully...

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Posted: 02 October 2013 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
So beautifully written! For the first time I read about how Anjali was affected by the ordeal she had to face. While we have seen how Di's broken marriage and the suicides changed Arnav, it was simply forgotten that it was Di's marriage first of all. You made me realise what she must have felt by changing from a pampered bride to the abandoned bride, an orphan and the sole anchor and a single parent to her younger brother all in one day! No one could have done it any better than this Rae! You made me see the enormous weight she had been carrying behind those numerous poojas and sometimes all too sweet and clingy behaviour. You put it so simply just by making her stop using swear words.
Also it's a new dawn in ArHi's relation. Arnav wants to change for a better person but he already is. It really takes a courageous and noble man to admit his mistakes and to want to be punished and repent for them. I'm so eager to read how you take this beautiful and delicate tale of ArHi and of course Anjali.
Superb update:)

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Posted: 02 October 2013 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
So Anjali had to give up her youth to take up other relationships which fate had forced her in.
A sister suddenly had to become a mother. Along this maybe many other relations.
She became what he needed. Her own needs took a back seat.

She's swearing after a long time. It's a small crack. It's a sign. 
It's time for her to come out of this second personality she has transformed herself into.
   

It was beautiful how he shaded her face from the sunlight. That's how he will protect her from all the harsh things in life.
She brings out the best in him.

Their story is simple, really. His khushi is her khushi. Him being sad, makes her sad. And vice versa.


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