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Roses & Thorns | Ch25 Pg1 (10/03) (Page 47)

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Posted: 27 September 2013 at 11:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kamtokdin

Beautiful...both hearts are breaking. I love the embrace, the intensity,the passion. The fact that they had embraced n hold on while sleeping seems to be more profound than if they had sex that night.

Thats very frankly put and exactly what I wanted to portray. Physical intimacy cannot always triumph over an emotional connection. Thank You for your comment! :)

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Posted: 28 September 2013 at 3:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by A_BA

Chapter 18:
The kiss and its aftermath was very beautifully written. It definitely was not the time for them take it any further, as there is a lot of history and pain that is associated with this relationship, and there needs to be healing first. But the first step to taking the leap was very nicely done. The kiss was a good first step, and them both pouring out their emotions during that embrace was also good! Again, there were only a few words spoken throughout the chapter, yet it was such a powerful chapter!

Thank You so much! Glad you liked the turn in the story :)
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Posted: 28 September 2013 at 4:01am | IP Logged
Dil mangay aik fresh new chapter!
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Posted: 28 September 2013 at 4:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by IronButterfly

Dil mangay aik fresh new chapter!

Abhi dil ko kuch karne ka dil nahin kar raha...maafi. :)
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Posted: 28 September 2013 at 7:26am | IP Logged
*ahem*

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Posted: 28 September 2013 at 7:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...Doctor...

*ahem*


Haha :)

Hi Arnav...and Alanki.
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Posted: 28 September 2013 at 7:31am | IP Logged
Hello!
Humnein (Me and Arnav) ne suna hai aap update nahi kar rahi hain. Kya yeh sach hai, Rae?

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Posted: 28 September 2013 at 7:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...Doctor...

Hello!
Humnein (Me and Arnav) ne suna hai aap update nahi kar rahi hain. Kya yeh sach hai, Rae?


Its a weekly update, Arnav, and you tell me if its been one week since the last update...

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