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Roses & Thorns | Ch25 Pg1 (10/03) (Page 45)

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Posted: 27 September 2013 at 9:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dilectus

It was the best reaction for both of them. Crying their hearts out. Crying the years worth of pain out. Crying the disappointment, the hurt, the confusion, and some more hurt...crying all of it out. May be now they will be able to make some space in their heart for hope, hope of a happy and baggage-free future.

You make me feel emotions through your words Rae. I adore your writing.

Thank You so much! I am humbled and grateful for your appreciation because as a writer, my aim is always to make my words pierce through the hearts of my readers and when you say you can feel the emotions, it makes me so happy :)

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Posted: 27 September 2013 at 9:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by farheen75

Very very beautifully written... The tormentor becomes the tormented, thank god he didn't try to kiss her properly bcz no matter how passionate the kiss might be its not the answer to their pbms.

@Bold - Exactly. 

Thank You so much for your comment! :)
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Posted: 27 September 2013 at 11:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kamtokdin

Beautiful...both hearts are breaking. I love the embrace, the intensity,the passion. The fact that they had embraced n hold on while sleeping seems to be more profound than if they had sex that night.

Thats very frankly put and exactly what I wanted to portray. Physical intimacy cannot always triumph over an emotional connection. Thank You for your comment! :)
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Posted: 28 September 2013 at 3:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by A_BA

Chapter 18:
The kiss and its aftermath was very beautifully written. It definitely was not the time for them take it any further, as there is a lot of history and pain that is associated with this relationship, and there needs to be healing first. But the first step to taking the leap was very nicely done. The kiss was a good first step, and them both pouring out their emotions during that embrace was also good! Again, there were only a few words spoken throughout the chapter, yet it was such a powerful chapter!

Thank You so much! Glad you liked the turn in the story :)
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Posted: 28 September 2013 at 4:01am | IP Logged
Dil mangay aik fresh new chapter!
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Posted: 28 September 2013 at 4:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by IronButterfly

Dil mangay aik fresh new chapter!

Abhi dil ko kuch karne ka dil nahin kar raha...maafi. :)
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Posted: 28 September 2013 at 7:26am | IP Logged
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Posted: 28 September 2013 at 7:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...Doctor...

*ahem*


Haha :)

Hi Arnav...and Alanki.

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