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Roses & Thorns | Ch25 Pg1 (10/03) (Page 44)

avika_ShArMa Senior Member
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Posted: 25 September 2013 at 10:08am | IP Logged
lovely chapter! Day Dreaming

your description of the 'sensational' kiss was amazing, as i said i love your narration! :)
it was emotional too watching a wife and her husband supporting and consoling each other. they have been going through really tough times and i just want them to see and feel happiness soon!

looking forward to 19! Smile


oh! i forgot. the pic of shyam in your cast list looks funny, and i like it. lol :P :P

Edited by avika_ShArMa - 25 September 2013 at 10:12am

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Posted: 25 September 2013 at 10:18am | IP Logged
Very very beautifully written... The tormentor becomes the tormented, thank god he didn't try to kiss her properly bcz no matter how passionate the kiss might be its not the answer to their pbms.

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Posted: 25 September 2013 at 10:26am | IP Logged
Beautiful...both hearts are breaking. I love the embrace, the intensity,the passion. The fact that they had embraced n hold on while sleeping seems to be more profound than if they had sex that night.

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Posted: 25 September 2013 at 10:33am | IP Logged
WOW! 
Emotional update! 

Once again you've managed to make me cry.

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Posted: 25 September 2013 at 10:35am | IP Logged
Chapter 18:
The kiss and its aftermath was very beautifully written. It definitely was not the time for them take it any further, as there is a lot of history and pain that is associated with this relationship, and there needs to be healing first. But the first step to taking the leap was very nicely done. The kiss was a good first step, and them both pouring out their emotions during that embrace was also good! Again, there were only a few words spoken throughout the chapter, yet it was such a powerful chapter!

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Posted: 25 September 2013 at 10:46am | IP Logged
1) Forget what WE expected, that was absolutely beautiful!
2) It was cleansing. Like what just transpired between them felt right, and it was written so so so well. 

3) I love you're writing so freaking much. 

Everything about that was done so well. Khushi's reactions, Arnav's words, their moments. Loved it so much! Even better than what we got in the teaser hehe ClapClap

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Posted: 25 September 2013 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Ahhh! I'm still trying to settle down with this beautiful feeling. If you aimed at making me blush, smile, cry and sigh then congratulations you did your job perfectly. Each and every word in place. This update was flawless.
A special mention to the part where Arnav tries to apologize to Khushi. As I've said before, you're quite observant and you totally know how & when a character will react. Kudos to you for that! I'm saying all this because Arnav was never good with words, thus his incoherent sentences, his desperate attempt at making everything alright, everything was perfectly written.

Khushi hugged him back. That shows she still cares for him, still there to support him. I hope she'll forgive him soon.

What an emotional update! Eagerly waiting to read more :)

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Posted: 25 September 2013 at 11:01am | IP Logged
Rae once again a beautiful update...absolutely loved it...the emotions flittering across the minds as they both shared their first ever kiss...then the heartfelt apology & confession by Arnav to Khushi & their breakdown in each other's arms , taking solace in the others' arms while comforting the other as well...all of this was beautifully described...yes this was much needed...I was imagining a few scenarios this wud proceed into with the way it ended last time, but this was unexpected for me and yet it was just so beautiful & apt for the moment.

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