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Roses & Thorns | Ch25 Pg1 (10/03) (Page 35)

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Posted: 23 September 2013 at 7:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gata

You described it so beautifully ..felt as if I was watching it on screen .The inner turmoil of Arnav  was so well written ...and a glimpse ofASR as he kisses her .

waiting for khushi's reaction
plz update soon(am I too demanding?sry)

Thank You so much! Glad that you could visualize it cos thats one of my aims while writing - my readers be able to visualize what I write the way I do when I do write it. :)

And you are not demanding at all...at least you are excited about the updates! Lol!! :)

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Posted: 23 September 2013 at 7:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by inajnar

I loved the way you portrayed Arnav's feelings...and the whole chapter was well written and the end  was nail biting...
I am no good with words...but I must tell you that when complete this story would be one of the best woven around the forced marriage/ Redemption/Kidnap track...

 

Thats a huge compliment and I want to assure you I dont take it lightly at all. In fact, it puts more pressure on me to try and write this story to the best of my abilities as far as possible. Thank You so much! Humbled. :)


Edited by AngelTeen - 23 September 2013 at 7:03am

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Posted: 23 September 2013 at 7:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by opsyellow

No no I didn't expect that kiss but no complaining! But I am more interest in what will come after the kiss! Khushis answer was expected.

Haha! Well keep reading to know what happens! ;) :D

Thank You for commenting :)
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Posted: 23 September 2013 at 7:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shr1234

So beautiful and humble.
Their pain washed away every other thought in my mind I so ached with them. His longing to be loved once again, to hold on to the pure love and innocence of Khushi and her inability to be like how she was, their sheer helplessness. True it doesn't have the vibrancy and passion of ArHi but  given the situation they are in, you can't expect it. They both were all honest sans any facade. So much that it even shocked Khushi too. I couldn't help but notice that in this moment of weakness too Arnav was cut to the point only business and no nonsense. But all in all it was their melancholy, meek pain that filled and won my heart.
Kudos to you Rae, you once again produced a brilliant overwhelming chapter. How can you write it? Don't you feel emotionally fatigued and washed out? Wow!

PS: Thanks for the PM :) 
Oh I forgot the kiss, it was so emotional and humble.

Thank You so much for such a beautiful and thought out comment. Much humbled by your appreciation. :)

To answer your question - I do. I cant write whatever I write unless I feel it within my heart - each emotion, each dialogue that comes out of it and what would be its consequence. I write only that which comes from my heart and I am glad you like it. The emotional draining seems to get better when you guys appreciate the work and give your constructive arguments about it. Thanks once again :)

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Posted: 23 September 2013 at 7:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by farheen75

Lovely update... Thank god that Khushi didn't lie for once to make him happy and just told him the truth... Arnav needs to work hard to gain her forgiveness and rather than asking her that whether she will she ever be able to forgive him just show her how ashamed and sorry he is to put her through the living hell for the past 5 months.

At least he is asking her something and not just making decisions and reaching conclusions by himself...thats a start no?

Thank You so much for commenting! And I am really happy that someone is against Arnav here...he gets away way too easy sometimes...
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Posted: 23 September 2013 at 7:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by A_BA

You manage to deliver such powerful updates with just a few words spoken between the main characters!

And the few words were just so poignant...Arnav really showed his vulnerable side, and Khushi answered as honestly as she could.

Definitely was not expecting the kiss, but now I'm looking forward to the aftermath of it.

Thank You so much! :)

Glad you liked it. :)
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Posted: 23 September 2013 at 7:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Raila1014

Love it. Love it all:  His recognition of what he did, his moment of reckoning, his vulnerability, his uncertainties about whether he deserves o be forgiven, but above all his strength to ask for the forgiveness.  Yeah you described it all beautifully.  The kiss had to happened given they were so close that they could feel the blood pumping in the others heart.  

Hahahahaha! The last bit...it was all a Rabba Ve moment! 

"Humaari dhadkane ek ho jaati hain..." <3

Thank You so much! :)
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Posted: 23 September 2013 at 7:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by blueocean

Great update!!
It was worth the wait.
the few words spoken in this chapter conveyed a lot of emotions.
It was absolutely beautiful.
And I definitely didn't expect a kiss

Thank You so much! :)

And yay! ;) :D

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