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Roses & Thorns | Ch25 Pg1 (10/03) (Page 32)

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
I loved the way you portrayed Arnav's feelings...and the whole chapter was well written and the end  was nail biting...
I am no good with words...but I must tell you that when complete this story would be one of the best woven around the forced marriage/ Redemption/Kidnap track...

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
No no I didn't expect that kiss but no complaining! But I am more interest in what will come after the kiss! Khushis answer was expected.

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
So beautiful and humble.
Their pain washed away every other thought in my mind I so ached with them. His longing to be loved once again, to hold on to the pure love and innocence of Khushi and her inability to be like how she was, their sheer helplessness. True it doesn't have the vibrancy and passion of ArHi but  given the situation they are in, you can't expect it. They both were all honest sans any facade. So much that it even shocked Khushi too. I couldn't help but notice that in this moment of weakness too Arnav was cut to the point only business and no nonsense. But all in all it was their melancholy, meek pain that filled and won my heart.
Kudos to you Rae, you once again produced a brilliant overwhelming chapter. How can you write it? Don't you feel emotionally fatigued and washed out? Wow!

PS: Thanks for the PM :) 
Oh I forgot the kiss, it was so emotional and humble.


Edited by shr1234 - 18 September 2013 at 12:38pm

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
Superb update.
Now arnav is aching and craving for Khushi, her attention and love. arnav should realize that khushi will give that all but first she need to be hell and forgave arnav from her heart for every single bad thing he did to her.

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 2:50pm | IP Logged
Woah...that was amazing! 
I loved it Rae this couldnt have been written better than this
Amazing update! And he kissed her i cant wait for the next part!!!!!

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 3:01pm | IP Logged
Lovely update... Thank god that Khushi didn't lie for once to make him happy and just told him the truth... Arnav needs to work hard to gain her forgiveness and rather than asking her that whether she will she ever be able to forgive him just show her how ashamed and sorry he is to put her through the living hell for the past 5 months.

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 3:36pm | IP Logged
You manage to deliver such powerful updates with just a few words spoken between the main characters!

And the few words were just so poignant...Arnav really showed his vulnerable side, and Khushi answered as honestly as she could.

Definitely was not expecting the kiss, but now I'm looking forward to the aftermath of it.

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 7:16pm | IP Logged
Love it. Love it all:  His recognition of what he did, his moment of reckoning, his vulnerability, his uncertainties about whether he deserves o be forgiven, but above all his strength to ask for the forgiveness.  Yeah you described it all beautifully.  The kiss had to happened given they were so close that they could feel the blood pumping in the others heart.  

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