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Roses & Thorns | Ch25 Pg1 (10/03) (Page 18)

richa1792 Senior Member
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Posted: 10 July 2013 at 12:42am | IP Logged
Rae.!

You had me at Arnav blushing.!!
Oh God! I am totally melting right now.
They didn't show him blushing even in the show.

Smirking- yes.
Laughing- yes
Crying - yes.
Angry- yes.
Sexy- yes.
Hot bod without any shirt- Hell Yea!!

But anyways, I digress.!
So you get my point.!
I loved Arnav blushing in your story.

The tables have finally turned.
Arnav is finally ready to acknowledge Khushi as his wife, his other half, his soul mate.
Where as Khushi, she is slipping in to a vortex of the past misgivings and misdeeds.

You know, I knew it would come to this. I mean they couldn't really start over without addressing all the problems, all the hurt, all the cruelty of their past.

I dont think Khushi would be ready to forgive and forget so easily.
She is a strong independent woman, with a hell lot of self respect.

Arnav achanak saying that lets play house and forget everything won't go down too well with her.
Its going to be an uphill battle for him now.

It was heart warming to see Aakash getting misty-eyed seeing Arnav laugh.
Arnav fails to realize, just how many people love him. Wholeheartedly.
And he manipulates them,

I wonder, what will Aakash do when he gets to know how Arnav used his and Payal's marriage to trap Khushi in the contract?

Also, I want Abhi to meet Anjali.
Is it going to happen any time soon? *Please please*

Update soon.

P.S. I loved the Machi wala joke.
P.P.S. I just realized, I love to P.S.

Richa.

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Posted: 10 July 2013 at 4:05am | IP Logged
So finally everything has caught up with Khushi and while making everybody's world colourful around her she lost all the colours in her life... Where can Khushi go from here now with her shattered and bruised heart and totally crushed dignity, the crushing reality that the person she loved with all her heart and soul thought so little of her.

Arnav has to start rebuilding Khushi from scratch now with utmost care, love and devotion, he has to put her first in his life even before his Di to make up for the huge injustice that he has done to Khushi, he didn't make a mistake with Khushi instead committed a crime by completely ruining her life... I am so looking forward to the rest of the story as I know u will do complete justice to Khushi and plz can we see the intense side of Arnav while he will try to earn Khushi's forgiveness and will relentlessly try to woo her back again in a deadly combo of Arnav and ASR.

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Posted: 10 July 2013 at 6:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AngelTeen

Originally posted by Raila1014

Love the story so far but I did not read the beginning as I can't find your blog.  Blushing Arnav will be a sight to see.  Wonder what Shyam said?  How mobile is Arnav?  Is he constrained to the bed?  Why is she so sad?  Thought they were proving on from the past.  Would love to read from the beginning to better understand storyline.

The blog link as I have said repeatedly is in my profile. It has the entire story till now.

I looked up your profile and could not find it.  Not sure if this is because I only access via iPad or because we are not buddies so I can't view your full profile.  No big deal.
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Posted: 10 July 2013 at 11:28pm | IP Logged
beautifully written rae,looking forward to read more of this story..Smile

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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 6:30pm | IP Logged
just cme across this story. I love your take on the whole kidnapping aftermath.

When arnav was is hosp there was a moment when I actually thought you were going to kill him off! And now that khushis adrenaline has worn off I hope arnav can convince her of her importance and his love!

Shyam dsgusts me. I cant even bring myself to discuss him.
But Nk's friend...abhi is intriguing. Who is pari? has he met anjali?

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Posted: 12 July 2013 at 2:24am | IP Logged
Hey there Rae... Ramdan Mubarak to u! loved the update... Khushi's turmoil, her feelings was best describedloved the way u used dialogues from the show... tears pricked in my eyes... Arnav was restless without seeing his wife and wanted to be with her... loved the ending where she went to recliner to sleep giving Arnav clear picture tht wht he did in past its time to see its result... now I want to inform u that I wont b able to regular in Ramdan in case of reading n commenting so I thought of letting u know that if u dont see my comment it just means I havent read the update...
Xx
Regards
Farwa

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Posted: 18 July 2013 at 9:28am | IP Logged

I just re read this all on your blog and am once again in awe of your talented writing, please update this one soon. There are including yourself , such awesome and creative writers who captivate a readers attention in each chapter leaving the reader yearning for more...

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Posted: 18 July 2013 at 11:38am | IP Logged
missing this story! 
is it time for an update??!Big smile

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