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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: mistyrains

Arnav's quiet acceptance of Khushi's reluctance/her thoughts is eerie. It always is- because he never goes down without a fight. And this side to him, is somehow always saddening. The analogy between the light and dark was beautiful.

Then that line, ...his frame casting a shadow...this line is somehow absolute poetry.

And what followed after, I think you know my reactions clearly. Very clearly. 

Do continue soon :D


You didnt start this with 'Really?!' 

HMPH. :/

Kidding! :p

@Bold - As usual you looked at what I didnt write expicitly - you saw what was there between the text.

Thank You so much! :)
Edited by AngelTeen - 10 years ago
AngelTeen thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
You're enjoying this, aren't you? This teasing session, I mean. Leaving poor readers [read:me] high and dry and taking away their neend and chain by posting such teasers. So not fair, Rae! 
This sounds too good to be true *swoons* So they are still kissing, I mean they'd be still kissing in the next update. When are you posting it? Post it quickly, please!

You're too good with descriptions and you know it. Saying that this was beautiful would be an understatement.

I loved this line. L.O.V.E.D!

her heart beating with his.

Update soon!


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Posted: 10 years ago
Another teaser again 😊 ...& the kissing continues here 😳 😉 ...now I really want the next update soon Rae...
And don't u worry abt ur update not being upto the mark...it was & even surprised us with its ending 😉 ...U r an amazing writer & as always the update was lovely to read...
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is full on teasing yaar.
Very descriptive & high on passion.

Bring it on.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hmmm great teaser! Khushi hasn't pushed him away. ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
I think now is the more apt moment, to go ... wait for it -
Really!?

REALLY!?


😆

Now do us all a favor and update - jaldi!



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Posted: 10 years ago
Please have 'tarass " upon our souls !!!
 
Once again you leave us high & dry, hot and cold... like her fingers on his skin.. ... the line where "her heart is beating with his" leaves our heartbeat very still ...please post the full chapter for your loyal and dedicated readers soon ;-/
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Posted: 10 years ago
I read the latest chapter just now
Wow a kiss at the end was unexpected!!!!!

The question remains will khushi be able to forgive him ever???
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great teaser hun
Looking forward to read chapter 18
:-)