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TAAREY TS - WHY ASK YOURSELF . (Page 10)

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Posted: 13 July 2013 at 5:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sweetypie0234

awsome concept and update babe!!! love yr writing skills!! do pm me!!

thank u so muchBig smileBig smile

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Originally posted by FieryLioness

hey nice one Yashi...
but ewww Shivam and Taani   BF-GF Dead
i know i read ur note, so not say anything LOL
i will not say conti. soon as u know my record of reading 
stories asap EmbarrassedLOL

aww i know dear love you glad to know that you like my storyBig smileBig smile
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One day before taarey & shivam are in disc to enjoy the the success of taani.., taarey are dancing on the dance floor closely , lost in each other, shivam is burning from jealously , he order a strong drink again & agin now he completely drunk & can't control his anger he moved towards the dance floor hold taani's hand so tightly and drag her with him outside the disc rey also followed them but guards stop him to the entrance

Guard---- plz sir pay your bill first

Rey in so much hurry & worried about taani he gave them his violet and came outside the disc at the same time shivam drag her to the parking area & leave her hand, he take one step forward and taani backward , at last her back hit the car but shivam also take one more step forward and looked in her eyes but taani not looking in his eyes she looked here & there , shivam start touching her hand from shoulder to her fingers but taani jerked his hand   ''..

Taani- shivam tu..m ' tum ye kya kar rahe ho''

Shivam- kyo apni girl friend ko touch karna koi crime hai kya or tumhe mere chune se itni problem ho rahi hai but jab rey tumhe touch karta hai tab toh tumhe koi problem nahi hoti''.

Taani- [ completely shocked and looking in his eyes ] ----- what tum ye kya keh rahe ho shivam tum hosh mai nahi ho you are completely drunk [ try to move from there but shivam blocked her way]

Shivam- abhi tak hosh mai nahi tha taani but aaj hi hosh mai aaya hu [ hold her arm so tightly] tum dono kais eek dusre k close hokar dance kar rahe the , or tumhare ghar mai meri ek bhi photo nahi hai or rey uski toh photo har jagah hai, ye sab kya hai taani [ and he tight his grip on her arm]

Taani-  pata nahi tumhare dimag mai ye sab batte kaha se aayi mere dil mai aisa kuch nahi tha mai or rey sirf ek dost hai sirf best friend iske alawa kuch nahi ''..

At the same time rey enter in the parking area , he looked taani and her hand which is tightly hold by shivam , now he didn't control himself and go towards them''..

Rey- shivam taani ka hath chod ''.

Shivam-  ohh toh aagya tumhara friend nahi best friend [ turn to rey] kyo tujhe kyo dard ho raha hai taani meri gf hai or mai uske sath kuch bhi karu tujhe usse kya , tu hota kon hai hum dono k bich bolne wala ''

Rey-  vo meri bhi best friend hai okk so it's better for you leave her hand varna mujhse bura koi nahi hoga '''

Shivam leave her hand , take some steps backward and start clapping ''.

 

Shivam- manna padega kya dosti hai tumhari ,[ go near rey] arreaaj toh sach bol de rey kab tak chupayega kyo meri  or taani ki jindagi bhi barbad kar raha hai , kyu tu kurabani dekar mahaan banana ki koshish kar raha hai  [taani looking them with confused expression] kyu nahi keh deta kit u taani se pyaar karta hai , kyu nahi bata deta sabko huu kyo tu apne ek faisle ki vajah se hum sabki jindagi kharab kar raha hai kyo rey '.

Taani- rey kya shivam ne jo kaha vo sach hai tell me rey [ grabbed his collar ] tell me rey tell me '..

Rey ' haa karta hu mai tumse pyaar bahoot  pyaar karta hu [ holding her arm but she couldn't believe that she heard right her best friend love him ] abse nahi humesha se tumse pyaar kiya hai , bachpan se par tumhe kabhi keh nahi paaya I love you taani I really do

But before he could say more taani slapped him so tight '''

 

Taani- rey maine tumhe hamesha apna best friend samjha or tum mere bare mai ye sab sochte the I hate you rey I hate you '''''.

She run  from there to her house looked herself in her room , start crying like a hell , throw all the stuff on floor , sat on near her bed , buried her face in her knees ,

Taani- kyo kiya tumne ye sab rey kyu aaj maine apna best friend bhi kho diya hamesha hamesha k liye kyoo kiya rey kyu

 

Next day -------


taani dress-



Taani on back stage , there is only 5 min left for her performance , she is not a nervous an all , she kept thinking about the last night , but she shook from her thoughts when someone drag her  from backstage to contestant room which is empty , she looked that person who is none other than our hero rey , he leave her hand '''.


Taani- ab kya aaye ho tum yaha [ he try to speak but taani stop him] ohh kahi tum yeh dekhne toh nahi aaye ki taani tuti ya nahi but mai tumhe batana chahti ho ki mai itni weak nahi hu

Rey- stop it taani stop it bahut keh liya tumne or bahut sun liya maine bas ab or nahi ab mai kahunga or tum sunogi , haa ye sach hai mai tumse bahoot pyaar karta hu or ab se nahi bachpan se karta yhu tumse pyaar , but mai kabhi tumhe kehne ki himaat nahi kar payaa laga ki agar tumhe bata dunga toh kahi tumhari ost bhi na kho du , jab bhi tumhe dusro ladko k sath dekhta that oh mai jealous fell karta tha man karta tha ki sabka muh todh du , tum jab kush hoti thi toh mera pura world tumhari hasi se khil jata tha , or jab tum roti thi toh amn karta tha ki iss puri duniya mai aag [ fire] laga du , tumhari good morning se mere din ki shuraat hoti thi or tumhari hi good night se mera din khatam , man karta tha ki pure din sirf tumhari awaaj suntan rahu , agar short mai kahu toh meri puri duniya tum hi thi taani ,or phir valentine day wale din finally maine tumhe propose karne ka plan banaya oe mai jab mai vaha tumhare liye ring lekar pahucha  toh maine kya dekha kit um toh kisi or ki ho chuki tum toh kisi or se yaar karti ho ,trust me taani [ now his eyes are wet] uss din aisa laga ki mano kisi ne mujhse meri soul hi chin li , merit oh puri duniya hi khatam ho gayi thi uss waqt , ek pal k liye socha ki aisi jindagi ka kya faida jisme tum hi mera sath na ho or socha apni jan le lu but jab next second tumhe haste he dekha toh socha ki mai itna selfish nahi ho sakta kya hua ki agar tum mere sath nahi ho par tum jiske sath bhi ho khush ho or mai tumahri  khushi  mai hi khush hu or tumne jab mujhe hug kiya or kaha ki tum usse bahot pyaar karti ho or bahoot khush ho toh maine bhi apne dil ko samjha liya ki ab mai tumhra sirf best friend banker hi rahunga but taani ye dil kaha humara faisla manta hai , or nahi ise kisi ka jor chalta hi phir iske baad mai   tumse baat karne k bhane dhudhta rehat tha , yahi socta rehta tha ki kaise tumhare  sath thoda time or spent kar paau or taani ab mai janta hu ki tum bhi shivam se koi pyar nahi karti thi vo sirf tumhara attraction tha varna tum usse jada time mere sath spent nahi karti , jo khushi tumhe uske sath milni chahiye thi vo tumhe mere sath nahi milti , tumhare ghar mai uske bajaye meri photos nahi hoti , tumhe iss baat se jada ki tumne apna pyaar khoya hai iss baat ka bura nahi lagta ki tumne apna best friend khoya hai , sach toh yeh hai kit um bhi mujhse pyaaar karti ho [hold her arm so tightly she try to leave her hand but his grip is so  strong] hai na taani '

Taani ' rey mera hath chodo mujhe dard ho raha hai '.

Rey- nahi taani or uss dard ka kya jo aaj tak mujhe hua hai , aaj tumhe mere ha sawal ka jwaab dena hoga [ she start crying as he saw her tears , he leave her hand and asked her softly ] baato na taani ''

Taani- aisa kuch nahi hai  or mujhe nahi pata ki ye sab kyo ho raha hai '.

Rey- ye sab tumhare sath hi  kyo ho raha hai taani why ask yourself taani ask yourself or agar tumhe iska jawab mil jaye toh mujhe bhi de dena

And he left from there , host called her name she went to the stage and closed her eyes , all memories , moments which she spent with rey came in front of her eyes, when they both laugh together , their pranks , his cute innocent face when he made a mistake , his all antics through which he always succeed to made her happy, their hi5, their all fights but only lovely fights , her fake anger after their fight and he came with a chocolates and flowers to manofy her , their conversation and his words''" haa karta hu mai tumse pyaar " , tears roll down from her eyes , she start singing , her eyes still closed ''


 Jaane Tu Mera Kya Hai

Jaane Tu Mera Kya Tha
Tu Hi Mera Har Pal
Tu Hi Har Lamha Tha

Jaane Kaisi Kasish Hai 
Jaane Kaisi Khalish Hai
Kyun Yeh Saans Thami Hai 
Ankhon Mein Kyun Nami Hai 

Hai Dosti Humko Yakin Tha
Dost Aur Kuch Bhi Nahi Tha
LyricsMasti.Com
Hai Yeh Kaisa Dard Naya Sa
Kyun Dil Lagta Tuta Tuta Sa

Hai Jaana Dil Jaana 
Kaise Mene Na Jana 
Ke Pyaar Yehi Hai 
Yeh Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na

Jaana Dil Jaana 
Kaise Tune Na Jana 
Ke Pyaar Yehi Hai 
Haaan Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na


Jaane Tu Mera Kya Hai
Jaane Tu Mera Kya Tha
Tu Hi Mera Har Pal
LyricsMasti.Com
Tu Hi Har Lamha Tha

Hoti Tujhse Subah Har Din Ki
Teri Dopher Se Shaam Ki Dhun Thi
Hoti Thi Raatein Tere Baaton Mein Khoye
Teri Khayalon Mein Hi Jaage Aur Soye

Tu Jo Nahi To Kya Raha 

Jaane Tu Mera Kya Hai
Jaane Tu Mera Kya Tha
Tu Hi Mera Har Pal
Tu Hi Har Lamha Tha

Hai Jaana Dil Jaana 
Kaise Mene Na Jana 
Ke Pyaar Yehi Hai 
Yeh Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na

Jaana Dil Jaana 
Kaise Tune Na Jana 
LyricSMAsti.Com
Ke Pyaar Yehi Hai 
Haaan Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na

[ sorry guys maine song explain nahi kiya because it took so time so sorry i hope you al ont mind]

She opened her eyes , all crowd cheering for her'."taani taani "," once more, once more " but she didn't pay any attention to them , her eyes searching for someone in crowd , someone for whom she sang the song , yes her love , her life at last she finally caught a glimpse of a boy , he is non other than our hero rey who is smiling on her , feel happy when crowd cheered for her , he also clapped for her , when she look him her lips automatically bend in curve shape , she ran towards him with all her force & power , she rushed to him , stop in front of him'..

Taani- tumhe pata tha hamesha se pata tha , tum mere best friend the but tumne kabhi mujhe kyu nahi bataya huu[ beating on his chest , he try to speak but she stop him] ab kuch bolne ki jarurat nahi hai , mujhe kuch nahi sunana or ab mai bolungi or tum chupchap sunoge or mujhe ye kehna hai ki'ki..[ he widen his eyes ] kii I love you [ she looked towards him to know his expression but he didn't speak a word ] ab chup kyo ho kuch nahi bologe '..

Rey- arre badi ajeeb ladki ho pehle khud hi bolne k liye mana karti ho or fir khud hi kehti ho ki kuch bologe nahi'

Taani ' fine tum kuch mat bolo ''.

 

give a angry pout to him , turn her face another side , fold her arms across her chest , he hold her hand and turn her towards him , pulled her in a soft & gentle  kiss but passionate , they broke the kiss when crowd start clapping for both of them , they blushed so much and taani buried her face in his chest to hide her face''.

After sometime both finalist are on the stage , host asked her ..

Host- so miss taani aapko kya lagta hai ki aap ye competition jeetengi yaa sheena ye competition jeetegi ''

Taani- aaj mai ye competition jeetu ya haru mujhe iss baat se koi farak nahi padta kyoki aaj maine aapni life ka sabse bada competition jeeta hai , aaj mujhe mera true love mila hai or agar vo mere sath hai toh I am sure mai har competiion jeet jaungi '''

 

Host-okk well see [ she opened a envelop ] the winner of 2012 sa re ga ma pa is non other than taani'''.

Audience start clapping for her , she took her trophy and hugged rey so tightly .

Taani- [ wisper in rey's ear ] thanks rey for coming in my life''

 

But someone in the crowd having a teary eyes he is none other than shiam

 

Shivam- mai janta tha taani kit um mujhse nahi hamesha se rey se hi pyaar karti hu , I m so sorry taani jo maine tumhare sath kiya but agar mai tumhare sath vo sab nahi karta toh tumhe kabhi bhi yeh ehsaas nahi hoti kit um or rey sirf beest friends nahi balki best friends se kahi jada ho , you are meant to be each other taani', taani *pause * rey = taarey

I m so happy for you I hope tum mujhe maf kar dogi '..

 

Phewww finally end of my first TS I hope maine aap sabko irritate nahi kiya , agar kiya ahi toh sorry or agr nahi kiya toh for comment and like karo''



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Posted: 14 July 2013 at 3:33am | IP Logged
res/unres

yipee...m the first...dhinka chika dhinka chika...*dancing*

sorry for late unres...vo me so gayi thi u know na...but dekho ab me aa gayi...

so coming to your update...it was beautiful mindblowing amazing...omg angry shivam...bapre pehle to mujhe hua ki usko mar du...phir jab rey aaya aur i love u bola...i didnt exept a slap...i feel really bad for taarey...
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then come the empty room scene...love each and everyword of rey...and then flash back of taarey...the song suits the best...and then come the most awaited scene...confession and omg he kissed her in public...ShockedEmbarrassed...

yipee she won...thanks shivam...ab me tumhe nahi marungi...



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awesome Clap
just love it Smile

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Awesome!! Superb! N a perfect end!! Thnx for d pm...

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Finally Rey tell Taani about his undying love for her
I love their confession, it was very senti but beautiful...
Hmm Shivam actually help Taarey, that was nice of him
Superb update Yashi, I love it

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