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VIRIKA: Bleeding in Love = ch.27 on pg.120 (Page 86)

sushmakryan IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 February 2014 at 7:54am | IP Logged
awesome update
mind blowing
you are
good writer
continue soon
thanks for the pm

avni_19 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 February 2014 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
amazinggg and awesumm update as alwysss!!! thnkuuu keenii janabbb!!!
eagerr to read the nexttt updateee... im waitingg for those jeevika's three words to viren.. hehehe :D   
pinky.padda IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 February 2014 at 4:12pm | IP Logged
awesome update
totally amazing
NikShaikh Senior Member

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Posted: 12 February 2014 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
superb update
all the 3 r very cute
I love them
grttt going
keep on writing
continue soon
thanks for the pms
Nishtha.Relan Goldie

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Posted: 13 February 2014 at 1:21am | IP Logged
Karinaaa di,
Keeni di,
Such a wonderful story love all the characters in this story... Viren, jeevika, & riva... I was waiting everytime when will my holidays and assignment gets over so i could read all your story.. M really really sorry for not commenting and that very late... Srreyyy keeni di... I was so happy that viren and jeevika and the sweetest riva are happie although there is some health issues but its okiee they will fight and be ok for sure because if a doctor is so sweeet like u than which patient will be in trouble...
The update was:
Out of the world
Di, ur such a superbbb writer, ur stories updates always make me so into it that i start thinking what will happen next... I really really love all ur stories and m really really sorry for not commenting but i will try my best to read and comment... Asap... Di ur the besttt and i love u tons thanks for updating the storiesss.. Waiting for the next pm to shout out... Thanks thanks thanks thanks alot di... I love u keeeniii ddiii
Guys please comment and read stories the writers work really really hard for making us read it.. If they want they could stop it but they wont.. Bcoz the trust us.. So pls pls read, than click LIKE button & and then please give a COMMENT.. Pls pls pls... I beg u everyone...

Edited by nishyrelan - 13 February 2014 at 2:10am
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Posted: 13 February 2014 at 5:31am | IP Logged
Im loving riva moreHeart
viren is just a cuetiii
loved d updated
can u make her confess her feeling like soon really soon
Kays94 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 February 2014 at 6:10am | IP Logged
Chapter 19

Riva was asleep in the guest bedroom with Jeevika sitting right next to her. Viren was in the other room getting ready for the party tonight. He came in the room and saw her asleep. 
v - "Do you want to come?" he quietly asked Jeevika

Jeevika got up and walked near him. 

j - "Is it okay if I stay here? I really want to go and I feel really bad, but..."
v - "You don't have to feel bad" he said but getting distracted

He saw Riva awake in the back giving gestures to Viren convincing him she was okay. Viren couldn't help but smile which made Jeevika turn around and see why he was smiling. She saw Riva sitting up in her bed smiling at her and Viren. 

r - "Mom can you please trust me? I'm fine, I promise" 
j - "Riva there is no way I'm leaving you"
r - "Okay can you just go for sometime and come early? I'll do whatever you say" 

Viren walked near Riva and checked her forehead. 

v - "Fever is done" he said making Riva smile in relief. 
j - "Riva I'm too scared to leave you?"
r - "I will stay in bed and not get out till you come home I promise" 
j - "Viren" she said confused what to do. 
v - "This is between you two. I'm not getting on anyone's bad side" he said making light of the mood. 
r - "Please please please" she kept begging her mom. 
j - "Fine I'll go but just for a little while. And you will not step out of the bed. You will eat dinner right now and go to sleep right after, understood?" she said strictly
r - "Yesss anything you say promise! Now go get ready fast please" 

As soon as Jeevika went out of the room, Riva high-fived Viren and was so excited for her mom to be getting out for a while. Viren helped her up and took her out and made her sit on the couch while he went to make some dinner for Riva. Riva was falling asleep wrapped up in the blanket watching tv. Even though Viren was worried for Riva, he was really excited to take Jeevika out. This was technically their first unofficial date and all he could do was wait for the door of his bedroom to open to see Jeevika. In the meantime he took some dinner over to the couch and helped Riva eat dinner. She didn't complain at all nor could she stop smiling at all so excited to see her mother. Viren just sat there smiling at Riva, but all he could think of was the next few hours. He was nervous and excited at the same time, not knowing what the future would hold for them. When the door opened both Viren and Riva turned their eyes towards it excited to see Jeevika. She stepped out wearing a beautiful black dress. Viren couldn't even believe his eyes. He didn't know this was the same Jeevika who had an almost teenage daughter. His heart sinked to his stomach just mesmerized by her beauty. He got up from the couch and walked towards her who was blushing as she came forward too. 

Both of them didn't know what to say to each other and Riva couldn't stop smiling at the mild awkwardness in the room. She got up with a little difficult and walked near the both of them. 

r - "Mom he wants to say you're looking beautiful" she said helping Viren out.

 Jeevika and Viren both look at Riva with that small guilty smile. Riva then looks at Viren and says "My mom says thank you" she said embarrassing them to the max. 

v - "Aren't you supposed to be on the bed like your promised your mom?"
r - "Oh yeah" she said sticking her tongue out..."But there's no tv in that room"
j - "You're supposed to be sleeping anyways, otherwise I can stay home" she said starting to blackmail her daughter
v - "Why don't you go to my room, there's a tv in there and you can watch tv till you fall asleep"
r - "Thank You!" she said hugging Viren tightly. 

Riva ran inside Viren's room and got inside the covers. Viren and Jeevika both walked in to make sure Riva was okay. She seemed to be warm and most importantly happy. 

j - "Promise me you won't get out of bed now?"
r - "I promise"
v - "And here's a list of a few people who live in the building. In case Jeevika and I don't pick up the phone you can call them, they are my friends"
j - "And keep your phone on and right next to you incase we call"
r - "Anything else now both of you?" 
v - "If you get hungry there's some food in the fridge and snacks in the pantry"
r - "Mom you have anything else to say?"
j - "You are way too excited to be home alone aren't you?"
r - "Its actually for something else but you won't get it"
v - "Shall we leave?" he asked Jeevika

Jeevika just nodded and kissed her daughter then walked out the room with Viren. They both stepped out the apartment and walked down near the road. Since the party was close by both of them choose to walk, but in silence. They didn't know how to break the ice and also didn't know what to say. Viren made the first move taking Jeevika's hand in his which made her more comfortable now. All that was going in Jeevika's brain was when and how to say those three words to him. 

j - "I don't remember when I went out like this last" she said placing her head on Viren's shoulder. 

Viren in turn squeezed his hand harder. 

v - "I don't remember feeling the way I do for you and Riva last either" he said comforting her. 
j - "Viren are we doing the right thing?" 
v - "What do you mean?"
j - Is this right for us and for Riva?" 
v - "Everyday and every second my love for you and Riva keeps growing. I will make her so happy that she won't remember any of this ever again" 
j - "And what about me?"
v - "You really think I won't love you? Every second and every breath I take with your name" 

Hearing Viren say that made Jeevika the most emotional she had been. Probably the same level of emotion when she first held her daughter in her arms. She had to say it now, there wasn't a better time and she knew he was the one. He was the one for her and Riva and she had to seal the deal and make him hers forever.

j - "Viren" she said softly
v - "Yeah" 
j - "I Love You" she said as a tear came out of her precious eyes at the same time... "And I promise to love you for the rest of my life" she said confidently...

His love empowered her and gave her the strength to fight the upcoming battles in her life to live a happy life ahead. Not just the battle for her daughter's life, but another. Another battle to which Viren was totally unaware of.      

Suspenseee Timeee!!! LOL ROFL Do comment and like if you want to find out whats in store for Virika Heart                           

Edited by Kays94 - 17 February 2014 at 6:10am

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millee18 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 February 2014 at 6:11am | IP Logged
res :)

wat a phenomenal update it was
I m still in my mental world ... picturing the whole update in my mind...
finally they admitted !!!!
nd tht also with so much love !!!
awww ... I wish I could see tht in reality !!!!
it's one of the best update of bil...
the way u described everything just blown me off...
why u write so effing perfect...???
why I always feel like reading it again nd again ???
why I can't get over ur stories ???
why u r best ???

I also don't know the answers...

but I know one thing
tht I can spend my days reading ur stories... nd still crave fr more

Heart Heart Heart

Edited by millee18 - 21 February 2014 at 7:50am

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