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VIRIKA: Bleeding in Love = ch.27 on pg.120 (Page 82)

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Posted: 01 January 2014 at 7:15am | IP Logged
amazing update
hope jeevika confess soon and riva get well soon
3 of dem is really cutee
 thanks for the pms
continue soon

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Posted: 01 January 2014 at 9:21am | IP Logged
To My Pyaarrii Writer!! LOL

Where Are You?? Cry You Know Me Miss You Sooo Muuccchhh!!!  Cry

And Also Miss My Riva!! Cry


P.S ~ I Want A Long Update!! First Update Of The Year! Big smile Heart PLEASE!! No Heart Breaking! Broken Heart Cry
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Posted: 01 January 2014 at 10:49am | IP Logged

An excellent story. The caring single parent of a sick child. It is hard enough with two parents but here Jeevika was all by herself raising someone above their age. An awesome SS I am only part way though it but I keep wanting to read the next part as soon as I finish. They random conversations make me laugh. I going to continue to read as I'm only on part four but wanted to comment already. I'm impatient, what can I say. 

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My running commentary from part 5 onwards. Her want for her father is so apparent. Even with everything her mother does, she still wants her father or someone in that position. It seems like Viren in fitting into their lives even though it is awkward but I haven't got that far yet.  The growing relationship that you have created is so tenderly done. It not out of place but fits in because of the situation that they are in. I love the dropping of hints in the different updates about their pasts. You can see that Viren in only a few days cares truly about both of them but in some ways he is pushing. He's knows he's right but in Jeevika's position it not the most fair thing. Yet I still love that. Dwelling on the past or embracing the present.

 

Wow I finished it in one go. Have to say an amazing story and love the progression. It might be fast for my liking but it works. The sadist in me wants Jeevika to break down truly either emotional or physically and truly need someone to support her, as she will not take help willingly. If she has a chance of fixing it herself, Viren wouldn't get an edge in.   

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Posted: 02 January 2014 at 5:20am | IP Logged
KKKEEEAAANYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Cry

Where Are You My Twwwiiinnniiieee?????? Cry Disapprove
No Updates...No Comments...Cry 
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Posted: 05 January 2014 at 10:31am | IP Logged
sorry for the late comment..
really nice update as usual :)
hope to see the soul mates be together soon 
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Posted: 05 January 2014 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
Awesomesttt update
im loving BIL more now
its really getting more interesting wth viren cuming close to both d girl
just want dem to b a family sooo for dat jeevs need to say those words
can u make her say dat in next update hun
lovely update

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