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VIRIKA: Bleeding in Love = ch.27 on pg.120 (Page 8)

Marzii IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 12:46pm | IP Logged

Nooo noo noo i wanna read moree n moree peeni...why do u do this to me ? :(( am so in love with this story maan... i really wanna read more like right now at this momentCryCry 

Such an emotional update, u have written is so well, loved how u described sure shes as gourgeous as her mommy.Day Dreaming...feel really bad for Riva and Jeevs...poor girls :( wheres her dad?? me wanna know the past ASAP...and i want Viren already peeniLOL as much as the story is damn awesome, we still want Virens entry fast im so eager to read the next part...please update faster, please please please please please please babbyyy <3

Edited by jeevi7 - 27 June 2013 at 1:21pm

TeriMaaa IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 12:47pm | IP Logged


kayyys dun do this yaar please Cry
is viren her father who leave both of thm ???CryShocked
no it cant be AngryShocked
viren is surely someone else right???may be jeevika's old frnd ..Wink
i hope so ,, Confused

anyways an awesome and killing update Clap
tht was too emotional Cry
Aww m loving riva Smile
aww she cant even say no to her mother Big smileBig smile

love the way jeevika explains her .CryBig smile.
Awww she cant share her wid someone else CryBig smileBig smile

and i must say this was a really gud strt ClapClap
no doubt yr an amazing writer .. i mean yr the best writer of this forum .. howevr i think u kinda exaggerate this part ..Smile

over all an amazingly emotional update Clap
continue soon Big smile
waiting fr the next partClap

Edited by candyVirika - 27 June 2013 at 1:03pm
kryanvirika05 Senior Member

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
beautiful update!
it literally made me cry!
riva is so sensible!!!
I love her already!
-Latty- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
res Big smile
unres Embarrassed

hayeee so another lovelyyy story is started today Smile

what a beautiful and a emotinal start karina ClapCry

my gosh this update made me sooo curious to know jeevika's past and her memories with riva's dad Tongue
cant wait to know that why he did this with jeevika and riva Confused

awww jeevika-riva's relation is just sooo cutee and adorable Embarrassed

the way u describe the characters of ur story i just love that Heart

soo want to read more
thanx for the pm Smile

Edited by -Latty- - 27 June 2013 at 8:13pm
millee18 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
amazing work dear..
the way u showed their pain...made me cry!!!!
cont soon!!!

Edited by millee18 - 28 June 2013 at 4:00am
TeriMaaa IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
unresed on the same page :)))
kashmirbeauty Senior Member

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 1:09pm | IP Logged
awsome start!!Tongue
thanks for pm

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 1:12pm | IP Logged

Meanie madam what is this yaar? 
Such an emotional update 
Is viren that father?  No right?  
Make viren come soon 
I have a feeling its viren hope im wrong
I've written the same in my comment for the previous one too 
Riva is awesome 
She is 10 and behaves as 20 
Well she is jeevikas baby 
Loved it 
Continue soon please

Edited by MADHU.BARUN - 27 June 2013 at 1:17pm

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