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VIRIKA: Bleeding in Love = ch.27 on pg.120 (Page 113)

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Posted: 13 June 2014 at 8:26pm | IP Logged
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#Unres

Its Hard to even comment something on ur story ! Every single update make me crave fr more nd more. I M Totally Madly Deeply in love with this story. This is one of the most fabmv story of mine of if ! It have each nd every single emotion . Care , love , Trust ! u have blended them the nest way one can ! I can read this story all day nd night without getting bored at all ! Its nof those happy happy kind of story but it shows how one can smile even in the worst phase of their life. thts make it all more special !

This particulatlr update totally unfolded trust nd love. My two Fav emotions. The wasy jeevika said tht the ring was only thing he had of her so he shouldnt give it to her . nd viren answer ! ahhh ! perfect love Heart Thn the 4 kind of emotion shower scene ( 3 we had in hum bum ROFL ) was one of my fav. Loved it !

do cont soonish ! :)

Edited by millee18 - 17 June 2014 at 10:44pm

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Kays94

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Posted: 13 June 2014 at 9:58pm | IP Logged
awwiiieee
our virika back!Dancing
shower sceneBlushing
hawww omg omgShocked
love dem immenselyHeart
dey're so adorable
so caring n supportive coupleHeart
loved how he shows her riva's pic..so cute scene<3
he can feel her pain.. He cant bear to c those bruises on her body so finally he ends up taking off bathrobeEmbarrassed
way to go viren!Thumbs UpWink

awesome update
congrats,dint knw KT replied u :)

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Posted: 13 June 2014 at 10:07pm | IP Logged
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Its was just perfect
awesommest update
d way u blended all d emotions care,love,support
loved d virika convo abt d ring n Riva's photo in his wallet Heart
feel bad for jeevika d pain she is going through
BT loved how viren comforted her n helped n shower Smile
dis is getting more interesting
update jaldi really jaldi

Edited by --Ayesha-- - 20 June 2014 at 1:50am
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Posted: 13 June 2014 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
This update was super beautiful!! The emotions were...amazing! You took all the relationships to a next level. The understanding, the comfort, the acceptance, you handledit wonderfully! Lovely update! Keep it up, and I'll comment on WFL soon! :)

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Posted: 13 June 2014 at 10:30pm | IP Logged
i love love love this update!!Smile
awwiee riva was called as viren's daughter!Smile
how sweet Embarrassed
i love that part
even that viren has riva's photo in his pocketEmbarrassed
i really love this updateHeart
i love how viren takes care of jeevika
jeevika and viren are blessed to have eachother
i love this story!Smile
keepp continuing 
i love the endless support of viren towards his lovelifeHug
waiting for the next updateSmile


Edited by sweet_aayushi - 17 June 2014 at 10:14pm

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Posted: 13 June 2014 at 11:57pm | IP Logged
Res
Unres..
This update was phenominal
So cute moments..Day Dreaming
Lyk when the doctor said riva as viren's daughter...viren showing jeevika riva's baby pic...nd the best was when he called it as pricelessSmileSmile
Loved the way u described jeevika's feelings.Clap
Aww the bathroom sceneEmbarrassed
But loved the way how viren supportes jeevika..nd how much he understands her..
Jst amazing
Continue soon


Edited by MyKryan - 14 June 2014 at 7:52am

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Posted: 14 June 2014 at 4:21am | IP Logged
emotional n amazing..!!! Love Viren is a rock solid support come what may... happy to see dem together..

P.S Are u not sending pms...? I did not get any :(

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Posted: 14 June 2014 at 5:49am | IP Logged
Woah !!
I am loving this story
Everything is written amazingly perfect
Virreeennn !!!! I love him
Aww u feel so sad fr jeevs bt I love the way Viren is with her
I hate sad track of virika stories bt this story is an exception
Is there a need to mention 'cake' in every update -_-

Was it a long update ?? :/ :p

Congratulations kays :)

PS : m missing zaaine :'(

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