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VIRIKA: Bleeding in Love = ch.27 on pg.120 (Page 103)

MyKryan Goldie

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Posted: 24 April 2014 at 5:33am | IP Logged
Y no update...  .???
Plz update...
Missing Riva a lot<3

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Posted: 24 April 2014 at 10:01am | IP Logged
iss ka update kab milegi? Angry
Kays94 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 April 2014 at 4:30pm | IP Logged

Chapter 23

As soon as they all reached the apartment, Jeevika opened it in to enter with Viren and Riva following behind her. To her relief the apartment was fine, and she could no one broke in, specifically Nikhil.

v - "Jeevika quickly pack everything that's important, all your important paperwork and anything else. Riva and I will get the rest"

Jeevika just nodded and went to the office looking through all her files and dumping everything in one box. She couldn't let Nikhil get a hold of anything. After closing the box and gathering her laptop she went to the bedroom to see Viren and Riva packing the suitcases.

j - "I finished the office, Do you guys need help?"

v - "Nope we're doing it. Why don't you take the box downstairs to my car?"

j - "Okay" she said getting the box and leaving the apartment.

Jeevika went downstairs and unlocked Viren's car and put the big box in the trunk. She closed the trunk and was moved. Her heart started pumping so fast, and she couldn't stand still. Her body was shaking, mostly because of shock but also because of being scared. The guy she had left several years ago, was standing in front of her. He looked diferent, but still the same. He was the same, thats for sure. First tormenting Jeevika and now Riva.

Nikhil - "Jeevika we need to talk. I've been looking for you"

Jeevika wasn't sure how to retort back. She looked down for a few seconds unaware of what was going on. She looked up feeling stronger than ever, and ready to fight the world. It was time now.

j - "We will talk, but through our lawyers. I do not want to see you or deal with you ever again in my life" she said trying to walk away.

n - "Jeevika wait" he said moving in front of her. "You're going to have to deal with me, I don't care how or when. Don't make me stoop low"

j - "Stoop low? You have gone way below that. You were blackmailing my daughter? Who do you thik you are?"

n - "Riva is my daughter too"

j - "Don't you dare take her name. Nikhil please leave before I lose it today"

n - "Then don't make it harder than it should be. Let's go upstairs and talk"

j - "My days of talking and making it work with you have gone. Deal with your own problems and get out of my life"

Nikhil took Jeevika's hand and made her get in his car. He opened the door and made her sit forcefully quickly getting into the driver seat. He started driving quickly before allowing Jeevika to get out of the car.

j - "Nikhil let me out. I will call the police if you don't leave me"

n - "You're still my wife, the poilce cannot do anything"

j - "Yeah they can, I've reported on you once already"

n - "Yeah years ago and in California. You cannot do anything to me"

j - "Nikhil drop me off at my home now. My daughter's waiting for me"

n - "She's old enough to take care of herself. I'm sure she can stay away from you for a few hours. And anyways I asked you politely to talk and you didn't listen

Jeevika could feel her cell phone vibrating in the front pocket of her jeans. She knew it was Viren, but couldn't take the phone call in front of Nikhil. Who knows what else he would do. She smartly slided her iphone taking it out a little from her pocket so she could pick up the phone call. She wanted Viren to know where she had disappeared and to get her away from him.

j - "Nikhil where are we going? Nikhil please stop driving and drop me back home"

n - "Jeevika we need to talk and we're going to do it now"

j - "Nikhil I need to be home with my daughter. She's sick and she needs me. Nikhil stop driving"

n - "Don't make my life more difficult. You've already caused many problems in my life, and now I'm going to stop that" he said in a scary tone

Jeevika got scared more than ever now. What did he mean by putting a stop to all his problems? What was he going to do now to her, or maybe Riva?

Again sorry for updating late! I will not try to update every Fridays until my finals come near. Please like and comment if you want to know whats going to happen Tongue 

Edited by Kays94 - 24 April 2014 at 4:36pm

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Posted: 24 April 2014 at 4:48pm | IP Logged
loved it!
the floww is superbb!
just awesome!!
nikhil is back! not their for too LONG!! :) :)

Edited by sumayyah1 - 01 January 2015 at 10:38am
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absolutely brilliant
totally awesome
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Unres!! Big smile

Can I Ever Get Enough Of Appreciating Your Writing Keany?  Day Dreaming

Okay Lemme Start From Here!

You're An Absolutely Fabulous Writer Who Can Define Perfection! You're Concepts, Dialogues, Portraying Feelings & Emotions, You Do It So Well And Magnificently!! You Make Me Go Speechless With Every Update Of Yours!

Those Little Moments, Those Little Twists & Turns, And Every Little Thing Are Superbly Awesome!!

Too Much Of My Blabbering!! LOL To The Update!

It Was Awesome!
The Way You Portrayed The Scene! Awesome! Okay As I Said Earlier I'm Speechless!! Dead Broken Heart

Update Soon Writer Ji!! Heart Big smile
Love You Always! Hug 

PS ~ SUper Sorry For Unres'in Late!! Cry Broken Heart

Edited by RiddhiTacker - 28 April 2014 at 12:17pm
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