VIRIKA: Bleeding in Love = ch.27 on pg.120 - Page 83

Posted: 9 years ago
Awiiieee my keeni gave us an update. 
yipeee 
It was awesome as always
Loved it totally

I love the story
This update was so
Emotional
Scaring 
Loving
Awessome
Wondeful
Amazing
Sweet
Caring
Outstanding
Really feeling sorry for jeevs!
Hope she gets well soon 

I just loved it !
Thanks for the pm.
Continue soon  ðŸ¤—


Edited by Sameeha.Tacker - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
This is so touchy!
Cant bear to c jeevi in pain
lovely update
viren is a sweetheart
Posted: 9 years ago
so emotional :'( :'( 
The pain each of them is going through is heartwrenching :'( 

Brilliant update!
Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update. just love the whole update... the way viren react after the whole mass just hats off ... last part just awesome.. update soon... plZ also update we found love soon...
Posted: 9 years ago
This is CALLED BACK with a BANG... WHAT AN AWESOMELY and EMOTIONALLY CONCEPTUALIZED UPDATE... :-* <3 LOVED EVERY BOT OF IT :-(
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update!!!
Superb n thnks for the PM!!!
Posted: 9 years ago
superb update
absolutely brilliant
loved it
Posted: 9 years ago
Y am i always the last one to comment?

M gonna be honest this time okay?
Criticism is allowed rite?

I really really hated the last update! No matter how perfect ur writing skills are or how beautifully u wrote it ... I just didnt like the idea ... Sorry for the criticism but for the first time ever i just didnt! U shouldnt have done that to her :( u made me cry hard :'( Kuch bhi kar deti but not this :(

Neither Jeevika nor Viren deserve this!

As for the recent update ... M not gonna take my words back about the last update but i liked the recent one ... M still not happy with the fact but Viren being viren, proposed! Guys like him dont exist in real life! Show some mercy on him dude.

Reading about the three of them, all shattered ... Its hurts okay? More than u can imagine.

The last part was beautiful and u made me cry again for which i hate you :@

Whats done is done so now u better write something fair enough which would help me get over the heart wrenching update and heal my broken heart! :(

Dont mind the comment okay? M always honest with ur updates and still being honest abt the way i felt ... Sorry :(
Posted: 9 years ago
An absolutely heart wrenching update!
It's awful to see Viren&Jeevika in such vulnerable state...
Hands down to you for the beautiful display of emotions.
Loved it!

Hope your finals went well...enjoy your break and update soon ;)
Posted: 9 years ago
Great update!!!!!! 
Loved the last bit!!
Thank you for PM!! :)

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