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Never the time & place & the loved one together(OS (Page 7)

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 10:57am | IP Logged
it's not weird but i feel so sad after reading this. any way beautifully written.

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 11:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by neag

he didn't keep his promise but she come to him to meet him even when she is not in life but in spirit... so painful,,,, so as he said i'm ready,,,, what it means he is with her now..??? do reply what was in your mind while writing it,,,,
 
loved the OS
 
write more like this,,,, youe writing always shows the pure love between ArHi,,,, A LATE SPRING and LOST IN YOUR EYES and THE IMPENETRABLE HEART... each and every Fiction and OS are so beautifully written

Yes they are together because they were meant to be...Khushi loved him and watched over him from a dimension that's beyond what we percieve as reality.
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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 11:18am | IP Logged
edited my comment page 1 Smile

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 11:22am | IP Logged
ohhh god this so amazing khushi die when she is only 16 i just your writing style

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 11:23am | IP Logged
"I have waited too long...too long..."

"For you, my love. Don't you realize we are two bodies but one soul...? We were created to be one. When you are troubled, how can I rest in peace? I've come to bring you peace...to be one with you".

"I'm ready..."

These lines were chilling. But so beautiful.

Also, thanks the information on lines. Flower of death? Now that part of the story makes more sense.

Love.

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 11:23am | IP Logged
I really liked d plot..it was different from d usual os.. but i really loved it

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 11:25am | IP Logged
beautiful yet painful os
loved it

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 11:28am | IP Logged
beautifully written...

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