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Never the time & place & the loved one together(OS (Page 4)

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 5:00am | IP Logged
...my eyes r moisten...but i know ARSHI...is/are inseparable...they soul-mate...and i love them madly...even death can't do nothing they r one...and dear for us...

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 5:12am | IP Logged
Jen you wrote a new story...Shocked

Yeh kab hua? kaise hua? aur hame kissine bataya nahi...

Mera res let me read and come back to this...RES

**Edited**

Aww Jen that was such a poignant and vivid tale that you had going around there. 
The same Arnav and the same khushi, but still not the same. 
A khushi who has come from way beyond just so that she can give some solace and comfort to her Arnav.   But was she really there or did Arnav just conjure her up, but you mentioned the coat which makes its way back to the bench.

So heartbroken as i am i will have to accept that it was khushi who reached from beyond the grave to comfort her soul mate...

Lovely jen...it was awesome as always.



Edited by kondhili - 26 June 2013 at 1:00pm

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 5:13am | IP Logged
This was amazing jenny...
She died when she was sixteen its so sad, he was so happy to meet her.
She was spirit came to give him peace.
They are so made for eachother.
Loved it truly.

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 5:19am | IP Logged

Wow Jenny. That was beautiful.

I am sad and happy at the same time. Sad because they both left this world and happy because they were together in the end...even though their togetherness is beyond what is perceived as reality.

Arnav and Khushi are eternal lovers and their love transcends the boundaries of life and death. He may have had feelings for Lavanya and it hurt him to see her with his brother and he felt betrayed. But his one true love was Khushi and ultimately he found his solace in her.

Very intriguing. 


PS: Had to read it for the second time because I kept thinking why the scent of lilies...it took me a while to understand that. 




Edited by incandescent - 26 June 2013 at 9:17am

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 5:35am | IP Logged
What did you do yaar. You made me cry.Cry

God she died waiting for him and he forget her. How sad it is. Ad she come back to him, to meet him.

If I am right he also died to be with her or she came to take him with her.

Beautiful and very touch story.

Thanks for updating.

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 6:06am | IP Logged
Jenny what came over you??

That was sweet before last para. It turned spooky.. then!

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 6:23am | IP Logged
Beautifully written..

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 8:08am | IP Logged
So i find khushi dead here? No doubt u wrote it very nicely. .amazing really. . But this is the 4th os i'm reading today where either arnav or khushi is dead. . Wat a day! ! !

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