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Never the time & place & the loved one together(OS (Page 3)

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 3:51am | IP Logged
Today is my lucky day - off to read the OS

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 3:56am | IP Logged
Jen! Jen!

I tried and tried hard to not put in my heart for I would have sulked for an hour after reading this.. Ouch

You really are versatile my dear...be it any emotion...you make its presence felt by succesfully transmitting it through your stories.

And I have to say...this is so so well written...You are just rising with every shot at writing. Clap


So.,

He was surprised to just find his coat there, partly covered with purple-blue blossoms.

This had been my moment of realization as I dreaded what I knew would come next.

Khushi lost her life against battling Typhoid. Always loved him, never forgot and had been waiting.

Arnav on the other hand maybe didnt remember her in all these years? was with some other woman...Khushi died at 16 but never made her presence felt to him after that. Only when he was hurting, was in need of peace did she come to him.. And he did found solace with her.. recalled her instantly...And they united spanning all time and space.


Awesome Jen!! 


Edited by Anupama. - 26 June 2013 at 8:46am

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 4:12am | IP Logged
Oh Jenny, you write so beautifully, this touched the heart ! 
It was sad and sweet...I loved that he needed her to see things differently and she could not see him hurt and she mended his broken heart...but I only see him with khushi, so to see him heartbroken about La..in the beginning was so odd for me...


Edited by vandana.sagar - 26 June 2013 at 10:31am

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 4:21am | IP Logged
omg
i hav no words to describe how i felt

startung wit d update i was like aww poor arnavs heart is getting brokenn..

thrn came khushi n i was happy

n den wat wat wat?? i had to read it thrice...not becoz i dint understood bt bcz i was shocked...i dint expect an ending like this

superb

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 4:31am | IP Logged
Oh Jenny, that was a beautiful one, although a sad one but a beautifully written OS - loved it dear

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 5:00am | IP Logged
...my eyes r moisten...but i know ARSHI...is/are inseparable...they soul-mate...and i love them madly...even death can't do nothing they r one...and dear for us...

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 5:12am | IP Logged
Jen you wrote a new story...Shocked

Yeh kab hua? kaise hua? aur hame kissine bataya nahi...

Mera res let me read and come back to this...RES

**Edited**

Aww Jen that was such a poignant and vivid tale that you had going around there. 
The same Arnav and the same khushi, but still not the same. 
A khushi who has come from way beyond just so that she can give some solace and comfort to her Arnav.   But was she really there or did Arnav just conjure her up, but you mentioned the coat which makes its way back to the bench.

So heartbroken as i am i will have to accept that it was khushi who reached from beyond the grave to comfort her soul mate...

Lovely jen...it was awesome as always.



Edited by kondhili - 26 June 2013 at 1:00pm

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 5:13am | IP Logged
This was amazing jenny...
She died when she was sixteen its so sad, he was so happy to meet her.
She was spirit came to give him peace.
They are so made for eachother.
Loved it truly.

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