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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:14am | IP Logged
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Yes this is not the genre which Jenny usually writes and therefore I loved this attempt of urs Jenny!
The last few lines left me shocked!
Though Arnav was with Lavanya, in his heart of hearts he still belongs to Khushi...
A few things were unsaid but the story was told beautifully!
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Edited by Nexus_13 - 26 June 2013 at 12:03pm

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:19am | IP Logged
Well, jenny...maybe you are in a meloncholic mood or you just wanted to write something about a guy who doesnt get what he wants like our Mr. Foster.

I dont blame Arnav for going crazy or schezophranic  - after all the girl he loves is marrying his brother. It is one thing to not get the girl one loves but the pain no doubt alleviates to anohter level when you have to watch that girl with another, your brother...there's no escape from that pain.

Maybe that is why he remebers Khushi...the girl he adored and promised something that he never kept up...

What I liked about it ... Khushi is the balm Arnav needs...so what if it was Arnav's imagination ...for me Khushi and Arnav are the only ones who are there for each other in times of need. It was Khushi he seeked in time of his need and it was Khushi whom he joined in the world that is beyond asli duniya. 

I will not say I loved it but it was an intersting take on life. 


Edited by AquaSandhya - 26 June 2013 at 1:26am

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:20am | IP Logged
Beautiful though i don't like the ending...lol... But due to its ending this OS became unique...

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:29am | IP Logged
it's a hatke os dear.ShockedCryOuch

take care.


Edited by Divyahet - 26 June 2013 at 1:32am

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:30am | IP Logged
This OS was really a surprise. It was a beautiful story, but I never expected a sad end since u always give happy ending. 

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:30am | IP Logged

last part made my heart stop a a beat...gosh khushi was dead...

beautiful OS... 

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:48am | IP Logged
It's really a beautiful OS Embarrassed
I was so confused first Confused
Khushi died a long ago then how come Arnav talked with her Confused Ouch
Then I understood that it was his imagination 
Thanks to Deepa and Gunjan for telling me about the OS Hug
and thanks to clear my confusion also Deepa Hug

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