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Never the time & place & the loved one together(OS (Page 18)

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 11:02am | IP Logged
I agree it's a bit unusual, but its beautiful! Thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 11:10am | IP Logged
Awesome OS Jenny 
Feel relieved actually  love is so strong
Thanks for pm

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 11:17am | IP Logged
Wow...I have goose bumps...very sweet...soulmates.
Thanks for the PM.

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 11:22am | IP Logged
Amazing one
thanks for the pm
Twinkle

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 11:49am | IP Logged
So emotional...I am in tears
So Arnav died and now they are together !!!

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
Beautiful os.
This ws such an emotional beautiful n touching story of a love tht ranscends time n place n life itself. U started with arnav all dejected n sad goin out of the ball room n relaxing under the tree sitting on a bench. there he heard a soft voice of a beautiful girl who introduced herself 2 be his neighbour n then he recollected her n they talked abt how they played n how they r grown up. he remembered how inseparable they were n how he forgot her the girl who hd cried so much when he left for US.
Then started the most touching part abt 2 innocent kids bidding adieu to each other the boy promising her tht he'd come 2 meet her when he grew old enough 2 buy a ticket n the girl tht she'd wait forever. tht point arnav realized he broke the promise n apologized while khushi sd she has waited for him till now. they decide to meet each other the nxt dy.

Then we have arnav parents discussing arnav n how he went to visit khushi who never existed bt had passed away when she ws 16 bt she came seeing arnav in pain to b with him n probably take him with her coz she addressed him as love  i waited too long. Khushi ws watching over him tho he had forgotten her.

Its so touching tht it brought tears u have written its so beautifully.  i am yet to read als bt hope to catch up soon.

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
Ok so She took him with herself...
Does it sound selfish on her part? 
definitely not becoz she waited for soo many years..

Jenny i dont like such sad endings honestly..i know m gonna think about it whole night now..Cry
but i want to confess that It was a very very sweet OS..
sad  and heartbreaking tooConfused

and you are one bestt Writer mashaAllah.
Hands down...Smile

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
oh no...it was soo sad...yet so beautiful...

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