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Never the time & place & the loved one together(OS (Page 16)

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 9:16am | IP Logged
Simply Awesome

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 9:18am | IP Logged
beautiful Smile  thanks u so much for this awesome os n pm

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 9:24am | IP Logged
Beautiful OS.
Emotional also.
At last he got solace in the memory of Khushi and surely they will be together in heaven.

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 9:31am | IP Logged
superb os

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 9:40am | IP Logged
Wonderful OS...It was indeed unique concept and beautifully written 
It was sad that lavanya was marrying his elder brother... He was a heart broken man. and he hurts even more when he saw his love in somebody else' s arms... and this person is his own brother...poor arnav
loved the way Khushi comes out of nowhere, and eases his pain... their sweet conversation and remembering their childhood...arnav had clearly missed it... wonder if he Had even realized it before...  
So sad that arnav is dead also... at least they are together and that was only heaven where he can get happiness ...and solace being in her arms forever...
loved Jenny... 


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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 9:45am | IP Logged
It felt surreal, Jenny...I do not know about life after death, but, I am sure it would be something similar , if you truly loved someone.. he was shattered, and, needed solace..and there she emerged to sooth, his worries, away...and, then, the last few lines actually gave me the goosebumps...he joined her in the nether world...you rendered me mute, with such a riveting story...Thank you for penning down something so unconventional...Jenny...and, much appreciate your dropping the PM Smile

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 9:51am | IP Logged
love fr loveones never die
nice os..!!

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 9:53am | IP Logged
Rooh se rooh ke darmiya ishq ke hai hazaron jahan yah khuda tu de de mujhe ek jahan...des r da li9z dat came in2 my mind reading dis...itz just awsommmiiieee i'm crying..:'( gosh itz so beautiful story yaar...mwahz jenny di u made me all mushy mushy...lavanya had bn with arnav 1st but den dumpd him n got engagd 2 her eldr brothr & uska bhai bhi happily luking 4wrd 2 settle dwn with his lil bro's ex...both r just pathaic...den sad arnav was sitting alone whn khushi came da 1 who was waiting 4 him since 4evr n she gave his restless soul peace & den dey both decide 2 meet again & nxt morng he cumz he finds his coat der with dose flowrs...n at da end Mr.Raizada told his wife dat khushi died many yrz ago...awwwiiieee dat girl cudn't c hr luv hurt evn 4m heavn...sach iss pyaar ko main kya naam doon...mwahz nxt tym jenny di if u write somthing lyk dis send a tissue box 4 me & u myt try write nodr dis tym of OS in future i wud luv it realy..:)

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