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Never the time & place & the loved one together(OS (Page 12)

-FriedriceJi- IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 6384

Posted: 27 June 2013 at 4:05am | IP Logged
You dropped the bomb in the end. I was travelling through the sands with Arnav and Khushi. Never thought of it in that way.

You so cruel Jen! LOL
Arnav married some Amita?!

I'm back to asli duniya!
She came to meet him even from the dead! Well she kept her promise. Felt bad!

You need to write happy n romantic OS next.
Pretty please?

I'll wait like a good bacchi!


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supriya.arshi IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 4662

Posted: 27 June 2013 at 4:36am | IP Logged
This is really good...yeah True Love does live on ForeverClapClap ... i loved it Heart

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Drkk IF-Dazzler

Joined: 31 December 2012
Posts: 3023

Posted: 27 June 2013 at 7:46am | IP Logged
diffrnt and beautiful. Lovd it

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CheshireBilli IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 4190

Posted: 27 June 2013 at 8:24am | IP Logged
Oh my!

That was definitely nothing like anything I usually read and I have to say, I really really liked it!
Sure it sounds far-fetched. But maybe not so much after all.

I don't know.

I like to believe that love has the power to encompass time and distance and even dimensions. Whether it can really or not, is a different thing.

And although the predominant feeling was melancholic, I didn't really feel awfully upset in the end! More like a sense of uplifting peace. Because in some weird way, Arnav DID find his peace of mind and love. And Khushi's long wait came to an end.

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FeistyDewdrop Goldie

Joined: 24 October 2012
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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 9:02am | IP Logged
Iam awestruck at how beautifully u pen down the emotions..
Dis one shot shook my heart hard..

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deepti1906 Goldie

Joined: 11 June 2012
Posts: 1375

Posted: 27 June 2013 at 9:56am | IP Logged
Everything was so beautiful that I had a constant smile on my face, but that one line brought tears to my eyes...Cry

I loved that even though he didn't thought about her all these years, she was always there in his subconscious mind. And that he did love her. And she did brought peace to him

Absolutely beautifuly and painfully wonderful... Hats off dear...:)

Edited by deepti1906 - 27 June 2013 at 9:59am

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TrueLoveIs4ever Groupbie

Joined: 19 December 2012
Posts: 77

Posted: 27 June 2013 at 10:12am | IP Logged
What a chilling OS Jenny! It was unusual but I liked it it since I have not read anything like it on IF. Great job and once again you have left in tears! But nonetheless I can't wait to read more from you!

P.S.: I am so excited to read more from ALS!

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ArshiDewanee IF-Rockerz

Joined: 25 September 2012
Posts: 5810

Posted: 27 June 2013 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
such an emotonal nd heart aching os..
you again made me cry jenny..
beautifully written..
love da way u potray der emotions..jst amazing..
u always make me speechless by ur wonderful writing..
so arnav is hurt by seeing his love in his brothers arm..poor soul..
even though a spirit khushi comes 2 ease da pain of her love although he even doesnt remember her..
love da arshi's sweet convo of der childhood..
so arnav also die too..finally arnav found solace..khushi kept her promise in both da world althought he forget it..
hats off 2 u jenny 4 dis beautiful os..

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