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Never the time & place & the loved one together(OS (Page 11)

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 7:35pm | IP Logged
sad & beautiful.

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 9:05pm | IP Logged

Hi Jenny,

That was soulful!!Clap

You know it reminded me of the following line from Heer Ranjha scene -

"Yaha na sahi, shayaad ek alag duniya hogi, jaha tum aur main kabhi alag nahi honge"  

Of course, Khushi was waiting for him forever; she kept her promise in both the worlds, even when Arnav didn't keep his promise. Love is beyond all the worlds, its beyond life and death, its beyond physical presence. It's about culmination of two souls.    

"As beautiful as Happiness", you are magical with words. That's one of the most beautiful lines.

Beautifully written OS, keep them coming, in between drooling over Mr. Foster and blushing at your teasers I do not mind these kind of pleasant surprises!!


Cheers

Geeta



Edited by Crazy4Sobti - 26 June 2013 at 9:18pm

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 9:22pm | IP Logged
At the rate you're going I'm going to lose half my weight in tears! You made me cry again...so beautiful, heart achingly so, Jenny.

I am in awe of the way you convey the characters' emotions with such feeling...

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 11:09pm | IP Logged
Khushis ghost killed an innocent man..it's creepy ,

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
Jenny, this was again beautifully written... and the poem by Robert Browning... Day Dreaming

I felt the shivers and the tears and ... the peace...

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
A master piece Jenny, you've proved once again that you are a versatile writer and the portray of emotions was wonderfully done. Hats off to you Jenny honey Clap

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 12:52am | IP Logged
that was superb and so beautifully written:)

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 1:36am | IP Logged
That was a emotional update
awesome

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