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Never the time & place & the loved one together(OS (Page 10)

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:08pm | IP Logged
oh wow... that was weird n lovely at the same time :)
very beautifully written... awww khushi cant not see him in any kind of pain :) 
im sad now... i need to go find something funny to read or just get bk to work :P ;)

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
it was a really beautiful os 
i loved it

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
That was interesting and a little chilling!!  Great concept!

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 2:44pm | IP Logged
spine tingling. specially the line about how he lay down and drowned himself in the scent of lilies.

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 3:47pm | IP Logged
Jenny,
 
I didn't find it weird!
 
I cant put it in any particular genre though.. but still I liked it!
 
It reminded me of TIH.. A girl's love that Lived on.. Smile 
 
in TIH you said.. Love is eternal! I remember.. and that is what it reflected.
 
and one another thing.. which relates this story to TIH..
 
that this Love also started at the tender age of Childhood. Love the way how you always covered the entire life span.
 
They were inseperable since they were Kids.. Just like Khushi and Arnav of Mewad.Embarrassed
 
I so enjoyed reminscing the essence of TIH in this short OS. the story that got into me so much!Smile
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 4:12pm | IP Logged
omg the ending ... :( 

as OS its fine .. but if it were a SS i would have cried my heart out .. 

nice one .. 

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 4:24pm | IP Logged
Wonderful OSClap

M. Night Shyamalan style:)

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 6:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by IPK007

Originally posted by incandescent

Wow Jenny. That was beautiful.

I am sad and happy at the same time. Sad because they both left this world and happy because they were together in the end...even though their togetherness is beyond what is perceived as reality.

Arnav and Khushi are eternal lovers and their love transcends the boundaries of life and death. He may have had feelings for Lavanya and it hurt him to see her with his brother and he felt betrayed. But his one true love was Khushi and ultimately he found his solace in her.

Very intriguing. 


PS: Had to read it for the second time because I kept thinking why the scent of lilies...it took me a while to understand that. 

Hey...thanks for your wonderful, insightful comment..and I'm glad you understood the significance of lilies. Called flowers of death by Keats, they are used very often in funerals. But on the other hand, their association with Easter makes them a symbol of rebirth too..:)


You're welcome. I was not aware that it's a symbol of rebirth too. Now I guess there is another way of seeing it too……a new beginning…..I hope I am not going off-track here.

 




Edited by incandescent - 26 June 2013 at 6:41pm

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