Never the time & place & the loved one together(OS - Page 15

Amazing update...
Beautifully writtn...Really lovd it...

hey jenny u specialise in connectin to heart by ur writing its strucks sum chords in heart Love is eternal n u just described it more beautifully in dis Os SUPERLATIVE is only word dat cumes in my mind thanx for d pm n do cntnu writing such stuffs

Just one word...Beautiful...😳 Loved it...!!! 😊

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Very interesting ...i would have never thought writing like this but i loved it ..it reminded me of movie Talaash...

Awesome start n loved the concept

Lovely. I have read OS-es where either one of them are a ghost/spirit and both of them eventually die and meet in another paradise. Edited by SilentShadow - 10 years ago

Wow jenny,this is beautiful and different.loved it.

it was indeed unusual..
I loved so much .
so arnav died too?
very well written

Ufff jenny reading the last lines of ur story his fathers lines, my heart skipped a beat, it was beautifully heart wrenching, awe i love khushi