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gopikaaji

@gopikaaji

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

...my eyes r moisten...but i know ARSHI...is/are inseparable...they soul-mate...and i love them madly...even death can't do nothing they r one...and dear for us...

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kondhili

@kondhili

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 10 years ago

Jen you wrote a new story...😲

Yeh kab hua? kaise hua? aur hame kissine bataya nahi...

Mera res let me read and come back to this...RES

**Edited**

Aww Jen that was such a poignant and vivid tale that you had going around there.

The same Arnav and the same khushi, but still not the same.

A khushi who has come from way beyond just so that she can give some solace and comfort to her Arnav. But was she really there or did Arnav just conjure her up, but you mentioned the coat which makes its way back to the bench.

So heartbroken as i am i will have to accept that it was khushi who reached from beyond the grave to comfort her soul mate...

Lovely jen...it was awesome as always.

Edited by kondhili - 10 years ago

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ashw99

@ashw99

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

This was amazing jenny...
She died when she was sixteen its so sad, he was so happy to meet her.
She was spirit came to give him peace.
They are so made for eachother.
Loved it truly.

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incandescent

@incandescent

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

Wow Jenny. That was beautiful.

I am sad and happy at the same time. Sad because they both left this world and happy because they were together in the end...even though their togetherness is beyond what is perceived as reality.

Arnav and Khushi are eternal lovers and their love transcends the boundaries of life and death. He may have had feelings for Lavanya and it hurt him to see her with his brother and he felt betrayed. But his one true love was Khushi and ultimately he found his solace in her.

Very intriguing.

PS: Had to read it for the second time because I kept thinking why the scent of lilies...it took me a while to understand that.

Edited by incandescent - 10 years ago

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Archna

@archnahardik123

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

What did you do yaar. You made me cry.😭

God she died waiting for him and he forget her. How sad it is. Ad she come back to him, to meet him.

If I am right he also died to be with her or she came to take him with her.

Beautiful and very touch story.

Thanks for updating.

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shree10

@shree10

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 10 years ago

Jenny what came over you??

That was sweet before last para. It turned spooky.. then!

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chaitali

@chaitali12

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

So i find khushi dead here? No doubt u wrote it very nicely. .amazing really. . But this is the 4th os i'm reading today where either arnav or khushi is dead. . Wat a day! ! !

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553713

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

That was simply brilliant Jenny! It was different, a nice different :)

It was just so full of emotions, truly moving :) A sad but somehow a happy ending too.

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

Wow Jenny this was beautiful, but had me in tears... Can't take sad stuff like this... 😭

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1chilly

@1chilly

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 10 years ago

One thing I am not too sure about here, Jen, did Arnav also die in this story.

Khushi came to his aid beczuse she loved him and he was upset as his love was marrying his brother.

But did he die too? Since in the end his parents are looking at his picture and discussing him I got this impression. Could be wrong.

It was different. All stories cannot end happily, as happily ever afters are rare in real life.

Beautiful story. I liked it.

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