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Mayur Love Never Looses#4 Note/Pg-100 (Page 81)

Shafy_Kaira_MN IF-Sizzlerz

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Love Never Looses


[After 2 WEEKS]

It's been whole two weeks when everyone were leading a peacefull life…It was a Sunday morning..Shriya was playing a game with her Dadu and Dadda where the ladies were in kitchen….Chatting themselves….After lunch…Shriya went for her afternoon nap when Mr Sharma called up Mayank and Nupur to their room…On reaching his room he said to Mr.Sharma,"Dad aapne bulaya…".  Mr.Sharma asked them to settle down…they infront of him and Mrs.Sharma …Mr.Sharma handled an envelope to him…and gestured him to take it…he took while asking him,"Ye sab kya hain Dad..".

Mrs.Sharma said answering to his question,"Tum dono ke honeymoon tickets….".She literally surprised Mayank and Nupur he said in a bit reluctant way," –sab kyu..I mean iski kya zarurat thi…".Joining him Nupur said,"Haan Maa…Papa…ye sab…kya..!!! Rehne dijiye..".Mr.Sharma said in abit authoritive tone,"Mene tum dono ko tumhare opinion jatane k liye nahi bulaya hain balki ye kene k liye bulaya hain ki pack up your bags kal shaam ki flight hain Hawaii ki…".Mayank said still not accepting,"But Dad…".Mr.Sharma cut him in between and said ,"Koi par ver nahi..beta abhi tum dono ki nayi zindagi ki shurwat hui hain..thoda to apna samay ek doosre ko do…tumhare pyaar ko tumhari zarurat hain…".Mrs.Sharma said,"Haan beta…thoda time tum logo ko ek doosre ko dena chahiye…I hafta…ek saath thoda time spend ker lo..fir to life long responsibility uthaani hain…".

Nupur said,"Maa….per Shriya..".Mrs.Sharma said,"Uski chinta kyu kerti hain….Vo tab tak apne Dadu-Dadi k saath rahegi…isme kya problem hain…".Mayank said,"Agar vo na maani to…".Mr.Sharma replied to him,"Mein samjhaaunga usse…tum dono filhaal tayiyaari karo…".Mayank hugged his head whispering,"Thank you".While Nupur blushed a little and than touched their feet.

At night Mr.Sharma broke this news to Shriya when she was busy reading one of her story book….the book almost drop from her hands…she stood up on her Dadu's bed and said while putting her hands on her waist,"Dadu itni badi baat aapne mujhe nahi batayi…aap Mamma aur Dadda ko akele akele ghumne bhej rahe ho…hum bhi chalenge…".Mr.Sharma made her to sit down on her bed and politely explained her,"Beta…Mamma aur Dadda…ko bhi to ek doosre k liye time chahiye….nahi Dadda mamma se thik se baat ker paa rahe   aur nahi unhe time hain…aise mein vo ek doosre ko time de paayenge…ab kya aap nahi chahte ki jese Mamma Dadda aapse pyar kerte hain utna hi vo ek doosre se karen…".She thought for a second and than said,"Haan Dadu mein bhi yahi chahti hoon ki Mamma Dadda bhi ek doosle se bahut pyaal kare..".Mr.Sharma said,"To fir iss baar unko jaane do…".She said after a brief pause,"Agar aise baat hain to thik hain..fil to mein aul aap khoob masti krenge…".Mr.Sharma said hugging her,"Haan khub krenge…!!!!".

Getting a green signal from Shriya they packed their bags…though Nupur  instructed Shriya not to do any such naughty work making her grandparent's in problem..while Mayank kissed her and said her to enjoy and to miss them equally…till they come..Bidding them they went towards the boarding section…By the time this thought haven't crossed Nupur that she is entering the plane..her nerves..shudder with a thought that she is going on honeymoon with her husband…unknown to her…blush crept on her cheeks..she felt shy unknowingly….taking there seats…finally Mayank asked her after noticing her quiet long,"Nupur kuch hua hain kya..!!".Nupur replied still in her thoughts,"Huh…Hmm…".Mayank thought that  his wife has completely lost it he touched her shoulder softly and asked her,"Nupur…kya hua…aisa kya soch rahi hoo…aur itna kya muskra rahi hoo…".She came out from her thoughts and said covering herself,"Nahi kuch nahi…".Mayank asked her,"Kuch to hain…".She replied in a bit hesitant way,"Who..kya hain vo..".Mayank asked her,"Mein mein kya Nupur..".She said finally composing herself,"Mein vo humare honeymoon k baare mein soch rahi thi… ".She completed the last word with a slight blush on her cheek...It took few seconds for him to realize what she is talking about…he said with mechievious in his tone,"Aur kya kya soch rahi tum…".She get that he is pulling her leg…she slapped on his shoulder and said putting her head on his shoulder,"Mayank please  tease mat karo na…mujhe sharm aa rahi hain..".Mayank said enveloping his arms around her,"Haaye – Haaye Mrs.Sharma…ab to aap humari hi hain…!!!".

In this honeymoon Nupur discovered the utter romantic part of Mayank and that's why she had complaint all the while that he didn't let her see the whole Hawaii…coz he hardly gave her chance to move out of their bedroom….With these small fight..and lots of love..they lead a happy life…

[After 22 Years]

The time span of 22 years how easily has passed no one had ever noticed…Now apart from Shriya, Mayank and Nupur has two more twin children Sarthak and Tanmay….both were 4 years younger from Shriya…but are like heart and soul of her..she loves them very much and vice-versa..they can't even stand any word against their sister..even from their parent's…They had also…made Mayank-Nupur one of the proud parent's…where Sarthak has joined Mayank in business…Shriya was their company's Business Lawyer…and Tanmay…he was a one of the famous singer of the country who gained popularity with very very good songs…he had dedicated his first song to Mayank-Nupur..which brought tears in their he sang it very beautifully….

Well let me tell you the present scenario…where…Shriya is standing infront of Mayank and Nupur with her brother's beside them…and her Dadu-Dadi..who all were waiting for her to speak her up…when the door bell rang she opened the gate and found Nakul..The C.E.O of Adhiraj's company entered the house…giving a meaningful look to Shriya….he greeted everyone when Mayank asked her,"Shriya tum bataogi bhi ki tumne hum sab ko yahan kyu bulaya hain..kya baat hain shona…".

She took a breath look to Nakul who gave him assurance..he held his hand and she said,"Dadda…me and Nakul love each other…".Mayank and her both brother's said in union,"Kya". While Mr.Sharma and Mrs.Shrma were quiet happy and Nupur her happiness was of no bound…as they know Nakul personally also..and for them if their daughter has chosen one could be as perfect for her..she was very happy…Sarthak slowly came out from his shock,"Di..aap ye kya keh rahi hoo….".Tanmay said excitedly,"Wow..Di…you know even I knew he is best for you…".Mayank said,"Ye sab kya hain…".Nakul finally spoke up,"This is right Uncle..kab kese pata nahi mujhe Shriya se pyar ho gaya I really love her…".Mayank gave a stern look to him..which was supported by Sarthak,"Hum kese yakeen ker le..!!!".Nupur finally stood and said,"Tu chup ker…baap ki tarah sadu hi bolega…I am so happy…Nakul don't worry…humari taraf se haan hain..".While Tanmay moved forward and hugged him…It took couple of minutes for Mayank to realize…thinking that his daughter has finally grown up she stood and hugged Nakul whispering into his ear,"Meri beti ka hameshaa khayal rakhna…".Nakul touched his feet..assuring him he will….Finally her wedding got fixed with love of her life and soon everyone accept it…

Soon the wedding day arrived…When Nupur came to take her to Mandap her eyes filled with tears seeing how much her daughter is looking beautifull in this attire…she put kajal behind her ear…protecting her from every evil eye…..and took her to the mandap..".Seeing her coming down in this wedding attire…his heart filled with tears seeing how beautiful his daughter is looking today and today she will be gone forever..she'll be leaving him to go to her husband's house..he still remember that small Shriya whom he saw at the Hospital ward…cuddling next to her mother..and also the one…when she first time said Dadda…all the flashback raomed infront of his eyes..filling his eyes…

Doing kanyadaan he felt..the feeling of father when he gave his daughter to another one's hand…for ever…the bidaii was extremdly difficult for Shriya..she not only has to control her brother's who were shedding tears like a small child but also her father who was not leaving her hand..stopping her to sit in the car….Mayank kissed her on her forhead and said,"Apna khayal rakhna gudiya…koi bhi baat ho…bas ek phone Dadda aa jaayenge..".She said wiping his tears,"I know Dadda..I Love you…".Mayank hugged her and said,"I love you too..".She than hugged Nupur…both of them their love mesaages to each other…she furthur went to her Dadu – Dadi and Nanu-Nani taking their greetings…and at last but not the least her brothers…she handled them hankercheif and said,"Itna bhi na roo ki aisa lage ki bidaii meri nahi tumhari hain….".They laughed a bit and than hugged her saying,"We love you Di..".She took hugged them back whispering,"Love you too….".

Finally Shriya went..and settle in her new life…Soon Sarthak and Tanmay also got married…their family was complete..their life was complete..and everytime with hardships of their life..their love was standing with them as support..and they also never had let their love to finally wins over everything…

The End…
Thank you                                                                                                                                                                                                                    

Edited by shafy_MN - 20 August 2013 at 1:07pm

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rimshazeb Goldie

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
Sorry for late ..I know sab sa pehla res kiya tha n sab sa end me comment kar rhi ho...very sorry

This was a perfect ending shafy...very beautiful n emotion too..
Shriya k shadi b ho gyi ..itna bari ho gyi humari shriya...seriously me b pardhta pardhta ek dam sa itni emotional ho gyi...sach time kse guzar jata h pta he nhi chalta...dekho na yeh ff b htam ho gya... Ouch
Hmm but every good thing come to be an end...
This ff is always remain in my heart...Heart
N come back soon with another mayur beautiful ff shafy

Edited by rimshazeb - 22 August 2013 at 6:37am

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drfizaahmed IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
a wonderful ff with a beautiful ending
perfect.. hope to read more of ur work

like the way u ended on shriya being lead as mostly it was shriya the show taker in this stroy loved her the most...

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-Paulomi- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 9:11pm | IP Logged
Mast mast mast ending thi.

Last mein MAYUR budhdhe ho gaye.LOL

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gopi06 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 9:54pm | IP Logged
beautiful ending
waiting for more stories from you
thanks for the pm

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Bhatakti_atma IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 10:28pm | IP Logged was soo emotional..
perfect end..
Beautifully written Smile
new ff kab a raha hai??

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rai-kishori. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 10:36pm | IP Logged
Wonderful Epilogue !!!

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
Aww it endedCryCry I loved the epilouge dear... SmileSmile it was nice reading this story Smile

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