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Mayur Love Never Looses#4 Note/Pg-100 (Page 60)

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Posted: 21 July 2013 at 4:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by parul_bansal

romantic...

Thank you

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Posted: 21 July 2013 at 8:52pm | IP Logged
Lovely updt.

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Posted: 22 July 2013 at 5:33am | IP Logged
chalo koi baat nahi late hi sahi main gayi hui 

come to the point 

hmmm to kafi kuch miss kar diya tha maine 
but don't worry, i read the all chappy who miss them 
so finally his and her mom dad agree for there marriage
and now they r do dil and ek jaan nice ha 

thanks for pm me and sorry for late reply 

gujarti hai raatein humaari 
tere hi palako ke chhav meinse 
katane laga tha din humara 
tere hi ek najar ke ishaaro meinse 
pata nahi chala tha humhe ki 
kaha they hum aur jiye ja rahe they tere bina 
rah bhi to gumshuda lagane lagi thi ab to tere bina 
par abhi humane tujhe hasil kar liya hai mere sanam 
ab tu hi mera din hein aur tu hi meri shaam 
ab nahi jina chahta hui vo main pal 
zindagi hai bas tere hi naam  



love u always 
deepa 

 

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Posted: 22 July 2013 at 9:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Lovely updt.

Thanks a lot
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Posted: 22 July 2013 at 9:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by deepa5

chalo koi baat nahi late hi sahi main gayi hui 

come to the point 

hmmm to kafi kuch miss kar diya tha maine 
but don't worry, i read the all chappy who miss them 
so finally his and her mom dad agree for there marriage
and now they r do dil and ek jaan nice ha 

thanks for pm me and sorry for late reply 

gujarti hai raatein humaari 
tere hi palako ke chhav meinse 
katane laga tha din humara 
tere hi ek najar ke ishaaro meinse 
pata nahi chala tha humhe ki 
kaha they hum aur jiye ja rahe they tere bina 
rah bhi to gumshuda lagane lagi thi ab to tere bina 
par abhi humane tujhe hasil kar liya hai mere sanam 
ab tu hi mera din hein aur tu hi meri shaam 
ab nahi jina chahta hui vo main pal 
zindagi hai bas tere hi naam  



love u always 
deepa 

 

Thank you so mcuh Deepa...

Specially for poemm...
Thanks a lot..
you brought tears in my eyes..
This is the most lovely comment have ever got..thanks a ton dear

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Posted: 22 July 2013 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
Plz update soon

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Posted: 23 July 2013 at 3:37am | IP Logged
Koi mujhe sambhalo...kahin hum gir na parey.

OMG!!!! At the end of the update I ws blushing and smiling.
It ws so so beautiful , romantic and HOT.
Beautifully written.
Pure love, only love.
,"Doobna chahta hoon aaj mein inn aakhon ki gehraiyon mein'.".
,"Roka kisne hain Mayank apne saath mujhe bhi le chalo..mehsoss kerne do tumhare pyar ko'"
I liked these dialogues alot.
Bohat khubsurat.
Today they one.
Mayank made her,his in the  utmost   loveable way.
Tonight their love won, Love never loses.


Edited by Irum. - 23 July 2013 at 3:36am

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deepa0507 Senior Member
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Posted: 23 July 2013 at 4:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shafy_MN

Originally posted by deepa5

chalo koi baat nahi late hi sahi main gayi hui 

come to the point 

hmmm to kafi kuch miss kar diya tha maine 
but don't worry, i read the all chappy who miss them 
so finally his and her mom dad agree for there marriage
and now they r do dil and ek jaan nice ha 

thanks for pm me and sorry for late reply 

gujarti hai raatein humaari 
tere hi palako ke chhav meinse 
katane laga tha din humara 
tere hi ek najar ke ishaaro meinse 
pata nahi chala tha humhe ki 
kaha they hum aur jiye ja rahe they tere bina 
rah bhi to gumshuda lagane lagi thi ab to tere bina 
par abhi humane tujhe hasil kar liya hai mere sanam 
ab tu hi mera din hein aur tu hi meri shaam 
ab nahi jina chahta hui vo main pal 
zindagi hai bas tere hi naam  



love u always 
deepa 

 

Thank you so mcuh Deepa...

Specially for poemm...
Thanks a lot..
you brought tears in my eyes..
This is the most lovely comment have ever got..thanks a ton dear


arrey pagali yeh to haq banta hai 
ki tu achhi comment paye
kyunki tunhe humara dil jo khush kar diya hai 
itna achha ff likhakar 

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