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Mayur Love Never Looses#4 Note/Pg-100 (Page 42)

shafy_MN IF-Sizzlerz

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Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Very nice updt. Finally mayur got married.

Thank you

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3-4 chapters more..
this ff is going to end

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Here is my next part

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Love Never Looses

Part 69

They started their journey towards their house...seeing her still shedding her tears..he held her hand firmly assuring through his be fine..he'll be there for  her always...she passed a weak smile to him while he wiped out her tears..making her to smile lightly...

The car stopped outside his house'the house'which is home now'which decorated very beautifully'to welcome them , they came out of their trance'glancing to their home Mayank said,"Nupur'tumhara ghar aa gaya'"

She felt so pleasured that this is her gives convivial to her heart'an authority that this is her home..where she will be living with her husband her daughter and her  in-laws'she looked to her house for a quiet well when it's image come out to be more real and near..she sensed that Mayank had opened the door of the car for her..and was forwarding his hand for her to come out'

She placed her hands on his'.coming out from car'taking her steps towards their home'yeah..!! It feels bliss awesome of thinking that's it's their home..

Covering the primrose path which was filled with rose petals they reached upto the door where they were welcome by the "Pooja Thali" helded by Mrs.Sharma'with huge smile lingering on her face'. 

She done some arti and allowed them to enter the house whole heartedly'The kalash placed at the mid of the entrance'Nupur pushed it a little through her right foot thumb and with that they both entered the home'

Shriya by the time asleep on her Dadu's lap..he was sitting on the couch seeing every ritual..while holding Shriya 'who was sleeping soundly'she was very itred when she arrived here..and soon fallen asleep in her Dadu's lap'

They sat down with one more ritual where they have to find ring which is submerged in the deep the mixture of milk water and roses'in first two attempt firstly Mayank got the ring and second time Nupur now it was tie and they were doing third time..whoever will win this game will rule over his/her spouse'

They both were searching for the ring..but Mayank instead of searching it was playing with Nupur..had holded her hand'beneath passing love filled to her'

She glared him to leave her hand but he didn't listen to it'she slowly'pinched him...due to which his grip loosened and they began started searching the was Mayank who found it...but he didn't showed to anyone he slowly..touched Nupur's small finger and moved the ring towards her'she bewilderly looked towards him while he simply smiled to her..he moved his hand out of it accepting his defeat and hence at the end Nupur was announced winner..
He made her wear that ring'quckly pecking her that  finger without being noticed by anyone..leaving her scarlet red..

Diya:Yeah..!!! Nupur won..Now Mayank you have to follow every order and tantrum of Nupur for your whole life'

Nupur just blushed while Mayank said,"I am all her's Diya.."

Benji:Wooh'.awesome dude..

Sharing their laughter Mrs.Sharma took Nupur to his bedroom'now that bedroom could be called of her's..her and her husband bedroom'as she entered it she was mesmerized for a moment it was glorious..resplendetly decorated..the bed of roses'with layers of flower hanging around it'a sweet aura was covering the room leaving a sensous and pleaure feeling 'her trance of thoughts were broken when Mrs.Sharma held her shoulders making her to sit in between the bed..on those rose petals..making her veil down'whispering in her ear with a naughty glint in her voice,"Mein Mayank ko uper bhejti hoon'".All she could do was lowering her head mantling in more pink in colour'

Mrs.Sharma came to him who was presently been surrounded by lot's of his cousin and friends and said to him,"Jaa..Mayank'Nupur tera wait ker rahi hogi'"

Leaving them he asked her about Shriya,"Maa Shriya'!!!"

Mrs.Sharma:Vo bahut gehri nind mein humare kamre mein tere Dad k saath so rahi hain'aur vese bhi aaj ki raat tere aur Nupur ki raat hain'Shriya ki tension na le..she'll be fine with us'

Hugging her he whispered in her ear,"I love you Mom..!! Thank you so much.."

Mrs.Sharma:You're welcome'acha ab jaa..vo wait kar rahi hogi'

After lot of teasing and requesting when he literally'begged infront of his cousins and friends than he was allowed to enter his room..he never thought he would be looted so miserably today just for entering his own bedroom which now his wife's bedroom also'

Entering the room first task he does was locking his door properly so that no one could able to disturb their private moment'he turned his eyes towards the lady sitting on the centre of the bed with veil cobering her face'..

The whole room was filled with a unique aura'a warm pleasurely feeling giving to his heart'his heart skip a beat seeing a ravishing beauty sitting'folding her knees upto her face..her splendid hands were resting on her knees..and he could surely say a glowy smile must be lingering on her face'automatically his feet went towards her'

Her heart thud a beat when he felt a shift on the bed indicating he is sitting right infront of her'she clutched her knees order to control her heartbeats but it seems tonight it would be rather impossible to stop their rapid speed of beating'

He unveiled her face'holding her chin between his two finger's making her eyes to fall on his which were being lowered'before'he carresed her cheek with back of her finger's making her to shudder with his soft touch'redding her more and more'

He neared his face to her whispered hoarsely in her ear,"You are looking extremely beautiful'"

She smiled shyly..while lowered her head'but again looked to him when he seriously yet profoundly asked her,"Nupur, is it true that a girl look extremely beautiful in her wedding attire'indeed you are looking simply stunning'when ever I saw you I just fall in love with you again and again today'I love you so much Nupur'"

She too whispered in her soft tone cupping his face in her hands,"I Love you too Mayank'"

He took her hands which were holding his face between his..and kissed her fingers'sending Shiver's 'after having their brief eye-lock they broke apart'and he spoke,"I think you should change'It's already very heavy'make your self comfortable..I'll just come'"

She nodded her head and moved towards the dressing table where he moved inside the bathroom'he came out wearing his white coloured vest and deep blue pyjama and entered in the room  soon he entered the room his breath stuck in his throat and why not his beautifull wife'was standing infront of the mirror struggling with one of her necklace'her duptta was off from her head and her long silky hair were spreading on her back..making him tangled between those hairlocks'

He reached upto her standing at her back very close her admiring his frowning wife'after a couple of seconds he broke the silence with a pinch of tease in his voice,"Uff..!!! ye zalim necklace'he is so responsible to bring frown on my newly wedded wife'"

She glanced him through mirror where he just passed his grin..she asked him,"Mayank..aese kya dekh rahe ho'help me out'I'am really getting irritated of this necklace'."

"I am always at your service my darling'"Saying he touched her shoulder'while she had already left the necklace'softly and swiftly he pushed her all hair aside on her one shoulder..making his finger's to brushed against her skin..making her to shiver'she closed her eyes to feel the moment'the way his tender finger's were touching her skin'giving goosebumps to her body enabling her to loose herself'.she opened her eyes..with great difficulty only to see his erotic gaze on her'in shyness she lowered her eyes'he removed her necklace'following by her other ornaments including her earings..and necklaces..hugging her from back he slowly removed her each and every bangle'softly and sensously'her heart was poundering at a great speed'she closed her absorb each and every feeling..with capture his every touch on her body..her soul'slowly she felt something ticklish near her neck as she opened she was all dumbfounded'

He made her wore a beautifull pendent it was the same  pendent which Shriya and Mayank had selected for her and made her wore that pendent..she was all ashtonished to see such a beautifull pendent'touching that pendent she said in alittle shaky voice


"Kesa laga.."

"It's lovely'beautifull.."

"Hmm.." glancing to her properly and than said,"But tumse kam'"

"Tumne ye'"a huge smile came on her face "thank you so much'for such a lovely gift.."

He hold her from her waist..while resting her face on her shoulder'making her back to touch his torso',"Hmm thank you to tumhe humari beti ka kehna chahiye'after all she was the one who selected it'"

She was even more amazed to know and asked to confirm what she was hearing is true,"Really'You mean'"


She returned the pressure on his finger'expressing whats going in her heart'she is really very overwhelemed with his gift'

Hope you like it...

Edited by shafy_MN - 20 July 2013 at 3:43am

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First main jhagda karoongi then comment... Tumhe and Paulomi Di ko kya ho Gaya hain?? Dono hi FFs complete karne ke liye utavle ho rahi ho...Angry Agar tum Sach mein ye FF khatam karne wali ho to pahle ek aur FF shuru karo, phir iska end karogi... PleaseeeClown

Loved Mayank's "aa gaya.. Tumhara ghar" wala line...Embarrassed

Mr. Sharma to kafi romantic mood mein lag rahe hainBlushing Nupur ko pendent pasand ayiBig smile ayegi bhi kyun nahi after all Sharmas ne choose ki hain and Sharmas ke choice hamesha achcha hi hote hain...

Continue soon and thanks for the pm..
Looovvveee you*hugs*, muuuah!!

Edited by Humayra - 18 July 2013 at 5:02am

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Originally posted by -Paulomi-


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Have unreserved on pg 47 :)

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