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Mayur Love Never Looses#4 Note/Pg-100 (Page 37)

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Posted: 12 July 2013 at 11:47am | IP Logged
@part 67.
Awesome updat.
Loved it.
Loved their phone convo.Shriya ko bahana bana kr ek dosre ko complement kr rahe they. 
Past mein oon k sath jo howa, kahin na kahin they were still sacred.That is why they connected through phone whole night, to make sure the other one is there, safe and sound.
bhai wah ky baaat hai. trio is looking breath takingly  awsome.
hye the nazar ka tika wala scene ws so cute.
Thnx for PM.

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Posted: 13 July 2013 at 2:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Irum.

@part 66
It ws   mitha mitha update.
Loved it.
Every one ws dancing and enjoying.
Song selection ws awesome.
,JHT ka time yaad dila diya.
Os se bhi better tha.
Nupur ka os k parents k sath wala scene bohat acha tha.
Finally on ko aqal aa gayi.
Ab yeh Mayank, Samrat or Benji kis kam pr lage hein.
Yeh lawyer ka kya chakker hai?
Chalo dekhtey hein.
Thnx for PM.

Thanks a lot...
Tumhe update mitha laga...
chalo achi baat hain...
it's time of their celeberation

mein bhi mjht k uss time ko memorize kerna chahti thi...
tumhe jald hi pata chal jaayega ki benji Mayank and Sam kon se kssm per lage hue hain
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Posted: 13 July 2013 at 11:53am | IP Logged
aj tujhe bhi main sataungi

jaldi update de de- samjhi

bahut araam karli

aur ha meri new concpet ka kya hua

prologue ready karli???


jaldi kar - jaida time maat le


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Posted: 13 July 2013 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Faria.

aj tujhe bhi main sataungi

jaldi update de de- samjhi

bahut araam karli

aur ha meri new concpet ka kya hua

prologue ready karli???


jaldi kar - jaida time maat le



maasi ki engage,ent hain..islye busy hoon usme...
De dungi jaldi...
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Posted: 13 July 2013 at 12:44pm | IP Logged


Love Never Looses

Part 68

akhiya milake channa pawe naa judai we
akhiya milake channa pawe naa judai we
deve naa tari menu saree khudai we
akhiyan milake


[
hE sat up in the mundap'when paditji said,"Kaniya ko bulaiye.."Shriya was sitting besides her father..when she patted him signalling her small finger's towards the stairs'He glanced his gaze where she was pointing seeing his angel..the epitome of love'his beloved looking a mesmerizing beauty in her wedding attire was descending down the stairs..her head was half covered with vail'she was gazing downstairs but still he could feel her cheeks turning red..he was getting completely lost in her 'finally she is coming to him..she is returning to him forever'

]


tare hai barati chandani hai yeh barat
saato phere honge abb haato me leke hath 
saato phere honge abb haato me leke hath 

[

She came to stood beside him..todays stars were twinkling'clapping seeing the beautiful bonding of the loved ones'after such a long time..they too waited for this fatefull night from past four years'

This  is indeed pleasure to watch..two true lovers getting tied knot and bonded with each other forever'He was staring her seeing her ravishing beauty admiring her while all she could was blossming her cheeks dark reddish colour'todays there were speaking..pouring happiness..of todays'

Finally the D-Day arrived in their life of which they both dreamed every night in these four years'finally the day come when they both will be knotted with each other for life time'

]
 

jivan sathee ham diya aur bati ham
jivan sathee ham diya aur bati hum


[

In true sense they were lovers'in true sense they were soulmates'they were bound to be together'else it may happen that Nupur may not have returned to him ever..it may happen that some other girl may come in his life..

But it doesn't happen..because the one almighty was watching them..was protecting them from every evil spirits..and evil eye..from their strong love..though they were been seperated for four years but it was a test from his side testing how strong their love stands or it is like other's also'lame and small and weak..but their love ..the robustness of their love stood fight with every situation..their true love enables him to bend down and turn their destiny that they could able to re-unite again..and blessed them with their symbol of love'their daughter which became their reason to live..reason to love..a sweet angel of their ..an angel of love'

]

tare hai barati chandani hai yeh barat
saato phere honge abb haato me leke hath 
saato phere honge abb haato me leke hath

[

Pandit says.."Ab ab dono ek doosre ko varmala pehenaaye..". Broking their trance..they stood up and for completing the ceremony..a step ahead towards their marriage'

Mayank was a bit tall to Nupur'and had wore pagdi..which aking difficult for Nupur to put varmala on his neck..he bend down infront of his lady love..enabling her wear him the varmala'his sweet gesture was touched by everyone..and mostly by the bride'

Now he made her wore the varmala'gasping the moment in his memories..saving it for life time'his hands around her neck holding the chain of fragrance flowers specially red roses and apricots..increasing the beauty of the aura around them more'she too held the mala..around his neck'both were looking into each other's eyes..sharing the bounce of happiness..which was clearly reflecting from their eyes'

]


jivan sathee ham diya aur bati ham
jivan sathee ham diya aur bati hum

[

The sat down at their place..rest the pooja..and preparation for their marriage started'pandit ji..started his manter-vantr..taking vow from the "agni devta" that their bond be strong for the lifetime'

Mayank slipped his hand inside her dupptta holding her hand..calming her nervousness down'she get little bit starlted at his sudden touch 'but the they way he was holding her hand strongly..she covered her duptta on their enterwing finger's and a sweet  smile appeared on both their faces'

It was pure relation of them which now going to be  named..which will be taking the blessings from the almighty that they will be for each their and bonded today..tomorrow and forever'

]


ganga jamuna se bhee pawan teraa meraa bandhan
teraa prem hai phulvari aur meraa mann hai aangan

[

Pandit ji chants his mantras"Kanya k mata pita ko kanyadaan k liye bulayiee'"

When Mr.Bhushan and Mrs.Bhushan put Nupur's  hand on Mayank'it seems they were giving Mayank his heartbeat back..they were returning life to his soul..basically they were giving his life'to him'blessing him with his love'

She felt goosbumps on her whole body when her parent's took her hand put it on Mayank..where she felt that she is all alone in the wolrd..noone would able to know about her well being..no one knows she is being kidnapped by Dhruv..when she helpless..her inner strength dieing day by day..now today it seems her parent's were giving her'assuring her that now they are handling her to the person who would never leave her side'she will never be helpless'they were giving her strength'her reason to breath'they were making alive her dead desires ..wishes to come true'to come alive


Mr.Bhushan AND Mrs.Bhushan..were more than happy'doing this ritual of their daughter is the biggest dream of any parent..after when she was kidnapped she wasn't there they thought they would never get this chance..but today they felt emmence happy..what we call"CHAR DHAM KI YATRA" Yeas'it's equal to it'and today their heart is just filled with flood of happiness while performing this ritual of their daughter'

]


janmo janmo kaa hee sajanee teraa meraa sath
saato phere honge abb haato me leke hath 
saato phere honge abb haato me leke hath
jivan sathee ham diya aur bati ham 
jivan sathee ham diya aur bati ham

[


Finally the words came from pandit ji mouth of which they were in fact each and everyone out  present their was desperatelty waiting'when finally he proundced"Ab Var-vadhu phero k liye khade ho jaaiye'."

Gunjan does their gatbandhan'strongly and said,"Kitni bhi koshish ker lena ye nahi khulega.." 

when Nupur replied to softly,"Kholna hi kon chahta hain Gunjan'"

They stood up at their taking the "pheras" vow to the "agni devta" that he'll protect their relation from any evil power..while taking their "phera" Mayank holds her hand'promising her that at every turn of their life'he'll be holding her hand like this..for ever..even in every birth he'll be their holding her hand..



too hai jivan me jo pritam sukh nahee mangu duja
aarti nayno se karti hu mann se teree puja

[

Taking the seven "pheras" around "agni devta" they sat on each other's palce..they exchanged their seat postions..sitting on each other's place..depicting..what is mine is your's..and your's is mine'

He smiled to her'seeing a content satisfaction smile on her face..a smile which shows that she is now in a way tat she could be belong to him..tied to him forever'

]

me toh dharm hee samjhun teree kahee hui har bat
saato phere honge abb haato me leke hath
jivan sathee ham diya aur bati ham 
jivan sathee ham diya aur bati ham

[

Finally the words arrived after which they will be fnially one..when pandit ji says,"Vadhu k maang mein sindoor bahre"

She closes her eyes..when he put a tinch of vermillion on her forhead'she felt emmence pleasure..a pleasure that cannot be define'a satisfaction which cannot be expressed it just could be felt'"Ab Vadhu k gale mein mangalsooter  pehenaayiye'"

He made her wore the "mangalsootre" the ultimate symbol that she is his better..half'They took the seven vows where they promised each other to be with each other in their good or bad will always be present as a support..will love each other'till their last breath'would be best friends for each other will give equal respect to their relation and to themselves'"Shaadi sampan hui'aaj se aap dono pati-patni"

These words..were like a far dream come true for them..they both closed their eyes..embeddig these words in themselves'realizing it..that now finally they had been tied for each other..she holds his hand tightly'depicting that now finally she is his ..she belongs to him..he has every right on her she is "Mrs.Nupur Mayank Sharma"..she love this name to the core and finally she got it..her daughter got her father's name officially..she got her Mayank..she is his. And that's biggest happiness for both of them'

]

akhiya milake channa pawe naa judai we 
akhiya milake channa pawe naa judai we 
deve naa tari menu saree khudai we
akhiya milake channa

[
Happiness was reflecting on their faces'they stood up their places taking blessings of their elders'receving hug and lots of blessing from the friends and families'
]

Shriya came upto them..till than she was silent spectator'Mayank picked her up and said,"Ab to Shriya Dadda ki ho gayi officialy"'he hugged her'before placing a kiss on her cheek'

Rest of the time they spent in their photoshoot'and dinner..and the time came of bidaai'their tears also..but there were happiness also'Nupur hugged Mr.And Mrs.Bhushan while they just blessed happiness of their jodi..even Gunjan and 

Samrat too gets emotional'they hugged her and blessed all happiness on their relation..sitting in the car..she bid her family..going to her house..the house which is now belongs to her..the man sitting next to..se belongs to him..she is his..she is his wife..and that's what made her heart flutters..and made her real happy from inside..finally her wait  is over..now she is Mrs.Nupur Mayank Sharma..


Mayank was equally on cloud nine..after the pain of four years he is taking his lawfully wedded wife 'his love to his house..to their house'finally..she became his..he has her..she is all his'.that's what he dreamed off and finally it come true..he internally thanked his almighty and prayed their relation to be knotted together for lifetime..nor just this life..rather in every birth'


Hope you like it


Edited by shafy_MN - 18 July 2013 at 4:13am

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beautiful. finally they got marriied. continue soon

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married? great job!Thumbs Up do pm me when u continue with it.Smile

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Chalo at last vivah sampann hua

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