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Mayur Love Never Looses#4 Note/Pg-100 (Page 31)

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 2:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rimshazeb

Update soon plzz Smile

i'll try my best

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 2:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Faria.

Day n Night i m waiting waiting
why u r not updating??:( :(

I'll update soon..
I am busy these days..
not getting time to write..
sorry..
Please wait for a while I'll complete the part and will update
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Love Never Looses

Part 66

Benji:Now everyone'on dance floor now..Uncle-Aunty..Aanvi Shriya'c'mon..DJ hit the music..

Everyone came at the centre of the hall encircling the jodi..and danced happily enjoyinh their moment'it's great..happiness.was clearing reflecting out from everyone's face..it seems everyone's dream come true'

Gal mitthi mitthi bol, das kaano vich gol
Bajne de taashe dhol, masti mein tu vi dol

[
Mayank-Nupur too joined them danced whole heartedly'
]

Mann de naina tu khol
Chahat ke moti rol

[
Samrat and Gunjan too joined their legs..and Aanvi too joined them up'
]

Dil hunda ae anmol, jedo lashke na tol
Aa sohni tenu chaand ki main choodi pehrawa

[
Mayank immitate towards moon depicting the lines..that he will bring bangles..for her from Moon'holding her hands'
]

Mainu kar de ishaara te main dholi lai aanwa

He immitate doli action saying just give me a hint I'll take you with me today only..
]

Gal mitthi mitthi bol, das kaano vich gol
Bajne de taashe dhol, masti mein tu vi dol

He picked up Shriya in his arms..and danced with..while she too..enjoyed dancing with her father.
]


Jaan leve teri adaa, kaise na koi ho fida
Tera ang sharara jaise maare lishkara sohniye


[
Mr.Sharma immitate these lines actions to Mrs.Sharma making her blush to hell while everyone laughed out'loudly..seeing such an adorng couple..
]

Dekhan ta dil dhadke, tann mein agan bhadke
Surat aisi mannmoni kitta dasta tu hai sohni heeriye

[
Mr.Bhushan too danced..and depict these words to his wife..who became too shy and hide behind her daughter..while Nupur hugged her tightly'
]

Gal mitthi mitthi bol, das kaano vich gol
Bajne de taashe dhol, masti mein tu vi dol
Mann de naina tu khol
Chahat ke moti rol
Dil hunda ae anmol, jedo lashke na tol
Aa sohni tenu chaand ki main choodi pehrawa
Mainu kar de ishaara te main dholi lai aanwa

[
Every couple'danced with his wife and too with everyone..enjoying every moment of their day'elders were happy that finally their children are getting settle down..that's all they had dreamed in their life..and now their dreams were fulling infront of their eyes..leaving a gush  of happiness..in their hearts..
]


Chahne wala hoon tera, dekh le dard zara
Tu jo vekhe ik nazar kara lakhan da shukar sohniye

[
Mayank said these lines to her'conveying for god's grace he got her and will promise to her whole life..
[

Dekh to tu keh ke mujhe, jaan bhi de dunga tujhe
Tera aisa hoon deewana, tune ab tak yeh na jaana heeriye

[
Benji too immitate she lines to Diya'but also taking care of her..that she doesn't have much stress,and carressed her bulging womb'sensing his..baby also enjoying the moment..
]


Gal mitthi mitthi bol, das kaano vich gol
Bajne de taashe dhol, masti mein tu vi dol
Mann de naina tu khol
Chahat ke moti rol
Dil hunda ae anmol, jedo lashke na tol
Aa sohni tenu chaand ki main choodi pehrawa
Mainu kar de ishaara te main dholi lai aanwa
Gal mitthi mitthi bol, gal mitthi mitthi bol

[
The sangeet ceremony ended with the extreme happiness on everyone's face may be these happiness were compensation to the pain everyone had gone through specially Mayank-Nupur and Shriya in these four years..
]

After the huge celeberation in their sangeet ceremony..everyone recites back to their home'.

Nupur had changed her dress..and was applying night cream when she heard a knock on her door'

Nupur:Come in'

It was Mr.Bhushan and Mrs.Bhushan'seeing them she instantly stood up ,"Maa..Bauji'aaye na'kya hua'"

Mrs.Bhushan'sitting on the bed..also making her to sit besides her..carressed her cheek and said,"Kuch nahi beta'bas akhiri baar tujhe dekhne ka jee kar raha tha'"Her eyes were filled with tears but still she composed herself to not to shed them'

Mr.Bhushan to joined her"Nupur beta'tu humari eklauti aulad hain..aur meri sabse laadli..mein jaanta hoon mere behaviour se tu kahin na kahin bahut hurt hui..but beta'agar mein sach bolu to ek bhi din aisa na gaya hoga jab mene apni bacchi ko yaad na kiya hua'" while saying lump formed in his throat'.

Mrs.Bhushan:Humare liye teri khushiyon se zaayeda important kuch nahi hain..tu chali gayi..thi..hum to bina aulad k ho gaye the..in do buddha buddhi ko'Maa-Bauji kehne wala koi nahi tha in 4 saalon mein'jab jab teri bauji apni medicines skip ker diya karte the'mann mein yahi khayal aataa tha..agar tu hoti to inki daant lagati aur inhe samjhati..time se medicine lene k liye'tears finally made their way out from her eyes..but this time Nupur's eyes too filled with them and slowly were pouring out'

Mr.Bhushan..carressing her head:Tere bina hum to bas saanse le rahe the..jab aulad apne maa-baap se alag ho jaati hain to bahut dard hota hain ab to tu bhi samjh sakti iss dard ko maa jo hain'beta..hum tujhse bahut pyar karte hain..aur hamesha teri khushi ki hi dua ki hain'

Mrs.Bhushan:Ab mein khush hoon meri bacchi ko finally uska pyaar uski khushi milne waali hain'

Mr.Bhushan with heavy heart,"Aur kal tu mujhe hamesha k liye chod k  chali jaayegi'"

Nupur..clutching his hand..:Bauji apne sasural jaaungi per apne maayke ko chod k nahi jaaungi..iss baar aisa kuch na hone dungi mein'by the time she couldn't control her tears and hugged her father showering her pain'and emotions'

Mr.Bhushan:Bas baccha nahi rote..pagli'rone k din gaye tere'ab nahi 

Mrs.Bhushan:Haan puter ab tere hasne k din..zindagi jeene k din hain'aur haan itna hamesha yaad rakh hum tujhse bhale hi kitne naraaz ho jaaye per humara pyar nahi kahatm ho sakta tere liye samjhi'

Nupur'hugging her..:Jaanti hoon Maa'.

Mr.Bhsuhan:Acha ab tu so jaa'bahut raat ho gayi hain..kal vese bhi bahut kaam hain..kal meri gudiya raani ki shaadi hain'

Mrs.Bhushan:Tu Araam kar..


Nupur:Ji'Acha Maa..Shriya ko bhej dogi kya'aaj uske saath sona hain mujhe..

Mr.Bhushan:Mein bejhta hoon usko'

They went from her room'she wiped her tears and made herself at a comfortable position on the bed'

On the other side Mayank-Benji-Samrat were having conference call'

Mayank:Benji lawyer ko shaadi k next din subh bula lena..

Benji:Haan tu tension na le'

Samrat:Haan aur vese bhi mujhe 2-3 days mein shift bhi karna hain'to acha hoga wedding ka kaam jald se jald kahtam ho jaaye'

Mayank:Mein bhi soch raha hoon tere saath shift ho jaaun vese bhi mera business ab vohi shift ho gaya hain aur Shriya ko education bhi achi milegi'

Samrat:Best hain..fir dono saath saath ghar dhundh lenge..

Mayank:Sure..mein apne agent se bolta hoon do ache ghar dhundhne ki..tu apne office ki location bata de..usi k aas pass ka dekh lega vo..

Benji:Mayank apne agent se keh ker..teen ghar dhundhne ko bol de..aur ek jo hopital k pass ho..

Mayank:Kyu'

Benji:Kyunki'mujhe bhi wahan k hospital se call aayi hain aur soch raha hoon Diya ki delivery bhi ache jagah se ho'

Samrat:Ye to best hain..

Mayank:Bahut hi acha'

Samrat:School mein dhundhonga dono bachoo ka..

Mayank:Done'

Samrat:Acha mein chalta hoon..Shriya ko uper Nupur k pass chod k anaa hain..

Mayank:Okay Bye Goodnight

Benji:GoodNight..!!!


The call ended Samrat called out Shriya,"Shriya'chalo'"

Shriya:Aayi chachu chalo'"

They reached room'Nupur instructed Shriya to brush her teeth while Samrat shared some words with her

Samrat:Nupur

Nupur:Haan'

Samrat:Dekh tu mujhe best friend samjhti hain na'

Nupur:Ofcourse Sam'

Samrat:Raat ko koi bhi problem ho mujhe ya Gunjan ko uthane mein bilkul bhi hestitate mat karna'humara room is just adjacent to yours'koi bhi baat ho..bas awaaz laga dena..we're here..

Nupur..assuring him..:Jaanti hoon..mein thik hoon'fir bhi agar mujhe kuch ajeeb laga I'll call you or Gunjan'

Samrat:Chal take care and Goodnight..

Nupur:Night Sam..

He left the place'and Nupur sat on her position back thinking how lucky she is to have Mayank and such friendship in her life'

Hope you Like it



Edited by shafy_MN - 09 July 2013 at 12:06pm

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Posted: 07 July 2013 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
Here is the part
see above

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Ohh this was jst fab..
Lvd it
Hayee mujhe bhi emotional kr diya..
Main b 1week m hostel ja rhi hoon na

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Bery nive upfate . Contimue soom

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nice update

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