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Mayur Love Never Looses#4 Note/Pg-100 (Page 22)

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 12:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shafy_MN

hamu..
there is a surprise for you

M waiting for it..

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awesome updt
loved mayur moments & dresses
cont soon
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Love Never Looses

Part 65

Hey Ya... 

[
Light falls on the group of girls and boys'
]

Hey Ya...

[
They do some steps'joing their hands at a side and than throwing it in air..
]


 Hey Ya Heeriye Sehra Baandh Ke Main Toh Aaya Re
Hey Ya Doli Baarat Bhi Saath Mein Main Toh Laaya Re 

[
Mayank appearing between the group..coming in the center and front of the group..doing steps similar to them'
Indicating to Nupur'
]

Hey Ya...
 Hey Ya Heeriye Sehra Baandh Ke Main Toh Aaya Re
Hey Ya Doli Baarat Bhi Saath Mein Main Toh Laaya Re 

[
Showing the imaginary sehra around his head'.signally Nupur it's just for her..Shriya sitting beside her..was smiling widely..seeing her father dancing..and singing..while Nupur still try to maintain her stern face..but internally she was getting effected..
]
 
Ab Toh No Hota Hai Ek Roz Intezaar

[
A sudden curve appeared on her face but she overcome it'
]

Soni Aaj Nahi Toh Kal Hai Tujhko Toh Bas Meri Honi Re

[
Samrat came to her..he pulled her hand..and jerkly pushed her towards Mayank..

She collided with him..but soon straighthen herself..not getting drown in his eyes'.while he sang these lines for her..dancing with the group..
]


Tenu Leke Main Javanga, Dil Deke Main Javanga' 
Tenu Leke Main Javanga, Dil Deke Main Javanga'

[
He came towards..showing her that he'll pick her up..and will take her with him..while she ran away from hi and hid behind Mrs.Bhushan showing down thumps up sign that she she won't come..

He took it as a challenge'
]

Hey Ya... Hey Ya...

[
The group came to her..shocking her for a moment..and performed some of the steps to her'
]

Aa Keh De Zamane Se, Tu Mere Ishq Ki Hai Daastaan

[
 He took the opportunity and pulled her towards him..with an impulse she hold his shoulder in order to protect herself from falling..while her eyes..were gazing floor not meeting his'
]

Hey Ya... Hey Ya...

[
The group came from behind dancing on the tune..
]

O Jaaniya Keh De Bahaane Se

[
He held her chin between his fingers..and pulled her face to him'enabling her look into his eyes'but she soon shifted her gaze as she knew she'll be drown in them in no time
]

Main Tera Jism Hoon, Tu Meri Jaan

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She left him..and was going to other directin..when he pulled her wrist making her back to collide him..his hot breath was falling on her shoulder and ear'sending down her spine'
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Kuch Na Chupa

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She left him again and ran to elders
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Mushkilon Se Milta Hai Aisa Sona Pyar

[
Mayank indicated Samrat..and again he pushed her towards him..she collided with him..while he held her from waist tightly..
]

Soni Cheez Tere Jaisi Na Mujhko Na Mujhko Khoni Re

[
He was singing with so much love filled voice..he truly loved her..and do not want to loose her in any way..and was clearly depicting from his voice..from his eyes..
]


Tenu Leke Main Javanga, Dil Deke Main Javana' 
Tenu Leke Main Javanga, Dil Deke Main Javana'

[
Before she could react'he grabbed her from her knees..and put her on her shoulder'little dancing with group..soon he left..her..leaving her blushed all while..she ran from there standing behind Gunjan wholly smiling to herself'
]



Jaan Aise Na Tadpa Ke Dekh Le Madhbhare Andaaz Se


[
He noticed how she is teasing him  now'he pleaded her to forgive him and immitate sorry expression to her'
]

Hey Ya... Hey Ya...

[
The group came from behind of Nupur..surprsing her again making her legs to move towards centre of hall towards Mayank..
]

O Jaan Tu Awaaz Ko Apni Aa Mila Ab Meri Awaaz Se

[
He grabbed her shoulder from back..sending shivers..in her body and closely..said lines in her ear'making her heartbeat to rum at a pace..
]

Are Haan Keh De Haan

[
He rotate her'making her to take circles..and move from there..
He glanced where she had been
]

Kar Diya Hai Tune Mujhko Yun Bekaraar

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While his eyes were searching her..he heard these lines from her'she was singing indicating to him'
]


Maahi Keh Diya Duniya Se Main Teri Main Teri Ho Gayi Re

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She rotates on her toes..screaming to the world that she is only his'while he smiled seeing her accepting his apology and love'
]


Tere Naal Mein Aavaangi, Sasooral Mein Jaavaangi

[
She went behind Shilpa Aunty..and said these'lines..shyly'when Mrs.Sharma pushed her to him..
]



Hey Tenu Leke Main Javanga, Dil Deke Main Javanga
Hey Ya... Hey Ya'

[
Both of them danced'he picked her up in his arms..and finally said'he will takr her now'with him..while she willingly accept it'
]


 The song finished..he put her down on her feets..by  the end of the song..there was only smile on their face..a smile came from heart..depicting how much happy moment is this..

Samrat:Wow..Dude'Now ladies and gentle..all put your hands together for the  couple'

Shriya came running to Mayank-Nupur they  sat down on their knees..and she hugged both of tightly saying,"App dono to great ho.."

Mayank-Nupur in union:Thank you'

Just than light went out...everyone became how come this happen...Gunjan led everyone to side...and made Mayank and Nupur to settle...down..

"Ye achanak se light kese chali gayi Mayank.."

"Pata nahi Nupur.."

"Mujhe bahut darr lag raha hain.."

"Fiker na karo..mein hoon na..Shriya...kahan ha.."

She started panicking.."Shriya..pata nahi abhi yahi to thi..".

Just than a flash of light appeared on the centre of the hall showing shadows of two person instead of person I should say children...with a posture..

Just than music begin and everyone could able to see their face...just than Gunjan and Suhani came infront of Mayank and Nupur blocking their view...

Nain sagaai ho gayi bajjan dholakiyaan
Shaguna di rut aa gayi bajjan dholakiyaan

They danced few steps hiding the children behind them...

Ambaran de chand naal taare nach de
Jaddo nach diye tere naal kanware jach de
Jaddo nach diye tere naal saare nach de

They revolve around moved from the place...seeing a girl covering her face with red dupatta was standing their..facing her back to them..matkaoing her sweet small waist and suddently another one appear both of them seems to be of same age she was dressed in boy..wearing jeans and a kurta ...

Nachne te tere munde kar de clap
Bach ke rahi na koi kare kidnap

she came infront shaking her shoulder..she was Aanvi dancing with a girl...Mayank and Nupur and the other's were all amazed seeing this avtar of Aanvi..and also how gracefully she was dancing but everyone specially Mayank and Nupur were curious who is the girl in the duppatta dancing with Aanvi..

O...

Nachne te tere munde kar de clap
Bach ke rahi na koi kare kidnap
Tera sona roop kanwara piece hai diamond da


She clapped her hands with a girl..still her face wasn't being visible..Aanvi came and hugged her from behind..immitating the words into actions...All were amazed dancing her so nicely...but the main of attraction was the Girl who had covered her face in dupatta..
She showed her sign which depict she looks awesome...

Suit tera lal rang da.. rang da
Paranda tera saanu dangda.. dangda
O minnataan hazaar karke.. karke
Ho munda tera dil mangda.. 

They shake their legs together...dancing high on engery.doing a little bhangra sort of...

Suit tera lal rang da.. rang da
Paranda tera saanu dangda.. dangda
O minnataan hazaar karke.. karke
Ho munda tera dil mangda.. 


They danced do some steps...with each other...Aanvi holds her dupatta such that it couldn't able to remove her dupatta well...and than hold  her paranda depicting the words of the song...with equally good expressions...


Haaaye..

Aanvi step aside and the girl...who was dancing with her covering her face  raised  her hands still showing her back to everyone..


Nachne pe mere munde karde clap
Gaaun main jo, beech mein ye karte hain rap

Still not anyone..she clapped her hand to a side..and than show a rap sign...through her finger's on other side..

Mera sona roop kanwara piece hai diamond da


She slowly removed her duppatta keeping it side turning herself..shocking everyone..specially Mayank-Nupur to the core..because the girl was none other than our cute Shriya...she was full in song...but her this avtar had actually left specially her parent's in a huge shock...

Suit mera lal rang da.. rang da
Paranda mera jaave dangda.. dangda
Ho minnataan hazaar karke.. karke
Munda mera dil mangda.. 

They followed the same steps..enjoying to their fullest..doing a little bhangra...

Suit mera lal rang da.. rang da
Paranda mera jaave dangda.. dangda
Ho minnataan hazaar karke.. karke
Munda mera dil mangda.. 


Gunjan shaked Nupur through her shoulders asking her through her actions what -happened she came out of her shock..and negately shook her head..admiring her daughter who is dancing so beautifully...She looked to Mayank who was equally very shocked..she brought him...to the earth back...he looked to her...so much wanted to convey ...but already understood what's going in his heart..he was equally amazed to see his daughter doing dance for them..it was really overwhelming for them...their eyes already got moist.not only she is dancing...but also..dancing beautifully...


Ho...
Rabba mere yaar nu nazar lag jaave na
Hone wale pyaar nu nazar lag jaave na
Rabba mere yaar nu nazar lag jaave na

Aanvi was nazr utaroing of Shriya while she blushed like an hindi film heroine...bringing a smile on her parent's face..


Kangna.. Haathon mein dance kare kangna
Sajna.. Desi romance kare sajna


She showed her kangna...and made her knuckles to clap with Aaanvi's knuckles..than hugging Aanvi from side...


Ho tera kajla jo dekha dil machala ho teekhe naino waliye..
Lage tera hi roop kanwara ho phoola di aye daaliye


Aanvi...rubbed her hands near her heart depicting the lines..where Shriya...twisted her waist..and than throwing a flying kiss to Aanvi leaving her parent's flaggbestered..


Suit tera lal rang da.. rang da
Paranda tera saanu dangda.. dangda
O minnataan hazaar karke.. karke
Ho munda tera dil mangda.. (x2)

Nachle.. mera tu hath pakad nach le
O rakh le.. dil mera aaj abhi rakh le


They both hold their hand..and do few steps...Aanvi put her hand on her heart and forward it to Shriya..while she passed her flying kiss...

Ho main to mar gayi
Jaadu kaisa kar gayi teri manmaaniyaan
Maine ankhiyaan ye tujh pe hi rakhiyaan mere dil janiya


She does some steps..near her eyes..saying her eyes will be on hers only..

Suit tera lal rang da.. rang da
Paranda tera saanu dangda.. dangda
O minnataan hazaar karke.. karke
Ho munda tera dil mangda.. (x2)


She flowed her suit in air...and duptta too...and than moving her pranda from here to there...ans than they does little bhnagra...encouraging everyone to clap for them..

[THE SONG

]

Aanvi and Shriya performed beautifully..unexpected to anyone...they were just awesome...dancing at such a age that too beautifully...specially for sangeet of her parent's were making everyone's heart warm..the girls were enjoying their dance to the fullest..giving full justice to it...thei scted...accordinginly...to the lyrics..where Aanvi behave like a man...in the song..Shriya was doing her latkas and jhatkas..making everyone to fall on her each latka..she was showing fake nakhreas..like in the song...all in all fully enjoying it...

They all were shock..well technically speaking not all except Gunajn and Diya everyone was surprised...They both reached to the couple Mayank-Nupur..hugged them...Shriya hugged her Dadda where Aanvi hugged her Maasi..they both were so overwhelemed..Mayank hugging both the girls..kissing both of them on their cheeks..and again hugging Shriya said,"Thank you much..Baby...but aapne dono ye sab..I have no words.."

She asked in her innocent voice,"Aap dono ko pasand ayaa..."Nupur said ..kissing her on her cheek,"Pasand ..mujhe to bahut bahut acha laga..aapne Mamma-Dadda k liye..kiya...baccha..mera...itna sab kuch..kese ker liya aur Mamma ko bataya bhi nahi..."..she said"Vo kya hain na Mamma Gunjan Maasi kehti hain sulpize waali jo smile hoti hain vo sabse alag aur bali hoti hain..aul mein vo smile dekhna chahti aap dono k face per..jese Dadda mujhe sulpize dete hain vese hi mene aap dono ko diya...but aap dono to yaha per lo rahe ho..mene to smile lana chahti thi...".

Mayank hugged her again not before placing another kiss on her cheek and said,"Mera Baccha ye to khushi k aansu hain...".Nupur too joined him,"Hum bahut bahut khush hain humari Shriya ne humare liye ye liya...".They both were so whelemed hugged both the girls tightly thanking them hundreds of time..Samrat too came there..when Aanvi asked him,"Daddy aapko kesa laga.."...He hugged her and said kissing her cheek," bahut bahut bahut acha..mujhe nahi pata tha meri Aanvi itni talented hain...".She said hugging her father,"Thank you Daddy..I love you..."."I love you too beta..".They broke the hug and he hugged Shriya too equally kissing her on her cheek and complementing her dance...Now everyone..from Benji to their grandparents came and hugged them...when Benji asked,"Acha bacho ye to batao ye sab plan kese kiya..."

Gunjan said cutting him,"Mein batati hoon..inhone ye sab aaj hi prepare kiya hain..subh se ker rahe hain...actually aaj subh dono mere pass aaye aur bole ki inhe bhi dance item present karna hain..apne Maasi-Chachu aur Mamma-Dadda k liye.."

Benji:Fir

Diya:Fir Kya...fir hum soch hi rahe the...ki TV per ye gana play hua aur humne soch liya ki hum isper dance krenge..fir mene aur Gunjan ne in dono ko kuch steps sikhaye..aur poori din practise ker ker ker k..ye log ye present ker sake..."

Benji:To bataya kyu nahi...

Gunjan:Kyunki..surprise ka maza hi alag hota hain...Shriya ne jo kaha suna nahi...dekho ab kese Mamma Dadda ki godd mein beth ker..khush hain..in ke face per jo smile hain..vo har khushi se badi hain..ye surprise isliye tha...purani wali badi wali Smile laani thi use apne Mamma-Dadda per...Beji said admiring them,"Mayank sahi kehta hain..she is truely an angel...jo hum sab ki zindagi mein khushyian laayi hain..aur sabse zaayeda apne Maa-Papa k liye..aakhir unhe ek jo ker rahi hain...

They all were so touched seeing the love of them..and just prayed to god..that now no more bad to happen  and bring only happiness in their life...

Hope you Like it..



Edited by shafy_MN - 07 July 2013 at 12:22pm

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 12:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gopi06

awesome updt
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cont soon
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Di, practically Aj tumne meri first position le li hainGeek

Awww... Mayank sang and danced for Nupur... Akhir wo Nupur ko mana hi liya apne saath chalne ke liye... Well Maine to bola hi tha ke Mr. Mayank Sharma ke charms se koi nahi bach sakti, wo irresistible hainBlushing

What was that, Shriya dancedShocked Awww...my baby is so cute.. Apni Mamma-Dada ko kitna achcha surprise diya and mujhe bhi... Main to bilkul shocked rah gayi..

Mr. Sharma thoda sambhal ke, Shriya ki ye jalwa dekh ke abhi se uski liye rishta ana shuru na ho jayeTongue

Di, I really loved the surprise... Thanks for it...Big smile

Continue soon and thanks for the pm..
Looovvveee you*hugs*, muuuah!!


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