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Mayur Love Never Looses#4 Note/Pg-100 (Page 10)

ratibob007 Senior Member

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Nice update.
Congrats for the 4th thread.

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shafy_MN IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Humayra

Mai moody kaise hui?? Reports nahi ayi, may be kal ayegi.. Choro report ka naam bhi maat lo.. Waise hi Ammu report ki ratt laga kar rakhi hain...

teri fiker hain isilye..
vese tere liye ek good news
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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Humayra

Wooo.. Samajh gayi... 

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ratibob007

Nice update.
Congrats for the 4th thread.

shafy_MN IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:26pm | IP Logged

Love Never Looses

Part 63

The Haldi day

There was lots of hustle bustle in both Mayank and Nupur's house'Samrat was explaining the decorator to how to decorate the full house'.while Nupur's mother was making halwa..for everyone'few of guest have been arrivted ..Gunjan was giving instruction to Shriya ans to welcome guest and was also helping Mrs.Bhushan..Mr.Bhushan was talking to the tent and caterters'about their preparation'

It was jovilat time for everyone' Nupur was so much overwhelemed..that they had prepared everything for their wedding'..

Shriys was playing with Aanvi..when Nupur called her up..and said,"Shriya chalo beta ready ho jaao'"

Shriya:Itni jaldi Mamma'.

Nupur:Beta haldi ka function shuru hone wala hain'


Nupur:Mein apni doll ko khud ready karungi' a sad tone..:But mein pehnongi kya' thinking to socha hi nahi'

She made a sad face'when Nupur smirks..and presents  a packet'

Shriya a surprise expression..:Ye kya hain'

Nupur'grins to herself..:Khol k dekho'

She opened the packet..and beautifull  yellow coloured suit with a little curve at it's ends having net seleves..and silver embroidery'looking'awesome'..

Her mouth hung huge opened..seeing the dress'

Nupur:Kesi lagi'

Shriya:Ye mere liye hain'

She nodded her head in affirmation'realizing that it's for her'her smile broadens and she instantly hugged her mother tightly..before placing a kiss on her cheek,"Thank you Mamaa'thank you so much..I love much'"

Nupur:I love you too shona..!!!Chalo Mamma aapko tayiyaar kar deti hain'

She smiled hugely..while..Nupur dressed  up Shriya'in her suit..making her hair open and a small that she don't have problem in handling her hair'she made her wore few bangles'with the combination of yellow and silver'

Shriya was all happy by the time when her mother was making her ready she feel happy..and was smiling hugely showing how much she is happy'

Nupur:Hogayi aap ready'

"Mamaaa'..mein kesi lag rahi hoon'."

Nupur..kissing her on her cheek..:Bilkul doll lag rahi ho'. doll'

Nupur:Haan doll'

She kissed on her cheek and ran to she was calling her for playing'..she showed her dress to Aanvi too who also praises'she rushed to her Nanu and Nani'

"Nanu..Nanu'bata mein keshi lag lahi hoon'"

Mr.Bhushan..carressing her cheek:"Bilkul pari lag rahi hoo'."

"Thank you Nanu'.Naniii'bata na mein keshi lag lahi hoon'"

Mrs.Bhushan:Aww..mera bacha bahut sunder..putting a black mark behind her neck and said'"kisi ki nazar na lage mere bache ko'"

While she showed her teeth to her'



Shriya:Ye kya hain pointing to the packet she is handling'

Gunjan:Mamma ki dress hain..Ab aap ready  ho gaye ho to..ab Mamma ko bhi ready kar lete hain'

Saying she moved to Nupur's room while Shriya resume her work.. whatsoever she was playing with Aanvi..

Gunjan:Nupur'.ye le..

Gunjan handed her a packet..when she looked at her in surprise and asked,"What is this Gunjan'"

Gunjan:Dulhan raani..aapki Haldi ki dress.will you please dress up fast bahut kaam hain'.

Nupur..smiling :As you say Mam'

Gunjan:You get ready mein Samrat ko bhejti hoon..Mayank k ghar se haldi le aaye'.

Nupur:Hmm..saying she move inside washroom to get ready for her haldi'.

Gunjan:Samrat Mayank k ghar se haldi to ke aao'.

Samrat:Haan jaa raha hoon'He called Shriya 'Shriya'.

Shriya..runnung towards him and said,"Yes Chachu'" milne chalogi'.

Shriya'screaming on the top if her voice':Sachiii

Samrat..smiling to himself seeing her excitement:Haan baba Sachiii'

Gunjan:Samrat tum bhi na'acha thik hain'tum Shriya ko le jaao'.mein aur tak Nupur to taiyaar karte hain'


Shriya:Mausi..hum jaldi aa jayenge'.

Gunjan:Okay Darling'!!!

Soon Samrat and Shriya drove towards'.Mayank's house'.Before Samrat could open the door of car'..Shriya herself opened it.. but since her little body doesn't have that much strength to push the door  aside she said in struggling mode,"Chachu kholo na'"

Samrat:Khol hi to raha hoon..ab tumko sabr nahi hain to mein kya karu'."

He came out of the car moved to her and opened the gate for her'she instantly jumped out of it' and ran towards the gate'saying,"Chachu jaldi chalo'"

Samrat:Haan baba'aa raha hoon'ruk to jaa..

He came to her..and both of them proceed towards the door'the house was getting decorated with flowers and lightings'she excitedly said to Samrat while walking towards the door,"Wow..Chachu ghar kitna sundel lag raha hain na'."

Samrat:Hmm..vo to hain aur ho bhi kyu na..aapke Mamaa..Dadaa ki shaadi jo hain'

Shriya:Right Chachu'

They entered the house to see that there lot of ladies..surrounding someone..and her Dadda ...was sitting in between the hall in the center on a small stool wearing white  kurta payjama'and was smiling to his heart..she immediately left Samrat's hand and ran to him screaming on the top of her voice,"Dadaaa."

Mayank's attention abruptly shifted to the voice coming'signalling him the arrival of his daughter..he looked to the direction from where the voice was see his daughter was coming towards him..running'.he spread his arms'and she instantly'went in it..he envolped her within him..while other's were standing and admiring the father-daughter love'

Mayank..breaking the hug..:Shriya..kesa hain mera baccha..kissing her on her cheek'

Shriya..giggling..:Mein bahut achi hoon Dadaa..but yahan per kya ho raha hain'.

Mayank:Meri haldi ki Taiyaari'

Suddenly his eyes fall on Shriya's dress'he looked at her properly..and the smile on his face which was lingering when he saw her broadens seeing her carrying such a beautifull dress..and said her while kissing her cheek again,"Bahut sunder lag rahi hain..bahut bahut achi..tu doll hain..meri doll'.

Shriya:Mene bhi Mamaa..ko yahi kahan Dadaa'ki mein to apne Dadda ki doll hoon'

Mayank:Ek dum correct..

Saying he pinch her nose...

Hope you Like it..

Edited by shafy_MN - 29 June 2013 at 12:01pm

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-Paulomi- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
I'll not comment it is your punishment for not pming me the 62 nd chapterAngry

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Humayra IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
Lo ji aa gaye hum MayUr ke haldi attend karne... Wo bhi time par...Big smile

Di, tumne update kar diya, but tumne to kahi thi ke tum update kal dogi, well it's 12:50 here so, practically it's kalLOL

Awww...Nupur ne apni doll ko tayar kiya..

Shriya kitni cute hain... Sab se puch rahi hain ke wo kaisi lag rahi hain.. Apni Mamma-Dada ke shadi mein usse ek dam best dekhni hain...

Shriya kitni betab hain apni Dada se Milne ke liye..

Yup, she's doll, her Dada's beautiful doll...

Nupur ki haldi and meri sangeet ki dress ke liye I'm waiting...

Continue soon and thanks for the pm..
Looovvveee you*hugs*, muuuah!!

Edited by Humayra - 26 June 2013 at 12:54pm

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shafy_MN IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Paulomi-

I'll not comment it is your punishment for not pming me the 62 nd chapterAngry

aisa mat ker paulo..
sorry yaar...

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