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One rainy day... Kriyaansh and Swaron OS (Page 7)

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Posted: 16 July 2013 at 3:37am | IP Logged
Wow Deetha..
Maine ye OS pehle kiun nahi parhi..
It just took me to a different world..The world of KriYaansh which u presented in this OS.
It was Amazing..
Loved to see ur OS after a long time..

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Posted: 11 August 2013 at 2:26am | IP Logged
awesome story deetha..
beautifully penned n emotions were great... d way u showed 1 hating rain before marriage n 1 enjoyinh it.. but after divorse d role reversal was beautiful said.. n d way u showed d love each had n s not able to b away from each other n d 2-3 weeks of separation made them let go of their ego was nice... d interaction as if they don know each other was nice followed by last line that they said they cant b changed was nice...
both versions had different feel to it...

ps: really very sorry for late comment was busy n rarely came online..
Rictusempra Goldie
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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
woww dii...!! this was just too beautiful...!!Clap loved the way u portrayed their emotions... NICE..!!Smile
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Posted: 22 November 2013 at 7:13am | IP Logged
superb
loved it
Kriyaanshholic IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 04 February 2014 at 3:03am | IP Logged
Awww such a beautiful os
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Posted: 28 February 2014 at 5:34am | IP Logged
Awesome!!! Beautifully penned!!!
Pehle its arranged marriage!! Fir pyaar hua!!! Fir divorce!!!
Par ek dusre se door rehkar realize hua ki dey cnt live widout each oder!!!
D whole story...from start till end!!! Was just captivating!!!
N d end is just soo grt!!!
Aakhir mein dono saath ho jaate hain!!!
N d last lines r just so awesome!!!
Both understood n said d same thing together!!!
Lolzz!! Eyelock ho gaya hoga...par humko pata nahi chala!!!
Dono ko yaad bhi nahi ki divorce kyun liya!!!!
Dono bade baap ki bigadi hui aulad hai!!!
Awesome!!!

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