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One rainy day... Kriyaansh and Swaron OS (Page 5)

ToujoursPur IF-Dazzler

Joined: 14 January 2012
Posts: 4201

Posted: 26 June 2013 at 9:34am | IP Logged

i really loved how it went---

but the suspense part was good no doubt----but it seemed like you brought strangers 2gether.

i liked your writing---but i think you are a much much better writer.

i dont mean to criticise at all----its just that i think sometimes even the writer realises that the reader may not be satisfied----although the write up is good----and thus they need to put post scripts like u did to explain.

but i adored the end----fabulous.

do keep writing and plz pm me when u do?


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-Ocean.eyes- IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 21 January 2010
Posts: 33037

Posted: 26 June 2013 at 10:08am | IP Logged
Its so so so beautiful
loved it deetha
dancersqueen IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 11291

Posted: 26 June 2013 at 10:08am | IP Logged
superb dear...thank u 4 clearing our doubts...
-spongy- IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 20 September 2012
Posts: 43053

Posted: 26 June 2013 at 10:35am | IP Logged

another amazing OS by you..

that too KR and SS version


love these 2 couples

now coming to the OS

it was really unique

and out of the box!!!

really well penned down Clap

thank you for the pm 

do write more

and do pm me Big smile

it was a treat to read.. Goldie

Joined: 14 May 2012
Posts: 1084

Posted: 26 June 2013 at 11:37am | IP Logged
Amazing os.
Beautifully depicted d relation.
Luvd it.
trisha19 Senior Member

Joined: 06 November 2012
Posts: 781

Posted: 26 June 2013 at 11:56am | IP Logged
Beautiful OS...
Gr8 work...Clap
glmorous_diva IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 10875

Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
beautiful nd cute os

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---Priya--- IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 21 August 2009
Posts: 24201

Posted: 26 June 2013 at 9:50pm | IP Logged
Simple yet beautiful OS deetha Hug

I loved how the love for rain changes into hate just coz it reminds him of him love... I loved that first part where they both enjoyed rain and he made her feel the fun in rain...

awesome.. Thumbs Up

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