deetha----
i really loved how it went---
but the suspense part was good no doubt----but it seemed like you brought strangers 2gether.
i liked your writing---but i think you are a much much better writer.
i dont mean to criticise at all----its just that i think sometimes even the writer realises that the reader may not be satisfied----although the write up is good----and thus they need to put post scripts like u did to explain.
but i adored the end----fabulous.
do keep writing and plz pm me when u do?
love--medha
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