Hi daya
Awesome ud! Dutta should have searched for naku
hi starOriginally posted by: twinkle-starHi Daya🤗
Wow...What an awesome update dear...Loved it a lot❤️...Enjoyed reading a lot....Wow...Loved Dutta-Naku's Convo dear...Its really awesome....You described Naku's feelings very well...I loved her confidence.❤️...She don't want Dutta's acceptance just because of the Baby👍🏼...She wants true love from Dutta...Loved baaji-Shrusti's Friendship...This cute little girl is really nice....Jagdap didn't find the truth.😳...Wow...Dutta carried Shrushti..I love his care & concern dear..❤️..He felt something by her touch❤️...Who is that person who sent these letters & flowers to Naku???😲😲😳...Dutta will definitely find him & give some punches on his face...Awe..Can't wait now dear.😳😳..Its really a wonderful update ....Please update soon..😳😳..I'm Eagerly waiting..😳😳..Thank you sooo much for your mindblowing update dear🤗...Take care🤗
Originally posted by: -bharti-Res..
Hi dayaOops! almost missed the bus.. 😳Hey Bharti, Good to see you!Dutta worried of naku,s reaction seein him, basically he,s guilty of his actions n the consequences thereof.. But the reluctant casanova had made it clear for naku from day one of his aversion to commitment.If He knows her in n out, then why hadnt he guaged reason for her sudden disappearance from his life, how reckless of him 😛 Now he,s raged that someone dared to stalk naku? where was he all these days?Lol what stupid mistakes people make because of their stubborn beliefs. His mind would reason that she probably left because of the way things ended...not because she was pregnant...he never wanted anything permanent with her..and when it seemed as though that's where it was heading he bailed...and assumed it was better that way. Now with a stalker his feelings for her sort of play forefront.But Dutta very particular with the secrecy n rightly so.. jagtap pleased with his commitment. Have to wait n watch how long ? Lol..Keeping out of sight is to not raise awareness and warn whom ever is their perp...as for Jagtap's character and his thoughts on Dutta...i guess the next chapter will show you where they all sort of stand with his sudden entrance.So Shrishti the little bundle of joy hasnt let naku forget the man who fathered her, ofcourse its expected she would be carrying his physical n emotional traits atleast to some extent... aww daya the way you describe the mother daughter duo brings out a smile and warmth. Atleast there is no animosity inside her with regards him which is a plus point for reconciliation.To be honest i enjoy writing stories with kids. I remember my second FF had a four year old as well and that was one of my better FF's. So i do like writing their interaction...and yep she's not against the idea of D being a part of Srishti's life.Ooh think of the devil n here he is, the shock surprise, the confusion was beautifully written... naku,s racing heart, no wonder she fell for his charms then n looking at her situation if he remains any longer she,s a goner. But i was waiting to see any hint of feelings in him, blank 😲 I gues He has it all covered up behind his under cover job lol.. It was amusing how he was trying to force himself in n naku hoping against hope he would somehow vanish n inbetween you have the little one asking her mum to move aside .. Lol.. If naku is blanked out by dutta, dutta is blanked out by shrishti, he had no answers, only questions... Its hard to imagine what a person goes throu when he/she comes face to face with a child they didnt know existed. Naku has no respite, its raining surprises..😃 Baji barging in n moreso his familiarity with his curly locks., Thats a very "cute na" momentLol you got it ! Naku tho reacted as she always had to him, didn't want to go through everything all over again. Dutta on the other hand is too stunned and confused and in wonderment about Srishti that it sort of surpassed his feelings about seeing Naku. Also the reason he was there is a serious matter too. And Srishti being the innocent one acted as their ice breaker...So Baji is naku,s childhood friend ? Yet he let her disappear ?? 😲 But he,s all ears n eyes with the current situation.. quick to notice, his observation of nisha saxena,s expressions does raise suspicion, good goin baji..Baaji did try to find her...but failed...and tho they were childhood friends...Baaji wasn't always around, he's ex-military...he was gone more so than not...and their lives independent tho they're good friends...They're professionals lol they have to keep all their senses alert and mind sharp...anyway this little tid bit was added by me for much later actually. Its just sort of setting a foundation.Oh what a palava 😆 the biological parents having a tuff time answering curly locks simple question "what should i call you" poor little thing or should we sympathise with the adults lol...haha probably sympathize with the adults. How do you tell the little one her father just popped out of nowhere😆😆 esp when the father is too stunned with her...Yes, it must have been like bein hit by bullets, those words from naku when he asked if shristi was his... God! I luvd the simple question, "is shristi mine" Its so profound..Its point blank question... but the fact is he wasn't expecting this sort of turn in his life. He's been determined to live alone...enjoy his time but ultimately stay unattached and alone and then baam he has a little girl he didn't know about.Hain? Dreams of House full of children ?? Lol .. which century he belongs to, enjoyed his time with women ahem ahem.. 👎🏼 yaar daya this piece of info is hard to digest, he sounds more like a M&B male or a james bond, a playboy for sure.. He is uttering all the wrong words for starters, as if a daughter was some kind of a burden, an obligation... Instead of rejoicing or atleast regretting for missing out on the joy of becoming a father, or for inflicting unintentional mental, physical, financial trauma on naku.. she,s has had to deal so much all alone. 😔Lol not literally a house fill of children but just the idea of having a home a family his own kids used to be something he wanted...now it isn't hence the whole shock and confusion and inability to think straight what it all means. He's not rejoicing, that's true...but its just a matter of time. Normally one does not react well to change and this is a huge one for him. Something he didn't plan for his future but voila there it is...he'll come around😉 as for him enjoying his female company...that's more so a defensive mechanism...easier not to get hurt if he's not even expecting much out of it. What is M&B male? lol Bharti maybe its hard to digest because there is a pre-exisiting image for Dutta...one from the show...But whats amazing is that the two were dealing with the whole thing in a mature way, very candid bereft of any display of emotions..Gosh! Shrishti is the target n this stalker is no joker, he means every word which is making things worse than imagined.., oh no, colateral damage.. pakhi mehta,s hurt but heartening to see her calm, unperturbed by the bullet injury.. All the while watching Dutta n his anguish, lot to explain for dutta lol...Yep we have a psycho to deal with and Pakhi will be fine. Dutta tho who knows he's got a little girl who's working to reach that heart of his and succeeded quite easily...just you watch...i have some simple moments between them that speak lots for their relationship...Daya would luv to see our dutta drop his cool cucumber exterior, a peek a boo into his vulnerabilities... But thank you for a brilliant update, waiting eagerly for the next. Take care 👏And maybe you shall get a peek 😛 thank you so much for reading and commenting. I love hearing your thoughts :) Glad you're liking the UDs ...!Take care...phir milenge chalte chalte
Originally posted by: meriyaarRES
edited:OMG that was sooo effing AMAZING!so much happened, seriously loving this story!You are just pure genius!I love how much of a wonderful person Dutta is, he's so understanding <3Sorry for late comment 😳update soon,take carexoxo
Originally posted by: stranger2rosehey daya , wonderful update ...really loving the pace of this story , as you said everything shall be point blank so indeed it is . One thing that i forgot to mention in my last comment, the fact that dutta thought that the little girl could be his daughter impressed me a lot ..i hate it when a woman has to prove to a man that the child belongs to him ..its so demeaning ..i mean the guy may go around and sleep with anyone but it is the girl's responsibility to prove that the child is his ..ridiculous ..therefore i am so happy that despite of dutta having so many flings still at once he thinks that child might be his ...thanks daya
okay so tasha have met and their meeting was beautifully written ..love this stubborn and strong headed nakku ...she has self respect and is not throwing herself at the man she loves...now who is this creep who wishes to eliminate this beautiful girl of tasha's ? the father daughter scene was also heart touching ..very well donewaiting for next update
Originally posted by: dilse14Hi daya
Awesome ud! Dutta should have searched for naku
when he realized he had feeling for her'.srishti had to grow without dad'dutta has to deal with two women naku & curly😆..plus stalker..story is awesome ..ud soon
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