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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 5:36am | IP Logged
hi daya
awesome start feeling bad for nisha  .. hurt and lonely her whole life...
very well writing  great story thank youSmile
continue soon Smile



Edited by afi7861 - 15 September 2013 at 5:42am

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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 7:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by afi7861

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Afzal Bhai!!!ConfusedConfusedConfused
What Happened to your ID???...ConfusedConfusedConfused...




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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 10:40am | IP Logged
hi daya
awesome start...is smarty confused or there some mystery...awesome description of feeling of nisha...continue soon...regards uvi
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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 11:11am | IP Logged

Hi curly locks

After the exciting prologue...most awaited first chapter out...verdict is smashing hit...Smile

It starts with nisha a girl who has been consider nerd all her life ...it's a compliment now proven fact...but sadly she was bullied...her past  has been terrible Ouch

Her father committed suicide...she is confused abt her own sanity...situation isn't helping it...was it a nightmare or actually she saw a body...Ayesha was standing very much alive

Baji is her knight in shining armor...he wants to help her...there is a mystery element...my grey cells are working LOL

Loved the description the way nisha is visualizing thing...it was graphic...I felt I was watching it...awesome writing skill...I m glad u show cased  it ...clap from my end...ud soon Clap

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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 12:19pm | IP Logged

awesome start...feeling bad for nisha...poor girl...hurt and lonely her whole life...dont worry girl you are not crazy...those who dnt believe u are...but our Baaji and team are going to believe you...i like team understood something fishy in the situation...now Baaji will find out the truth...I am liking this Maya...she is herself hurt but still concerned about Nisha...nice girl...poor Naku want to help Nisha but Nisha is running away...hope Nisha understand soon...she can share her feelings with friends...Daya i want Baaji to beat Nisha's ex black and blue...how dare he treated her like that...he was supposed to marry her and he called her crazy and asked her to leave so rudely...Nisha is better off without him...brilliant story...update soon...

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 10:17am | IP Logged
hi daya
awesome SS start and UD
nisha had a very sad past
she doubts herself
something wrong somewhere
baji & dutta help her
pls ud ...i liked it lotSmile

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 8:11am | IP Logged
Awesome first chapter, Daya.Clap

The Romantic Thriller continuesThumbs Up

Many questions and possibilities running in my thoughts...

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 9:57am | IP Logged
I,Me&Myself... is here. on second thoughts.roarrr!
hi mate , me back, read it a while a  ago.. hummhh..
SBHS ~ Chapter 1
Tell you what ,it's been quite sometime  since I delved into the world of investigative fiction..
This story , from what I read in the first chapter, followed by the prologue has all the elements of , murder, mystery, suspense and love of course..
Immediately engaging bits,for me are the familiar  names I know , Dutta/Baji/ Naku/jagtapdada..
Then ,for me come the names of other characters who I have  met for the first time.. so to get to know them and their significance in the story , holds interest for me..
Baji as the PI..  is befitting as it, brings to  fore front, his keen eye, quick, matter of fact mannerism ,ready to go persona.. but he with all this, also is a sensitive, listener which will help him to build on what he feels for Nisha.
Daya ,it was indeed a treat to read  your narration of nisha's panic attack it felt totally credible ,excellently written.
Some name is revealed, Ayesha, whose body Nisha does or does not see ? suspense.. and it does not seem easily solved.. so the wait and watch approach..
But people around her are supportive.. they have bought her account of her rather  incredible story.. but more questions for both Nisha and us..  the dead body  has come alive?
This is turning out to be quite a read pappy.. please continue, writing this fantastically penned SS.. waiting now for chap~2  .. cheers mate.. much love hammie.
 


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